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Anonymous
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Who wants to see a fanfic in which, halfway through chapter one, my donut steel OC debates Glimmer and then kicks her ass when she attacks him?
450 replies and 195 files omitted.
Anonymous
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>>3738
>>3739
>>3740

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lhckuhUxcgA

>mfw every fucking time, like clockwork
Anonymous
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>>3744
Did I hurt you at some point?
>>3743
I understand your frustrations, but please understand: I'm going to make Silver less of a cunt as time goes on, because he's going to grow as a person over time. Glimmer is never going to be less of a cunt, because her writers think she's perfect and everypony else just needs to get on board with that.
>>3741
>>3742
Nice! That's the intended reaction. Silver's got a lot of work to do.
I'm not sure if the scenario really applies to an irredeemable murderer who fucked with random Ponyville citizens and mindfucked the ponies who forgave her, but I think I could get more emotion out of the story if I made Twilight see it like that.
Anonymous
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>>3745
What a degenerate. Who the fuck likes We Bare Bears?
Anonymous
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>>3747

Glimmernigel, this is your mindset.
Anonymous
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>>3748
>>3746

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CcvKzRptGg

Soon™
Anonymous
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>>3746
>I'm not sure if the scenario really applies to an irredeemable murderer who fucked with random Ponyville citizens and mindfucked the ponies who forgave her, but I think I could get more emotion out of the story if I made Twilight see it like that.
See, the whole problem is you're still not getting it. You had your character do something that cannot be in any way justified. You can't resolve the situation in a way that both you and the reader will like. Forget about Glimmer for a second, arguing over whether or not she's redeemable is a waste of time at this point. At this point I'm willing to play devil's advocate and agree with you that she's evil. It still doesn't justify what Silver did. It should have been Twilight's decision what to do with Glimmer, Silver had no right to jump the gun and attack her. If he wanted to put Glimmer on trial he should have brought the matter to Twilight, not taken it upon himself.

I can already tell what you're thinking: you're going to write a conversation scene between Twilight and Silver where she starts out angry at him, but he convinces her that Glimmer was evil, so she eventually decides he did the right thing. It's not going to work, the reader won't like it and won't gain any sympathy for Silver because the central issue wasn't resolved. The central issue is less what Silver did to Glimmer and more what Silver did to Twilight.

I'll say it again: Twilight assumed responsibility for Glimmer by giving her a redemption, and it was her prerogative to do so. Glimmer was her old nemesis, not Silver's. Twilight and her friends had the encounter with her in Our Town, not Silver. All the time travel shit that she did was about fucking with Twilight, not fucking with Silver. Twilight, despite what she'd done to her, chose to give Glimmer another chance to redeem herself, and by all appearances Glimmer was making an effort. Again the whole issue is that you just plain don't understand these characters that well. If you understood Twilight's character at all, you would realize that she would never forgive Silver for doing what he did; it doesn't matter if he was right about Glimmer or not. You set up Silver and Twilight to be some kind of romantic couple or at least friends, yet you had Silver do something that would create an irreconcilable conflict between them. Before the story can move on, the conflict needs to be resolved. There are only two possible ways to resolve it that work. One, you can have Silver apologize to Twilight, who will not forgive him until he makes it right. In order to make it right, he will have to go off into whatever dimension he sent Glimmer into and bring her back. That is probably not something you'd be willing to do. Two, the relationship between Twilight and Silver ends by necessity, because they now have an irreconcilable wedge between them. I'm guessing you don't want to do that either. It's called writing yourself into a corner. The third way, the way you're planning to go, where Silver just convinces Twilight he was right and she should just accept his decision like a good little puppet character whose only role in the story is to fluff your character's dick, is amateurish and readers will hate it. Don't do it.

If you really want to send Glimmer off into Dimension X or whatever because you hate her, fine. But you handled it wrong. Glimmer should not be out of the story yet. That fight shouldn't have happened, or at least it shouldn't have ended the way it did. The way I would do it would be to have Silver and Glimmer run into each other at the party. Silver gets angry at Glimmer because all of his reasons. Glimmer defends herself and gets angry, tells him piss off, I'm reformed. They argue (not for 25,000 words though, and leave the ideological crap out of it). It ends with Glimmer stomping off. Twilight meanwhile saw the whole thing. She's upset with Silver and sticks up for Glimmer. Silver gets pissed at her, "how can you stick up for that monster?" etc etc. Twilight gets pissed at him. They storm off and don't speak to each other for a bit. Now you've basically got two interesting story dynamics to work with, instead of an unsolvable conflict. You've got an interpersonal conflict between Twilight, Silver and Glimmer, and you've got a separate relationship issue between Twilight and Silver. Both of those things can be dealt with over subsequent chapters. You can play up the tension for a bit, then have a scene in which Twilight, Glimmer and Silver all talk about Glimmer's redemption and whether or not she should be forgiven. At that point, if you want to end it with Twilight deciding it's okay for Silver to cunt punt Glimglam into another dimension, that's up to you; it's your story. I probably still wouldn't, but that's me. But either way the ultimate decision should be made by Twilight.

Chapter 6 of this story just plain needs to be torn up and rewritten, the way you wrote it is a dead end. There's no way around it.
Anonymous
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No.3751
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>>3746
Yes, you are so lacking in Football you could be an honorary Seattle Seahawk
Anonymous
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No.3752
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>>3751
I remember that GET like it was yesterday..
>Tfw no trolls/shills to wage war against
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>>3752

we are lacking a couple hundred regulars to cultivate a healthy raiding community
Anonymous
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No.3754
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>>3748
>what is obvious joke
Putting that aside, am I being compared to some anti-brony weirdo who thinks watching MLP is an inherently childish and degenerate thing, or am I being accused of being that guy in disguise? I know it doesn't matter either way, but come on, for the record.
>>3750
I was planning on doing a side story where Glimmer gets trapped in that "Sombra War Timeline" universe she created and has to grow as a person to survive and help to save it as an ordinary soldier on the battlefield, and Silver shows up when the plot's done because he has to bring her back, but she decides she likes going all Quantum Leap and helping timelines instead of ruining them, but if you think that belongs in the main plot, I'll see if I can fit it in there.
Anonymous
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>>3754
>Silver shows up when the plot's done because he has to bring her back
Is that becuase Twilight demanded it or because Silver got a change of heart? What is the reason?
Anonymous
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No.3756
>>3755 Just curious.
Anonymous
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>>3755
Silver decided to check up on her, expecting her to have been specifically trying to make this timeline she created worse out of spite.
Anonymous
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>>3709

>"They asked how well I understood theoretical physicscomputer science.
>I said I had a theoretical degree in physicscomputer science. They said, 'welcome aboard.'"

Now, in complete fairness, '''AI''' and ''AI'' is abit of a meme.
If we could create the first steps of 'living' machines with brains that utilize 'M'MI tech, then that would be cool and then we can talk sweety.
Until then, we'll need to harvest more dead babies for their science juice.

Until, of course, we can process specialized cells into other things, I personally love the idea of grafting a second neural-network onto every'bodies' spine via their own blood supply, I think it would be hilarious if those same people ended up with horrible side-effect deformities like increased pain receptors or states of sudden psychosis, as science requires things be done simply in its namesake alone. Just be GLaD to be alive.

>>3706
Oh my fucking god, I was going to bring this up in the other thread but I've been oh so busy the past few days bb.
I can't believe you're so fucking dumb that you bring it up unprompted, oh my lord senpai, save me from Glimmernigel.
I'll bring it up in the other thread (your obsessions and HP&tMOR) because it isn't relative in this one (and I seriously didn't expect you to do this before I could get to your weird obsessive but not-neurotic nature of these kinds of things you 'remember to loathe.'

(Oh my lord, what are you doing.)
Anonymous
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Found a nice pic. Your thoughts?
Anonymous
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>>3759
That you need a better pic.
Anonymous
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>>3760
*rolls eyes*
God, you're egotistical. And so are your friends.
Why should I bend over backwards to please you, or your little "9gag army" from reddit? Why do you feel entitled to my respect? You are an unpleasant person, and a cowardly bully. So are your friends. You have given me no reasons to like you, respect you, or give any weight to your words. You're butthurt children on a school playground.
What are you offering me? Not money. You attacked first, so are you saying that you'll stop attacking if I "Capitulate" and become what you consider a good person?
What would I have to do, to become a better person in your eyes? To apologize for not liking your waifu, to apologize for upsetting you by admitting that I do not like your waifu, and to apologize for being a mean old pesky white male with free thought and individual tastes and standards and the ability to remember the good old days before you and your enablers were here.
There's a reason why people don't apologize to SJWs when they know what SJWs are and how they operate.
Are you currently crusading for "Fat Acceptance" or "Pedophilia Acceptance"? No, you're currently crusading for "Glimmer Acceptance", and you're doing so with your usual tactics, your usual tricks, and your usual lies. Your usual IdPol "I identify you as a meanie yikesy cringey triggererer lolcishetscum shitlord and I FEEL that you must stop being so mean!" bullshit.
>inb4 you ignore everything else I say
>inb4 "So you're saying glimmer=pedophilia? lmao yikes how cringey"
You can't argue against my reasoning for why Glimmer is a poorly-written Poochie and hilariously bad Mary Sue, so you want to insult me until I get tired of your reddit army's antics, I prove that I'm the bigger person, I give you what you want, and I "Take back" what I said about leftist politics- I mean a leftist character.
Then again, last time a ban was placed on Glimmer being spammed on-site and used as something to "Trigger" people into complaining about your bullshit, you decided to retreat to your Discord circlejerks for a few months, to lick your wounds and plan your next attacks against the man who just might be the man who ruined your last raid against this site and its users, starting with the one you hate the most.
You're here to get revenge for your waifu, and it's stupid. This is a fictitious character! It's one thing for one of you crybabies to get this mad and this dishonest when someone says "Studies show that mixed-race people are more likely to develop heart disease" or "Mathematically speaking, there are around seventy criminal black people in America for every one law-abiding black citizen" or even "Show me the black Tolstoy, the black Mozart, and the black Tesla", but you...
You aren't just getting this mad over someone who doesn't share your political views breathing the same air as you. You're getting this mad over someone who doesn't like your favourite noncanon fictional horse not being banned from every pony site you can access.
You're mad, you're reaching, you're lying, and you're embarassing yourself. You're throwing around 4chan words like "Lolcow" in liberal ways because you're this bad at hiding what you are when "Agitated".
So, please, do go on.
Tell me how I trigger you. Tell me how I make you haha and angery and feel the big cringe. Tell me how many uncomfs you are having. Call this conversation all the negative words you know, and tell me who's winning what in your head.
Tell me how you feel you and your seven friends=everyone in the world that matters, because you can form a consensus opinion in your little discord room.
Tell me I'm a mean, mad, straight white man.
But really.
Do you really expect to fool anyone here with the lies you use so liberally?
Where do you think you are?
Anonymous
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>>3761
First, stop pretending to possess Internet E.S.P.
Second, if you'd like to pare all that down to some kind of polite inquiry, without projecting unfounded imputations of malice upon me, I'd be more than happy to answer it.
Anonymous
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>>3759
I think it's hilariously mediocre.
It should be the responsibility of the artist (that 'responsibility' is to their own self interest and their benefit) to help themselves improve.
Sure, critics should give 'good' feedback, but the people being criticized should maybe not try to offload all the responsibility of self-reflection, self-assessment and self-improvement onto the critics to do the work for them.

It's amazing that you have one user hounding you in gigantic multi-paragraph posts reviewing your entire story, just to provide you with criticism and in the process turn your worthless threads into something people like I might be able to pick up something of value, some idea or critical inspiration to use in my own possible stories.

The fact is that people, artist, writers for example ^:) might be able to for themselves find the valuable ('positive') literary aspects of their work and to find for themselves the ways in which they can improve.
If someone is going to self-teach themselves they'll have to assume the responsibility of improving their ability and craft.

>>3761
>Tell me how I make you haha and angery and feel the big cringe. Tell me how many uncomfs you are having.
This made me laugh, you should just write comedy. Infact, this is a tragedy, so you're halfway there.
Nobody wants you to like Glimmer. The only true responsibilities you have are those concerning your self interest, anything else is you projecting an attack onto yourself by the people compelling you to improve, which you can (and do) readily ignore.

In light of that, it's amazing that you choose to point at everyone pointing at you and laughing, nobody cares if you apologize or don't.
You could very easily ignore everything except for the useful criticisms, but you don't seem to care for some criticisms over other less 'entertaining' ones, I wonder why.

You are the one making yourself the focus of any attention by caring so much.
I bet you're getting real sweaty because people are making fun of you and that's why you feel compelled to defend yourself and attack others, if you weren't you wouldn't be here 'defending' the things you can't even create a defence for and in the process attacking others in really convoluted ways.
If you weren't so sweaty or maybe self-righteous over this you wouldn't be making yourself the focus of attention.

"Moooo."
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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>>3762
>projecting unfounded imputations of malice upon me
The pot calling the kettle just abandoned its family to continue its career as a criminal.
Anonymous
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>>3765
Ignoring how that attempt at wit doesn't even make sense, you're at least improving on restraining your projection.
Now, do you want a polite response, or not?
Anonymous
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>>3765
"The pot calling the kettle a nigger."
Anonymous
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No.3768
This has long since become circular. Nigel, shut the fuck up. You've acted a damn fool the entire time, and then bitched when you've been told to fuck off. You've engaged in the worst examples of circular reasoning I've ever seen. Your hypocrisy is legendary, and your deflections are fired off before criticisms LEGIT criticisms have been levied. You've been given plenty of opportunity to make suitable changes to your method and writing, but instead you patrol the board because you literally get a dopamine and endorphin rush from the conflict of being told to gtfo. Your work is shit. If it ever becomes not shit, you're welcome to come back and re-petition for upvotes, or whatever it is you fucking reddit shills get off on.
Anonymous
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>>3761
>"9gag army" from reddit
You literally frequent r/the_donald. Shut your whore mouth.

>You attacked first
Objectively untrue. You spent several threads shilling your work, we got sick of it and told you to leave or git gud.

>apologize for not liking your waifu, to apologize for upsetting you by admitting that I do not like your waifu, and to apologize for being a mean old pesky white male with free thought and individual tastes and standards
>Are you currently crusading for "Fat Acceptance" or "Pedophilia Acceptance"?
>your usual tactics, your usual tricks, and your usual lies. Your usual IdPol "I identify you as a meanie yikesy cringey triggererer lolcishetscum shitlord and I FEEL that you must stop being so mean!" bullshit.
Do I smell projection again? Where do I even begin? Someone has been deconstructing your shit fanfic line by line and you still pretend it's all feelings and conjecture driven by politics when it took him nearly a dozen posts just to START talking about politics. But you'll continue acting as if you're the sole arbiter of right-wing politics by painting a target on your back, begging people to kick you, and then screeching that we're policing your speech when all we're doing is rebutting and shit-talking you.

>You can't argue against my reasoning for why Glimmer is a poorly-written Poochie and hilariously bad Mary Sue, so you want to insult me until I get tired of your reddit army's antics
We've argued against your reasoning, and you reject it because it's not your specific reasoning. We show you the mirror because you've claimed both literary and moral superiority to us even before we got hostile.

>you decided to retreat to your Discord circlejerks for a few months, to lick your wounds and plan your next attacks against the man who just might be the man who ruined your last raid against this site and its users, starting with the one you hate the most
What are you even talking about? I don't have a fucking discord. I don't have a reddit account. I don't have tumblr. These two threads were my first direct exposure to your bullshit. You're projecting, AGAIN.

>You're here to get revenge for your waifu, and it's stupid. This is a fictitious character!
Hence why it's so absurd how pissy you get about her in these exact threads. Most people here don't even care about Glimmer and instead post stuff of her specifically to piss you off because you're just that autistic. And yet, you went so far off the rails that you spent nearly 90k words screeching at a fictional character for politics they didn't have and character traits and actions that you literally made up specifically to make her sound more evil.

>It's one thing for one of you crybabies to get this mad and this dishonest when someone says "Studies show that mixed-race people are more likely to develop heart disease" or "Mathematically speaking, there are around seventy criminal black people in America for every one law-abiding black citizen" or even "Show me the black Tolstoy, the black Mozart, and the black Tesla"
YOU. ARE. PROJECTING. WE AGREE ON ISSUES OF RACE. WE AGREE THAT NIGGERS COMMIT FIFTY PERCENT OF CRIME IN AMERICA DESPITE BEING 13-14% OF THE POPULATION. WE AGREE THAT MIXED RACE PEOPLE HAVE HIGHER DEPRESSION RATES, HIGHER RISK OF DISEASES IN GENERAL, HIGHER RATES OF GENETIC DEFECTS. READ MY LIPS: WE AGREE WITH THAT. Jesus christ you absolute mongrel.

>You aren't just getting this mad over someone who doesn't share your political views breathing the same air as you. You're getting this mad over someone who doesn't like your favourite noncanon fictional horse not being banned from every pony site you can access.
Again, that's not what we care about. But I'll play devil's advocate and say that most of us actually love Glimglam and want her not to be banned here. What precisely is wrong with wanting to use screencaps, quotes, fanart, or memes with a fictional character, on a board that contains at least one-third people who watch the show that character comes from? Your argument is that showing any level of interest whether ironic or not in Glimmer is the same as being a goddamn commie, which is just absurd.

>You're mad, you're reaching, you're lying, and you're embarassing yourself. You're throwing around 4chan words like "Lolcow" in liberal ways because you're this bad at hiding what you are when "Agitated".
Who deleted their fanfiction the moment it got the attention that they'd begged for for several threads? Who stomped their way across this site for months, constantly bitching and moaning at NOTHING? Who's cherrypicked side-arguments and tidbits instead of just turning their gaze toward the elephant in the room that is the DOCTORAL MOTHERFUCKING DISSERTATION ON HOW SHIT YOUR WRITING IS?

And don't even get me fucking started on the immense irony of someone on a chan-offshoot not liking when other channers use chan terms like "lolcow." What was that that you said about lolcows?
>That's such a stupid newspeak word. What is a lolcow? A "cow" that you "milk" "lols" from.
Anonymous
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>>3769
This. This is only one of how many such rebuttals? Nigel, you've got Glim Glam giving an intensely surgical dissection, plus everyone else who has made it abundantly clear that your work is shit. In a court of law, you don't get to dismiss the ruling of jury. Guess what? You have been judged by a jury of your peers, no matter how much mental gymnastics you engage in to try and assuage your pathetic ego that they're not, or that their opinion doesn't matter.
Anonymous
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Now, now. I'm at least attempting to have a reasonable discourse with our British friend here.
Granted, that may be because I'm currently drunk, but it's the thought that counts. I really should be writing instead, but dude wine lmao
Anonymous
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>>3771
Fine. I'm tempted to say hit him up on discord want his ID/#? or on FiMfic, but you can discuss with him. Shitting on users for not sucking his dick however, well just wait and see
Anonymous
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>>3772
>discord ID
Oy vey. Why do you have that goy?
Anonymous
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>>3773
Chances are the dipshit shared them on multiple platforms. After all, finding his FiMFic was all it took to get his Fanfiction, his social connections, his interests outside pony, his DeviantArt page, and multiple people he knows. And his name too.

He's not exactly the most anonymous person on this site.
Anonymous
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>>3774
Oy vey goyim don't do that!1
I already have his ID anyway.

hopefully the Israeli wing of the ADL or fed services will finally recruit us for data forensics
Anonymous
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No.3776
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>>3775
kek. In reality, Glimmernigel is not big on security or privacy; if we use the same skills you boys did on Nigel to work data forensics, most privacy-minded people would be untouchable.
Anonymous
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>>3774
>Connecting your alias with your real identity
I wonder if his family knows that he writes wish fulfillment fanfiction about pastel horses.
Anonymous
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>>3776
I've been hinting at this to the retard himself since at least six months ago honestly hoping he would shoa himself for his own sake.
Instead the retard came back one time too many and I finally took an interest in it, had everything I wanted in an afternoon, he really is a free-range cow of the internet.
Anonymous
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>>3778
And he just doesn't stop either! When people come at him with his name and occupation, threaten him, he doesn't even reply to it, just continuing his screed like he's not digging himself into a hole too deep. It takes a special kind of stupid to feed the trolls when you're this un-secured.
Anonymous
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>>3779
History repeats itself, just last April I completed searching Turkish and American Registries for some 'We Wuz Roman Empire' roach with almost the same name.
That guy was smarter though (roach behaviour), completely nuked himself in my wake of lulztruction of his life so I gave up.
Anonymous
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>>3750
Good post,
I had the same thoughts about the conflicts and how Twilight would react. Especially if Silver has any hope of ever being redeemed to the reader from what he did to Starlight then he must go searching for Starlight and do some soul searching in there, confront himself with his shitty morality and how he's not actually perfect, but a real big scumbag after being scolded by Twilight as she's disillusioned of her puppy-love and adoration for him and their relationship dissolves in an instant, right then and there.

And if he ever finds Starlight, asks for her forgiveness on what he did after coming to terms that Twilight is right about him and hate his old self, just like Starlight hates her old self. Maybe along the way maybe even make it slightly interesting for the reader probably introducing a challenge Silver has to overcome by taking away some of his powers he pulls out of his ass at every moment and every scene with his dumb orange gem. There's no other way it can even be passable if the current chapter 6 stands with his abhorrent god complex and cruelty displayed.

>The third way, the way you're planning to go, where Silver just convinces Twilight he was right and she should just accept his decision like a good little puppet character whose only role in the story is to fluff your character's dick, is amateurish and readers will hate it. Don't do it
Oh you see here's the thing, Nigel already laid the stepping stones for his puppy love waifu to just bend over for him with little effort, in the previous fifth chapter before the political sperging and attack with Glimmer even happened.

In his ideal FiM Twilight doesnt behave like Twilight because she's just another mouth piece of himself. Half of chapter 5 is just him complaining about the castle through twilight 'missing' things that Nigel misses. And then even said the exact same bile that came out of the OCs mouth about how Starlight 'is just used to being forgiven'.
From there it's uninteresting as more sue-y silver 'comedy' abruptly changes the mood with no transition. This shitfic takes away actual character growth, personality and achievements from characters because he doesn't like them or how they think. None of the words coming out of Twilight feel true to her character because it's just another mouthpiece for Nigel to sock puppet.
Anonymous
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>inb4 censorship
Nigel wants more penises for his ass and face, if anyone is available to fulfill his need. I doubt there are enough anons in the Internet, let alone Mlpol, but please pitch in, it's for a good cause.
Anonymous
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>>169304
Well that's not very nice. I thought you wanted a polite conversation?
Anonymous
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>>169304
Let's start over. I have some questions for you if you will.
1. Can you give me a short summary of the most meningful events to the plot for the next chapter?
2. Do you think, personally, that Silver has acted immoral so far in the your story? In such a case when and why?
3. Can you tell me what makes Glimmer's character different from Silver's?
To me, they both seem so similar you see. Both Silver and Glimmer has troubles with making friends. They are both really powerful but we lack the backstory for why but they are both powerful. They are driven by their ideolgies. In Glimmer's case: Her pursuit in her own idea of equality. In Silver's case: Anti-equality if you will.

Glim
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>>3759
>>3761
Nigel, here's what you don't understand: you're not entitled to anything here. You are not entitled to have your fanfiction read by us, we don't have to praise it, we don't have to like it, we don't have to tell you it was good. You showed up here, dropped your story into a thread you made and asked people to read it. People read it, and told you what they thought of it, and you got mad because it wasn't what you wanted to hear.

We're not under any obligation to be nice to you, especially considering the way you behave on this board. Your problem is you ask for criticism, but can't handle the criticism you're given. For myself, I've actually given you a quite thorough and honest criticism of your work, and despite the somewhat sarcastic tone I've chosen to write it in, the fact is I've made a genuine effort to be as objective as possible about it. Things that you've done well I've pointed out, and I've tried to give helpful advice wherever I can. The problem is, though, that there's really just not that much I can say about your work that's positive because the frank, honest truth is that your work is objectively terrible. You completely fail to grasp simple things like conflict resolution and story structure. You don't plan or think about anything you write, you just sit down and type whatever autism pops into your mind and add it to the giant ball of twine you call your narrative.

Giving you advice is next to impossible, because for one you usually don't take it and for another this story is just such a gigantic clusterfuck it's hard to even know where to begin, although I feel like I deserve a medal for the effort that I've made. It's like if I were a carpenter and you told me you wanted my opinion on a house you built. Then I drove up to find you'd just made a crude lean-to out of some fucking sticks you found and were standing next to it grinning like you'd built the fucking Taj Mahal or something. What am I supposed to say? What could anyone say?

What is more galling than anything else about you though is your complete failure to grasp just why you keep getting the reactions you get. You think there's some massive cabal of Glimmer fans who followed you from Reddit or Discord or wherever you came here from, just to shit on you unfairly because you said mean things about Glimmer. For the umpteenth time, there is no cabal. There is no secret Discord server where anons sit around thinking up ways to shit on you. The shit you are getting is organic. The people you've been interacting with on this site are the same people who have been on this site from the beginning. You pissed off /mlpol/, and /mlpol/ is reacting to you. That's what's happening here.

Your story is getting a negative reaction because it sucks. You're an objectively bad writer and you have produced an objectively bad work. You're getting personally shit on because you're behaving like an obnoxious sperg. That's literally the extent of this. Ordinarily with writing this hopelessly awful, people would blunt their criticism a bit and tell you that you need to improve a little, or give you a couple of pointers here and there. However, you're just so damned unpleasant, and have such an undeservedly high opinion of yourself and your abilities as a writer, that it gives people genuine pleasure to push you off of your high horse and rub your face in the pile of steaming shit that you made them read. That is why I personally took it upon myself to give your work a complete and thorough analysis, even though I'm sure you haven't bothered to read a word of it; simply because YOU DESERVE THIS. You asked for honest, truthful criticism, and that's what you're getting. No punches whatsoever will be pulled.
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How do you do fellow Glimmerniggers?

I was busy with working on a lolcow indictment a compatriot of mine requested, what happened here? >>169304

Did Nigel finally snap?
Scruffy
Jd5me
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No.3787
>>3786
Nah, just more of the same catch phrases and salt without addressing himself as the cause. If he makes an argument I'll let it stand, but I'm over him shitting on everyone cuz muh Glimmerniggers
Anonymous
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No.3788
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>>3782
>inb4 censorship
I would rather have let his post stand as it is so people can reply. I'm guessing that it was when I mentioned that part about Silver"I practiced time manipulation solely for extending my anal pegging time with my assistant" Star asking Starlight for forgiveness that sent him over the edge again into his typical spergout about muh glimmerniggers missing the point of the readers view on Silver "Silver Spire is just a massive insecurity complex" Star and an actual arc for him to go through and overcome that low point in his life that he caused for everyone, including his supposed lover Twilight whom he barely knows.

>>3782
>Nigel wants more penises for his ass and face, if anyone is available to fulfill his need. I doubt there are enough anons in the Internet, let alone Mlpol, but please pitch in, it's for a good cause.
Aye aye, I wasn't going to stop there anyways so too bad for him.

>>3739
>The second worst kind of fan is attracted to this for the same reason Tomoki from Heaven's Lost Property appeals to them.
You sure love to just copy paste your FIMfic blog points over and over without making a single new point, don't you? Kind of just like how your fic is nothing but continually berating the reader for liking the canon FiM because you don't through the entire 100k slog.

>I've thought up ways to fix a lot of the dumb shit MLPFIM has done, and I'm going to do those things in my fic, one by one
You've continually acted like you're some kind of savior to MLP with your ideas but nobody gives a fuck about your autistic idea of what a perfect FiM to 'fix it' should be, when all you've done is shit all over the canon material that's been accepted for years and replacing it with your own god awful retcon fanon, completely re-writing everything and everyone because you can.

The only thing you've done repeatedly posting here and FiMfiction is demonstrate you have no idea how to write a compelling story, especially not for FiM. You know how to describe things pretty well, but that's it, that's the extent of your writing capability. You have a predictable habit of going off the rails into rambling tangents nobody cares about for way too long, dragging out a scene like 20 pages of kewl magic acrobatics, or 20 pages of lecturing about communism, or 20 pages of wannabe anime scene fights because you can't screen your thoughts at all. It's like clockwork, it's expected to happen every time anyone starts reading your writing and it happens over and over again.

Say, remember this other blog you wrote?
>It's kind of interesting how the Mary Sue and Gary Stu differ, and why the latter is usually more bearable.
>Gary Stus, it tends to be what he is that makes him special.
Your prized character you spend every day shilling is a mary sue and proves that this statement that 'Gary Stus' being more tolerable because it's a guy being 'awesome' or 'bad ass' so the audience should eat it up is objectively false as Silver "My diet? It's all protein, hint-hint nudge nudge, wink"Star is fucking unbearable to put up with and not 'special.'

>Challenges get easier for him
What challenges?

>Bullies grow a heart/get a crush on him
Check.

>God (You) gives him free passes
>Satan (You) gives him free powers
Double check.

>It's like playing reality on easy mode and the player, or in this case the writer, turns the difficulty down every so often.
Double triple check.

>Stronger than everyone. Better than everyone at everything. Even when it makes no sense. Especially when it makes no sense
And put a big ass check for that too.

It's almost like you went into it knowing you were creating Silver "The only thing I cant do is make my microdick grow" Star as a mary sue but then lost the plot up your own ass with letting your ego drive the character and everything he rants about. The result barely amounts to a 'story' and Silver became a blackhole mary sue before you even knew it. And you dont like anyone pointing it out because it's your own bruised ego, to admit fault with Silver is admitting fault in yourself. You think making him do all the 'cool' things like magic parkour acrobatics makes it OK because your blog says Gary Stues are OK so then Silver should be OK except you have no concept of when enough is enough and when everyone is sick and fucking tired of this self-insert having godlike power and control over everyone and everything in FiM, dominating the limelight and time the reader spent with him over better characters as all the ponies everywhere fall at his feet in one way or another.
Anonymous
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No.3789
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It's funny how the people who feel entitled to be treated nicely after they insult me are calling me entitled.
What am I entitled "To"? God knows. Liberals just like using words they heard before, especially negative words. They don't understand what the words mean, but they like the sound of words like "Toxic" and "Entitled" and "Shitty", they make posts like "You are doubleplus ungood" feel more verbose and therefore more cool.
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Jd5me
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>>3788
Knock yourself out
>>3789
>implying this all didn't begin when you refused to take no for an answer the last 8 times you tried to shove this tripe down everyone's throat
Anonymous
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No.3791
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>>3790
It's funny. I make one thread that says "Lol, I just wrote 30k words of ideological debate in a pony fic" and another that says "Look at my fic", and because you don't like its contents, I'm now tresspassing against you. I'm now microaggressing against you. I'm now shoving my (thoughtcrime/shitty/tripe) opinions down your throat.
You're changing up the words to pretend that you aren't just going in circles here.
You want me to feel bad for not loving your cartoon waifu. You're pathetic. You're projecting onto me, because leftists never learn, they only project.
Anonymous
Jd5me
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>>3791
It is funny, that's true, but the rest is palpably and tellingly inaccurate and delusional
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Anonymous
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>>3791
>one thread
>ONE THREAD
You say this while two threads simultaneously top the front page of the main board, and another of your faggoty pet projects has a shill thread on /vx/. Don't lie, we know you've been responsible for at least five other threads trying to shill your crap to everybody else. Pretending you're a poor little victim who dindu nuffin is only further incriminating when anons have dug up everything short of your social security number.