/go/ - Golden Oaks

This whole thing is starting to get surreal. Halp, I'm melting.

>>3942
There you go again with that shit, trying to push your own view of me as the "Correct" one. You see me as reddit, because you're reddit, and we all know what liberals like you are like when it comes to projection. Particularly, projecting your own flaws and failings onto someone you desperately want to "Destroy".
Unfortunately for you, the site's staff are redpilled on this site. So while you've gotten me banned from Fimfic, you can't get me banned from here with the same old "Attack man, start shit, call him the problem, blame him for everything, call him the worst, repeat until you dupe someone in power into taking your side" shit.
You exposed yourself to a subreddit for old people.
I don't think there's another way I can put that. I'm sorry to say this, but you're the problem here. I'm banned from Fimfic.net, and reddit. So could you return to the circlejerks you've excluded me from, and leave this site alone?
I know you can't, because you feed off attention and the meaningless "Drama" you start and obsess over, but could you at least try to fuck off? Come on, what was the point of sucking mod cock to get me banned from Fimfic and Reddit if you're only going to follow me here anyway?
You're an Antifa dog here to... What did those leaked Hillary emails from Wikileaks call that thing when dishonest people like you attack me so you can cry foul about me, again?
>>3940
>>3941
Nice, got it. By the way, I was thinking of balancing out the different levels of fighting ability in the Mane Six and letting each one contribute to big fights by giving everypony some kind of superpower when some big superpower-granting event goes off. Including the villains, many of whom will get better/"less fair" powers than the heroes. Everyone's power would generally fit their personality and who they are, but in a way that would help them. Derpy, for example, would get the ability to produce big bubbles that "Wash away" specific stuff on the conceptual level, so if she drops something she's carrying, and it breaks, she can wash away the damage to repair it, as if the cracks were painted on all along. But she wouldn't be able to wash away the object itself, erasing it. Also, I wouldn't just reuse the powers the Mane Six got in the Superhero episode, I'd give them ones that fit the mane six better.

Do you think that would make this story better, or worse?

Also, as for Glimmer… I like the idea of spreading out the scenes with her, and if this was just a slice-of-life thing with no regular physical conflict, I'd do that. But for an action cartoon, she needs to go. She’s too strong, she's too invincible, and something needs to happen to her before the “Silver and Mane Six VS villain of the arc” fights around Ponyville and Equestria really kick off. I don’t want fans to say “Hey, why don’t they just take Glimmer with them to instantly pwn all the bad guys ever?”. This character has no power level limits, she's like the shitty OC the Dungeonmaster's Girlfriend makes and gets away with for reasons everyone at the table knows. She can near-instantly do alone what Celestia and Luna - and the mane six - couldn't(Banish DISCORD, even if only temporarily) and she can defeat Twilight Sparkle multiple times in one day without ever running out of stamina. I'm surprised I'm actually going to say this about another fictional character after how much I hated that character as a kid, but even Itachi from Naruto wasn't this bad.

>>3946
First of, worse. Derpy isn't a unicorn, so giving her powers would be absurd. As for the Mane 6, look at the Season 2 finale; they don't do it up unnecessarily, but everyone's talents are on display. Applejack - as one who bucks apples most every day - is bucking ass, Pinkie is putting her cannon to good use, even Twilight subs as a gatling gun. IMO that scene was pushing it, but at least it wasn't over the top or overdone. What you're suggesting is - as others have pointed out - trying to turn MLP into what it isn't; a shonen-tier series.

As for the rest, get fucked. Time and again you've accused others of what you yourself do on a regular basis, with zero self-awareness. You attempt to speak for others as though you have any credibility, you attempt to distinguish who belongs where which you evidently don't as indicated in >>3920 (and I'm sure you've taken to not back-reading just so you can avoid instances where your statements are rejected) not to mention dismissing the legitimacy of your bans on other sites (just like the jews do). When are you going to get it Nigel, you're the biggest problem in this equation. I admit you're making progress in your creative capacity, but you really should knock off the whole "I belong here and (you) don't" shit.

>>3946

https://youtu.be/L_kmEILl9Kg?t=5m7s

Jason, seeing you shadowboxing with your own paranoia fueled autism against literal strawmen and made up sockpuppets is well and all entertaining, but for your own sake you should just stop. Stop and leave. You dug yourself a grave so deep you should have popped out in china days ago. I am sure you are merely using this site out of habit rather than a conscious decision. Get out of this house. Spirit be gone.

>>3948
>stop and leave
>get out
Don't you start with that shit

>>3946
>Do you think that would make this story better, or worse?

As to this I can't really say. It goes back to what I said earlier in >>3897 about subjective and objective definitions of artistic value. If you look at the first image of Derpy, it's objectively well drawn. However, some fans might find things in this image to object to. Some might not like the idea of sexualizing poners. Some might call attention to the fact that her eyes aren't crossed and it's wrong for the character. Some people might not like the quasi-photorealistic style and think that the MLP characters should always be rendered in the Flash style of the show. These would be subjective criticisms of the work, based on personal taste and opinion. However, the objective quality of the artist's skill can't really be called into question even by people who don't like it; whoever drew this knew what he was doing.

If I were trying to teach you how to draw, and your art resembled the CWC drawing in pic 3, I would be trying to teach you how to technically draw well and would be focusing on things like horse anatomy, proportions, scene composition, lighting, etc; what you ultimately chose to draw once you learned how would be up to you. Once you reach a skill level in any creative discipline where no one can shit on your work for objective technical reasons, that's the point where you can afford to tell haters to fuck off if they don't like it. But you have to reach that level first. If you create something that is objectively bad and contains elements and themes that are likely to be controversial with fans, and you choose to take a combative tone with your critics, you're basically going to get shit on without mercy, which is what has mostly been happening in these threads so far. That's why I want to try to convince you to focus less on what specific elements you want to have in your story for now and more on how to lay it out and tell it, and how to build quality characters.

Whether or not your actual idea is "good" is subjective. When you're writing a fanfiction your primary audience will mostly consist of fans of the canon story, since people who don't like MLP probably won't read fanfiction set in that universe. The more you deviate from canon the more likely you are to get pushback from people who want to read stories that follow the spirit of the original work. However, that is not to say that writing a more transformative work that makes significant changes to the universe is necessarily bad just because some fans wouldn't enjoy it. What is far more important is that the story is well written and well told. An MLP story where Applejack has laser-beam eyes and Rarity is a cyborg with a thirst for human blood would be a huge departure from canon, but you could still make a fantastic story out of it if you constructed and told it well. By contrast, a huge amount of fanfiction has been written that follows the series canon perfectly and is still cringe-inducing and awful, just because the person writing it had no idea what they were doing. Even a stupid idea is salvageable in the hands of a good writer, and even a great idea can fail miserably in the hands of a bad one.

If you want my personal subjective opinion, I tend to agree with >>171363; that it doesn't make much sense to give a character powers that she wouldn't reasonably have. If you're going to have the Mane 6 plus Silver be a party of fighters, it makes technical sense to keep them all at a consistent skill level so they can all participate in battles. However, the problem you've got with these characters is that they weren't originally designed for that type of role, and figuring out fighting abilities for all of them will probably become an awkward task the more grandiose you want your battle sequences to be. For instance, Twilight is pretty easy to level up since her whole character is that she's a strong magic-user to begin with. However, the same can't really be said for Rarity, despite her also being a magic user, as she mostly uses her magic for domestic creative tasks and probably has no interest in learning high-level spells. Fluttershy would be a huge challenge, since it's completely against her nature to even fight in the first place and she really has no combat abilities to enhance, so you'd have to probably give her a weapon of some kind, which she'd look awkward trying to use. If I were writing this, I would probably drop this idea and go a different direction. However, that is not to say that you necessarily should do the same.

I would say your challenge, if you want to pursue this idea, is less a matter of figuring out what abilities to give these characters specifically, as figuring out why they acquire the abilities you choose to give them. That's really what's going to make the difference. Like, let's say just for fun that you decide to mount a gun turret to Fluttershy's back and have Angel Bunny man it like she's a WWI fighter plane. Is it a stupid idea? Very. Funny, but extremely stupid. However, you could still potentially sell it. What you have to think about is Fluttershy's personality and character. What could happen in this world that would make her determined enough to engage in a battle on that level? It would have to be something huge, world-threatening. An evil on the level of Sauron, something awful and dark and destructive enough to make an otherwise docile, loving and gentle pony take up arms to fight for everything she holds dear. If you just say "I'm going to give Fluttershy a machine gun because it would be cool or funny" the audience probably won't buy it, unless you're writing something deliberately parodic or silly, which I don't get the impression is what you want to write.

Focus on learning characterization first; build characters who have genuine motivations to do the sorts of things you want to have them do, then you can focus on what powers you want to give them.

>>3946
>the Glimmer question

If you want to kill her off or get rid of her then by all means do it, as I've said it's your story. My concern is with how you go about it, not whether or not you choose to do it. The mane issue I wanted to bring to your attention is that Chapter 6 of your story is YUGELY unbalanced and bloated, and you really do not even come close to conveying what you are trying to convey. There's just too much stuff dumped into this one area; between the rhetoric and the fight sequence the length of this one scene, as I've pointed out, extends to about half the length of The Great Gatsby. By the time anyone gets done reading this one part they will have probably forgotten the rest of the story. It's like trying to dump too much water into a funnel at once; it gets backlogged and overflows, and most of the content you're trying to feed the reader ends up getting lost.

As I've said, you'll want to move your story in arcs, and focus on one arc at a time, unless you want to treat a certain arc as a subplot and weave it in and out across multiple arcs. I suggested using Glimmer's story as a subplot, but you could just as easily make a separate arc out of her if you want. The important thing is to just approach it correctly. What you basically do in Ch 6 is dump an entire arc's worth of content into a single scene all at once, and it's overwhelming. Everything contained in your argument sequence is everything you want to say about Glimmer, yes? But you say it all literally. You write out all of your thoughts and arguments against her in essay format and put it into quotations. That's not how you go about doing something like this, you have to show rather than tell.

As I've said, in an action story you have to focus on action. You have to keep things flowing and moving, and build tension appropriately. The way you have it, Silver just randomly bumps into Glimmer one day and they instantly fight. Where's the tension there? There is none; you haven't even introduced Glimmer as a character. You have to set up the conflict before you have the epic fight scene. In particular, if you want to have the reader sympathize with Silver and view Glimmer as an antagonist, you have to first set up both of these characters in those respective roles.

You've said your intention with the scene was to redpill people, but the way you have it written atm it's basically a reverse redpill. You have Silver, who for reasons we've gone over is already unlikable as currently written, used as a stand-in for the anti-communist side of the argument. Then, you have Glimmer, who represents the communist side, and who you don't introduce at all or give the reader any initial reason to dislike. You lay out reasons why you think the reader should dislike her during the argument, but you don't give them time to process the information or form an opinion based on their own impressions of Glimmer's actions. Before the argument even starts, you've already poisoned the well against your own side; the reader has no reason to dislike Glimmer and ample reason to dislike Silver, then you have him basically attack Glimmer without provocation. He makes technically reasonable arguments against Glimmer, but they don't resonate emotionally. Arguments are just words that represent beliefs; if you want to convince someone a character is evil, the way to do it is to show that character being evil. Just having another character call her evil won't convince anyone, particularly if they don't like the character who is trying to convince them.

An example of the kind of thing I'm talking about is pic related. If you look into the real story behind this image, you will learn that the two men being lynched were guilty of rape and murder. There was even a third man, also black, accused in this crime who the crowd let go because he was able to effectively argue his innocence, but you never hear that part. Lynching was a common form of frontier justice at the time, and was used against black and white perpetrators. Although racial tension probably added fuel to the fire in this case, the crime was the significant factor here, not the race of the criminals. The photographer who took this picture intended it to show that justice had been done; however the message that people overwhelmingly took away from it was le ebil raysis whypeepo just up and lynched two poor innocent black boys who dindu nuffin. You have to admit that out of context this photo looks pretty bad. This image was the inspiration for a song by Billie Holiday that wound up drawing a lot of public attention to lynchings and helped turn public opinion against whites and racial segregation. To this day this picture is used out of context in school textbooks as an example of the awful and racist things that white people have done, rather than as the example of justice the photographer intended. You have to be careful how you present things and make sure you communicate what you want to communicate.

A way you could handle Glimglam would be to start the Ponyville arc with her as a side character. You have some scenes describing what Silver is up to, told from Silver's perspective; he comes to Ponyville, he's meeting ponies, he's making friends, etc. etc. Then you switch over to Glimmer, show her interacting with Twilight and the others and being friendly, but show her inner thoughts. Make the audience realize she's just faking being reformed, prove that she's evil. Drive the point home, and show, don't tell. Then, by the time Silver confronts her, they will want to see her exposed for her crimes. Build up to the final confrontation, build tension so people are waiting for it to happen. Remember the analogy of Pinkie Pie and the balloon I went over before? That's what you're going to want to do here. Whether you do it in its own arc or spread it out across multiple arcs, the principle is the same.

>>3946
Would be a shame if leddit-sama cycle man was self-aware.
That would almost challenge the idea I'm projecting my ledditness... mhmm...
It's almost like being self-aware is antithetical to the mode of thought that faciliatetes projection, oh my lord, self-regulating critique nooo nooo moooo...

I'm leddit incarnate and I loathe myself for it!
-but let's keep pretending that fact is true because I'd like to see how far your delusion can go.

Nigel?1!1 Could you possibly be projecting in your typical sly incapable of fault way [QuESTioN MaRk]

>>3952
>image 1
>crackshipping fail
What am I? A fucking >phone poster

>>3947
>Derpy isn't a unicorn, so giving her powers would be absurd
What are superpowers
>"shonen-tier"
You keep using that word.
>"no u"
You keep saying that shit.
>>3948
>projecting his projection
If I'm a bigger redditor than your Vril-Chan friend, why don't I act in the reddit way he does? Why don't I run around with a custom flag, bullshitting people about cycles and rises and falls and other pretty words? Why don't I say generic shit like "We need to do something!" and "We need to master the cycles to predict the rise fall!" to try and get imaginary upvotes on a site without an upvote system??
>>3951
Got it, I'll have Glimmer do more evil in her story.
One thing I can't decide on when it comes to Glimmer... She's evil, but she's also a really shit person who does evil for stupid reasons. So should she be "Faking her redemption all along" to see how far she can push Twilight and how hard she can shit-test her, or should she just naturally be this bad at not being evil due to her own awful personality?

>>3954
>If I'm a bigger redditor than your Vril-Chan friend, why don't I act in the reddit way he does? Why don't I run around with a custom flag, bullshitting people about cycles and rises and falls and other pretty words? Why don't I say generic shit like "We need to do something!" and "We need to master the cycles to predict the rise fall!" to try and get imaginary upvotes on a site without an upvote system??

My God, that Vril-Chan guy is such a fucking retard! I am with you Nigel, he needs to be nuked from orbit It's the only way to be sure!. Enough of their leddit-tier faggotry!! Internet WAR NOW!

>>3954
>What are superpowers
>>"shonen-tier"
No, thats the first time I've personally used it. Are you suggesting its inaccurate?
>If I'm a bigger redditor...
>If
>... why don't I act in the reddit way he does?
For one, you technically have a unique flag in that our other British posters either don't post or use VPNs for fear of being associated with you. For two, there is far more to 'acting reddit' than the behaviors you describe (which he does do, admittedly) of which you are a far more egregious offender. Simply, its disingenuous for you to complain about reddit behavior when you've already distinguished yourself as being this site's most notorious and insufferable redditor.

>>3946
>Glimmer needs to go
Because you're a hack and cant get over your autistic hate boner, you don't know how to write characters that are glass canons.

>This character has no power level limit
There you go again with your fucktarded projection Nigel. The shit tier OC you created has no limits, as that's been well documented the amount of ass-pulls you continually pull each and every chapter for your favorite Sue. Starlight has strong magic but no pony, not even the Alicorns and not starlight can just use their magic forever with an infinite pool. But you and your retarded OC? 'My self insert has a clone spell that last for YEARS so he can be a master of multiple disciplines'. Is garbage, your ideas are fucking GARBAGE Nigel. >>3947 is right, giving Derpy or any side character super powers for her cutiemark IS exactly what one would expect in a Shonen, my first thought after reading that was how you are a retarded narufag and want more Naruto ponified. Is there anything you can write that isn't blatant plagerism? Jesus christ you are such a shit tier writer. Don't think I didn't see you ripping off Portals blue/orange portal either.

>>3757
>Silver shows up when the plot's done because he has to bring her back
>Silver decided to check up on her, expecting her to have been specifically trying to make this timeline she created worse out of spite.
You are likely a sociopath if you can't even see the fault of what Silver did in Chapter6 and see that it makes Silver irredeemable scum if he just stands by and does nothing except 'checking in' after nearly beating her to death (lets face it the spell he cast to let her feel all the pain but none of the body damage is more sadistic than just murder) and then exiling her from her own dimension.

>and perhaps she was just better off as somepony quietly resented by everypony.
>The longer he spent around this pony, the more he felt like there was a wall inside his head, keeping his rage away from the controls. Or, to put it another way, it felt like something was dampening his anger. Slowly draining and regulating it.
>two Silvers appeared in twin flashes of blue light. “Something’s wrong. Why can’t we get properly angry at this monster?”
You contradict your own ass-pull lore about Starlight being an eldricht 'Outlier' with Nigelight and your own OC. Well fuckwit, if even 'the most perfect grand master oc of all time at everything magical and gay' would be effected by Starlight's presence and 'dampening his anger' then Twilight's own words about every pony resenting her is a croc and doesnt line up as anything other than a gaping plothole. Why would background ponies have a stronger resistance to Starlight's 'outlier' status than others. The answer is they wouldnt and you are just a hack who decided he wanted to have Nigelight reaffirm what You think and have Silver think in the next chapter, and all the ponies afterwords as they give him yet another groupie because thats ALL that EVER HAPPENS in this shitfic. They are not individual characters with differing thoughts and personalities, it's all just one big circlejerk fest

I already know why you do it, because you can only process thinking about yourself with your unrelenting narcassism.
An incompetent and lazy writer who thinks that just by reminding everyone on what we already know when Starlight was a villain in S5 Our Town that the reader should get all emotional and hate her again for dirty gommunism as she just calmly offloads the ins-and-outs of cutiemark removal to your OC like a sociopath in your headcanon dumpsterfire fic. If you knew anything about this character then it would be obvious that this situation would NEVER happen because she doesnt just start talking about her past sins, nor how it was done as if they are just a casual stroll on the beach.

Learn how to write the characters or just stick to your own gay ass OCs Nigel. Not that you are any better that that too, Aquilla is a boring side character that nobody gives a fuck about and someone in the other thread did better than your shit in days, DAYS Nigel.

>>3954
>She's evil, but she's also a really shit person who does evil for stupid reasons. So should she be "Faking her redemption all along" to see how far she can push Twilight and how hard she can shit-test her, or should she just naturally be this bad at not being evil due to her own awful personality?

I really can't tell you, because that aspect of it is your story and your lore. I don't hate Glimmer the way you do. My opinions of her up until very recently have been consistent with what seems to be majority opinion in the fandom, in that she is kind of a Poochie type character added to the series to try and revive it at a point where it's already more or less jumped the shark. I don't like the way the writers try to awkwardly wedge her into the Mane 6. Beyond that I didn't really think much about her until I read your story and felt compelled to start pulling it apart and analyzing it.

My visceral disgust at your character's sadistic treatment of her made me want to give her another chance, so I went back and rewatched some episodes she was in. I find that she's not an awful character, my issue is more with the way she's written and handled by the creative staff. As I said I don't like her being wedged into the Mane 6 as she doesn't fit, but I find the episodes that focus on her friendship with Sunburst and Trixie and Maud to be more enjoyable. The moral issues you raise about her past deserve consideration, but ultimately I think her desire to reform herself is genuine and I'm inclined to give her a chance to prove herself. Anyway that's my opinion.

More to the point here is that your own personal hatred of this character tends to interfere with your writing. You don't have to write her sympathetically if you don't want to, and if you want to make her a villain and kill her off or imprison her in another dimension that's ultimately up to you. What you should consider though is that people in your audience are not necessarily going to come into the story sharing your view of her. If you want to convert people to your point of view, you have to start from a somewhat neutral perspective and present the character in a way that the reader will conclude on their own that she's evil. In the current state of your story, you basically have her being brutally tortured for an entire scene, which is frankly going to be a hard sell no matter how you write it, even if you assume you're writing for an audience who has the same view of her that you do. Even if you made Silver more likable in the chapters leading up to this fight, the audience would be unlikely to condone his behavior towards Glimmer.

Remember what I said before, about how you can end up driving people away from your point of view rather than leading them to it if you're not careful? This applies here. Whatever you ultimately decide to do with Glimmer you need to reign in your hateboner enough that you can effectively tell your own story. The last thing you want to end up doing as a writer is making the audience sympathize more with your villain then they do with your protagonist.

If I wanted to write her as a villain at a post-redemption point in the series timeline, I would probably show her as being passive-aggressive. She's all smiles to Twilight and her friends, but she's plotting something quietly, maybe she wants to do another Our Town type thing in Ponyville, who knows. You could probably try to do something similar to the Wedding episode, where Twilight figures out there's something wrong with Cadance but nobody believes her and she keeps getting shit on instead of Cadance/Chrysalis. In any case I would probably make the eventual fight between Silver and Glimmer more evenly matched. Regardless of who the enemy combatant is, nobody is going to sympathize with a character who just holds his enemy in place with magic and tortures her. Give her a chance to fight back, make the battle interesting enough to read, be sure to build up the conflict beforehand so they have a valid reason to fight in the first place, and however you choose to end it, make sure that whatever happens to her is a valid comeuppance for her actions, not just you as the author torturing this character to death because you hate her.

As entertaining as the thread's been, I've gotten really burnt out on Nigel content and real life beckons. Farewell Glim, farewell Swedanon, and farewell King Battlebrit. Twas a wild ride.

>>3960
Yeah, take care.

>>3960
Yeah, I can hardly blame you there. Internet drama can suck a lot out of you if you're not careful. Anyway take care, hope we were able to entertain you for a time.

>>3952
>>3953
This is more proof that crackshipping is baste and redpilled.
So besides crackshipping being based and sauteed I want you to look carefuly at that post and what it says Glimmernigel. >>3954
Look at the post and look at it closely.

>inb4 muh leddit
Seriously J.D, look and listen closely, especially since I had nothing to do with you getting banned from FIMFIC, ha, fucktard. What did you do last, maybe that's why.

>>3960
pics of your argument or it never happened nigger
nigel a good boy, he dindu block nobody in dis neigh-bourhood

When enslaving a village of ponies, mentally abusing them using a cult, getting caught, getting stopped, attacking the one who stopped you, losing to her in a fight, stalking her, randomly becoming 3x stronger than her, attacking a foal, repeatedly beating the one who foiled your last evil scheme in multiple fights while ruining the timeline and creating worse world after worse world in which wars are waged and monsters freely destroy Equestria without any heroes left to stop them, not to mention what Glimmer does after being "Redeemed" (forgiven endlessly) are perfectly fine things to do in your book...
...But beating up the pony who did all of that and being mean to her makes you ALL the bad words.
>just_glimmerfan_things.png

>>3965
Is your room clean anon?

>>3965
Everyone is putting fire with gasoline.
https://youtu.be/VpdHMaccjw4

>>3964
Did I break this guy?

>>3968
No, he was replaced with an Australian shitposter.

>>3969
This. It happened over a month ago. Flag-fag Vril has been cycle-shitposting.

Hey, I heard the S8 season finale had a child sentenced to a lifetime in hell for getting manipulated by some asshole.
Is that true?
The show's going to let time-breaker Glimmyglam off the hook, while putting a genuine pony kid in hell?

>>3971
NO SPOILERS
>>172240
In the meantime, do tell: what rules are being violated?

Hey, anyone here have any good ideas for cool house shit?
I decided that instead of creating Twilight's perfectly ultimate dream house, Silver will instead create what he thinks her perfectly ultimate dream house is, giving her stuff she'll love turned up to 11 along with a fuckton of extra shit.
A fuckhueg treebrary made from a stupidly old oak tree taller than the twin towers AND wider AND bigger on the inside(a space-manipulation spell makes the building appear smaller the further away you get from it, so it doesn't start to seem incredibly and absurdly huge to your eyes until you're within spitting distance of it. To far-off ponies, it's seemingly as small as the other buildings in Ponyville), with more books in the publically-open library than a pony could read in one lifetime, plus a lot of cool shit you'd typically see in really good Skyrim and Fallout player homes, some original stuff, and more.

>>3973
Silver shall build unto Twilight a castle that is twenty million cubits tall, and forty million cubits wide, and one hundred thousand million cubits tall. The house shall be made entirely out of dicks, and Silver "bend me over the kitchen table" Star will have put all of them inside his rectum in at least one alternate dimension, preferably. The entrance to the Dick Castle will be made out of thousands of smaller dicks, with a door that appears to be made out of wood but it's actually billions and billions of microscopic dicks.

Twilight will arrive at her new dream home wondering why somepony demolished her old house and also wondering if she should call the horse police, because a wild faggot will suddenly appear and start licking the door of her new castle, which is made out of dicks. She will see him and immediately explode, because his faggot levels will be so far off the charts that it will literally destroy her. Now, with Twilight finally out of the way, Silver "put a finger in me I'm just about done" Star can accomplish his original plan, which is to live in the Dick Castle and lick thousands of dicks every day of his life, from now until the end of time.

>>3973
Nigel you really have ruined reddit I mean our raid discord I mean /mlpol/.
Sorry I get confused sometimes. >^:)
I noticed you elevated verification and message permissions in your discord server, why's that J.G or.. wait.. J.D

>>3973
Glimbots, this is your mindset. "Tee hee hurr durr dicks!".

>>3976

>Nigel attempts to strawman detractors as penis obsessed drones
>fails at clicking the correct post number
>cites selfhelf as example for bad behavior
>secretly showing how self-obsessed you are that you would rather be talking to yourself

Nice selfown once again, Jason. It is in these rare moments of clarity that your subconsciousness screams out desperately for you to come to the rationalization that you are in insufferable cunt.

>>3977
Did I really click my own comment, instead of this >>3974 over here? Lol oops. That entirely negates my complaints about your childish "Tee hee hurr durr u dont like glimmer so ur a meanie who wants the peeny" mindset, doesn't it?

Your behavior alone negates the tee hee hurr durr. The gaffe however, that was just funny

>>3978

stop crying glimmernigel. your ugly ass mother raised a faggot.

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>>3977
Wow, y'all're reaching pretty hard. Careful, you might rip your clothes and expose something. There aren't any old people around, after all.
But seriously, do you kids ever stop and look at yourselves? Look at this dude.
>>3979
>ur a meenie so it doesnt matter that we're kids who think u luv weenie
>>3980
And then there's this guy, who can't even manage a response on the above post's level. It's great that he turned his custom flag off, but he fails to notice that he's posting a pic of a blue-checkmark's attempt to dox someone.
You kids have tried your hardest to go through everything you've got on me. You've went through everything I ever made, and everything I ever said on multiple sites, and you can't find anything that justifies your attitude towards me or the way you have been treating me.
You are liberal communist cowards here to shit the place up.

>>3981

Unlike Gino DiGiannantonio you dont have a career or pretty much anything to be proud of, Jason. Stop having an such a caustic ego about it and take your pills.

>>3981
You get points for tenacity, I'll give you that. Truth is - that's apparent to everyone who isn't in denial - we've gone through everything about you and made evident why you are not respected nor well received on this site as well as others. At this point (and I don't speak for the others) I'm entertaining myself watching you spin and maneuver to paint everyone else as being how you evidently are. Now you're resorting to calling us kids (which you've tried before) and its as laughable now as it was the last time. Everything you do to try and deflect, deny, posture, or delude yourself against makes this all the more laughable.
The only way to win this is to stop, which is what makes your unwillingness to do so all the more gratifying. Carry on though, I look forward to what sort of label you'll try next. Enjoy the dopamine!
P.S. I seem to recall you were wanting to move to the US with your 'girlfriend', except without a job and without any money. How's that going?

>>3981
>You kids have tried your hardest to go through everything you've got on me. You've went through everything I ever made, and everything I ever said on multiple sites, and you can't find anything that justifies your attitude towards me or the way you have been treating me.
At this point it's honestly more that it's just exhausting and not funny anymore. For the record I'm technically not finished going through everything you ever made, I've just gotten bored with the project. Even when it seems like you're starting to listen to advice you're being given you inevitably revert back to the same positions as before and come back here saying the same things as always, without ever bringing anything to the table that shows genuine effort or improvement. Arguing with you about nearly any topic or trying to give you advice is like punching one of those inflatable clown dolls that springs back up and hits you in the face no matter what you do to it. There's only so many times it can be amusing before you just give up and walk away.

>>3984
>Even when it seems like you're starting to listen to advice you're being given you inevitably revert back to the same positions as before and come back here saying the same things as always, without ever bringing anything to the table that shows genuine effort or improvement.
Say, isn't that what Hitler was saying the Jews were doing when he argued with them?

Jason may not be an ethnic jew, but he is behaving and talking like one, and has a history of detractors to boast.

at this point the only option left i see for him is peacefully sunsetting him. if necessary by force.

>>3986
Are you certain? It would make sense if he was,....

>>3984
Say, Glimglam, if you feel tired of Nigel material. Does that mean that you don't wanna review (or give your thoughts) my work in the other thread?
I would love some input but I understand if you don't got time.
Regardless if you do that or not, you are really good at reviewing and seems to enjoy it. Maybe you should make reviews in the the review thread about other things than Nigel's stuff. Any contribution would be great weather you shit on something or praise it doesn't matter.
This invitation goes to all other Anons on this thread that has posted reviews and anons in general aswell. If you enjoy stories, why not post your thoughts on some? It doesn't even have to be more than a sentence. Even that can result in a larger discussion.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UuDjN6KsLdo

>>3988
Motherfucker, I needed those sides.

>>3976
Come on Nigel you should totally team up with Chris Chan to make the most epic comic saga on earth.

>>3993
Perfect just need to add bubble speech for Silver.