I made this thread for myself, however, you can still use it. This is where I'm gonna put all my random ideas for stories and write them down.
Essentially, my wish is to fill this thread with a bunch of excerpts from different story ideas I have in one place.
I may even post my planning of stories and other random ideas for how to improve my writing process.
So feel free to share you own excerpts of stories, writing advice, or general ideas for stories here if you feel like, otherwise I'll fill this hopefully with my own stuff.
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>>8015>AII don't follow. What do you mean?
A distant roared turned into a nearby shriek that abruptly stopped.
Every time Summer Rose blinked, everything changed but also not. She felt heavy and the sky? Was in midnight blue so she almost thought she was at the bottom of the ocean. Her body, the landscape around her, and whatever it was that filled the sky were all blurry silhouettes.
Certain realizations pumped pure ice into her heart, well as much as she could realize as her head spun and she struggled to focus. Realizations that, she had just of baking cookies for her family and extended family but now, only one girl remained. Was this girl- Ruby Rose, my daughter, she reminded herself with fiercely. -her only family, but that didn't make any sense, she even remembered that she explicitly invited her extended family as well. Was she being self-depricating because she only had one daughter in her family. But who was her father. Was she adopted? No, she knew she wasn't she remember giving birth... To a.. Baby. Hmm, was this girl the same person as that infant from that memory?
Both had silver eyes, right?
Yes?
Yes.
Yes!
It was. That was her daughter.
Wait, what did she just realize..?
Right, her daughter is... Was... Ruby Rose.... Or Ruby Ose? Pose?
Ruby.
Ruby.
She wanted to remember that, however she feared she might forget. Actually, she knew there was no hope, was there? She would forget it.
I don't want to...
She felt... Sleepy.
I will... I can... I want... ... ... I can't.
"I'm sorry, Ruby," she managed to groan out.
Suddenly, she felt herself sinking and the world grew darker still.
"Ruby."
Unbeknownst to Summer, her silver irises were slowly replaced by grass green color seeping in and spreading out.
Ruby, she thought one last time before she was competently engulfed by the darkness.
The world beyond didn't have time so that world was simply no more and never was as in this new world turquoise pyre burned.
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"Revenant, the search for the relic can wait. Find and capture the girl that did this to Cinder, alive," said a quite beautiful voice despite it coming from the very queen of monsters: Salem.
The Revenant she was referring to sat among the rest of her top servants, excluding ancient grim, that sat at the table.
Revenant was short and had clear curves, indicating that 'it' was a her. She wore a black armor with a white cloak over he shoulders. A helmet obscured her face. A green ponytail sprouted out on the back of the helmet. Out of the holes of the eyes, turquoise flames crawled out.
She nodded.
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Team RJNR entered anCould I not have a 'the' here instead of an 'an'? I ponder this because 'the' is for identifying and now it just a general one but we could say that it's a a specific one just that the reader doesn't understand the context. But then there is no reason not to have 'a' instead, I guess, since it's more general. abandon town. They walked through empty alleyways, expecting grim to jump out at them or, honestly people, despite knowing better. It was probably due to it being a town and they were so used to associating it with a public place that to have one with nobody around was strange and a bit unnerving. They entered an area with no buildings but still surrounded by buildings and just pavement.
I think I wanna try to cut out words like, 'then', 'suddenly', etc. cuz I think they serve no real purpose or that they impact is lost on overuse? I don't know. Just testing is all. Then they she it, As the they got closer to the center of the open area, even the fog that blanketed the town could not stop them from seeing a human figure standing in the center. It looked at them.
They stopped.