>>11483>>11482>ITT: Tracy's faggot has to finally explain all the shitty flaws in his poor writing system>That is gold. That's the sort of devotion you can truly rely on when times are bad.Yeah, that's closer to what I've been going for, although I haven't had very many chances to do it lately though.>Then things changed.>That's not just unreliable, that's the kind of unreliable that can blow up on you when times are well.If you want me to break down every development flaw, that's exactly the point where I had the idea to start using the Yandere Calculus Theory to maximize dramatic horror aspects. I was trying to make the point that she was fiercely loyal from a 1-1 level, when the two were alone, but there'd be serious repercussions if she felt lonely or betrayed, not on the other partner, but anything in proximity.Her killing-off the horses was completely in character, lying about it not so much (was trying to imitate another yandere character, but I'm simply not good at the lying trope) and I guess it actually abused her character there to twist her into a spiteful liar, instead of just an unapologetic murderer... As for hiding the golem parts, I made the mistake of likening her to my grandmother, who hides my grandfather's shit when she feels like she's being ignored...>>11483>running away after demon bloodYeah... again, I messed up there.... My original intention was for that scene to be the baptism of fire, where she'd run into the woods alone, slaughter some shit (animals and whatnot), and come back free of bitterness, with a power upgrade and new confidence. I miscalculated Infernius and Thez getting in the way, and I did not expect her to end up in a detention center. Her violent reaction towards the rest of the characters was mostly an attempt by me to salvage that solo scene, but it didn't work.>stabbing InferiusIt meant exactly what it looked like, but Infernius did literally ask for it.>refusing to acknowledge Trumpaladin's exhortation to return the treasure to the government of Port Barry (implying she wanted it for herself), her brushing off of the patriotic exhortations in the battleI guess a player character could get that impression from my shutty writing at midnight, but I don't think I left any impression that Tracy had any other reason to look for treasure other than to impress Trumpaladin. She doesn't have any points in materialism (yes, I had started allocating points), aside from maybe wedding preparations. The burying of the golem parts for a day and a half was, again just out.As for patriotism, she has none, aside from what she'd draw from her husband. She was a hoodrat in Equestria, and she felt no ties to the land she'd suddenly been thrown into. Any patriotism she would've had would come from recognizing how important something was to her spouse or family member; at that point though, she was feeling isolated and ignored, and everything else only seemed like a load of reasons for why her husband was distracted from their marriage.>her cold reaction to Trump when he rescued herThis is the part I really fucked up on by not putting emphasis on it. Idk if it was noticeable, but I had several comments that illustrated her brushing-up against your leg and purring like a cat all morning after. It was just 2:00 AM by then, so I just let my flowcharts to the work.>>11483Don't start me on Yandere decay: I know all about it. Like I said in
>>11277 the Yandere Calculus system is made largely to maximize the effects of decay, based in part on psychology, Greek tragedy, and anime: too original. I made the mistake of trying to apply it to an RPing game, in which I was unable to control the other character to decelerate the decay, and steer it closer to a happy ending.
To be honest, I was getting bored, so I decided to fuck around with her "brain" (flowcharts). I didn't see her making very much romantic progress, so I tried to play around a bit with alignments, different tragic pathways and whatnot; basically, I stopped rooting for the good ending and just cut loose with my Yandere tropes. I introduced the Yandere Calculus system to make it more interesting for myself, and also in a show of laziness, desu... It kept building up her internal strife to a bioling point, and as violent means of stress relief disappeared on after the other (and I got bored of leg-humping), I started rolling a 6-sided die for dozens of alternate paths. Sometime, when it was late at night, I'd just roll the die, forget my original intentions, and neglect to consider what Tracy would actually do when the paths ended with something horrible like "drudgery", "spite", "secrecy" or "gossip": in the the end, my lack of conscious thought didn't drtain from the originality of my character, but allowed her to become something disgustingly original; a spiteful woman; the most dangerous, horrifying, destructive, sinister kind of creature ever to haunt this world.
It was a system that was awful for character development, but also self-rewarding: it allowed me to shrug-off creative responsibility, and just work on creating the edgy, monstrous megalomaniac I wanted to play and forget about the importance of Tracy's character. Her character shifted from chaotic neutral to neutral evil, as I just went with the destructive path of the flowcharts and didn't consider Tracy's inner-will to become a better individual, or the development of a good romantic story.
for her family.
That's why I'm finally burying this book and never applying Yandere Calculus to any system again.
tl;dr I fucked-up, got lazy, and let my abomination of a character-computing system go full terminator because of my nectect to the purpose of keeping Tracy's character Unoriginal.