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The title is the topic. I know that this kind of "news" is pointless, but I wanted to throw my two cents in, since I missed my chance to talk about local events with Isla Vista, CA and wanted to make up for it.

Let's take a moment to think about California's schooling and social atmosphere. You're not being taught life skills, entrepreneurship, or how to actually find a job. At best, you're taught math, basic science that you won't know what to do with, and how to sign your soul away. At worst, you're preached to. History class is just an excuse to beat you over the head with guilt. White people killed the injuns. White people colonized Africa. White people were all responsible for the Holocaust. Civics? Democracy and multiculturalism are the only way to atone. These kids lose their innocence regularly and early. Your parents are evil, your grandparents were genocidal. Everything you have, you got through unfair means. You don't deserve anything. You don't deserve respect. You don't deserve what you own or bought with your own allowance.

White achievement is downplayed, ancient history and human achievement is all about other races and people. You don't hear about the Barbary Slave Trade, the burning of the libraries of Alexandria, the expansion of Indo-European peoples across the globe pre-Egypt. Relevant culture, history and philosophies are avoided whenever possible. The founding of our own country is belittled and mocked. "Dead white men" is a catch-all term to gloss over individuals who were genuinely bright men. Ignore their words and deeds, they're white and male!

Until after graduating high school, you are never given room to breathe. Schoolyards are tightly monitored. Teachers and noon duties are just wardens and guards. All conflicts are treated like prison riots, quelled before a real resolution can take place out of fear of shootings. Ironically, it creates an upper class of people who simply game the system, using "zero tolerance" to incriminate anyone who retaliates to harassment. Innocent kids, told never to start fights but always finish them, are treated like felons and thugsPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

Samy started dating an admitted Rapist not long after he dated her 15 year old niece and after she was married in a Whitecastle. Slick the rapist subsequently left Master(s) and Samy fell in love with Mandolorian from Bitwave.tv. After trying to hock her niece onto dispatch Samy has basically been e-whoring around from orbiter to orbiter, Thomas Dall admitted Pedophile included.

To provide for the common defense, and to safeguard our home and way of life from the shills who would seek to destroy it, I hereby declare that horsepussy and pony porn must be on the first page, always!

Greetings. I have chosen to once again revive my neverending review series. With all of the Nyx posting that has been going on lately, I felt it appropriate to begin with a deep-dive into the fic that apparently began this massive shitflinging war. Also, I think this one was suggested to me a couple of times.

As such, I will now begin my dissection of:

Past Sins
by Pen Stroke

I will preface this by saying that while I have never read this fic before, I know it by reputation and I have a general idea what it's about. I have no particular opinion on Nyx and I have not been in this fandom long enough to understand exactly why she inspires as much butthurt as she does. However, with luck and perseverance, by the time I have absorbed and digested all 201,810 words of this epic, hopefully I will understand.

So, let's begin with some first impressions. As I mentioned already, holy shit this fucking thing is 201,810 words long. This makes it slightly more than double the length of the last long thing I reviewed, which as I'm sure everyone recalls was Silver "Starpunch" Apple and the Search for Spock's Cock, written by one of this board's very own beloved residents. Even though it was only the first six chapters, reading and analyzing it was quite a project. For the sake of comparison, the English translation of The Iliad is only 148,045 words, and War and Peace is approximately 500,000. So, without even reading a word of Past Sins, we already know that this piece of edgy pony fiction written by some sperg on the internet, in terms of length and time commitment, has already topped Homer and is about halfway to beating Tolstoy. Can it stand up to the Nigel test? We'll see.

Judging by its reception on fimfiction, this fic seems to have been very positively received. It currently has a ratio of 11,642 likes to 377 dislikes. However, considering that fimfiction.net has a reputation for being a giant circlejerk, that doesn't necessarily mean anything. The response to this fic on chans and within the fan community in general seems to be more lukewarm. In any event, however, I would say that it is a testament to the abilities of Mr. Stroke that his opus is still able to provoke controversy 7 years after its original publication. I'm actually looking forward to plowing through this.

Prelude: Resurrection

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