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Torso is definitely a lot better but the lower section of the back legs should be longer than the thighs so you can raise the hocks. Should also be a little bigger. Also they should be spread out a bit to give her a stable looking stance. she looks like somepony could tip her over while shes sleeping standing up. She is supposed to be showing her junk as well so all the more reason to spread her legs apart. The front legs could be a tiny bit bigger but the proportions are good. Where the shoulder connects to the chest should move like a half millimeter up and to the left. It should be in front of the chest not to the side of it.

The ears look like human ears and the hair ends weirdly halfway up the back of her head I would fix that. If she is looking at her hooves then the ears and hair would sill be in a drastically different orientation. Also her torso would be covering most of her head if that was the case.

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Hocks are the weird backwards elbow looking joints on the hind legs.

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Ok so the head is better but still too small. The eyes are too small and too high, and the chin looks a little chubby near the neck so I would push that up. The part where the ear connects to the neck near is wrong; the line should go behind the ear not in front of the ear. Ear starts too high up also. The hind legs look like cylinders pretty much which isn't how the show design looks. The sketch of the hind leg to the right shows that it is basically a long cone shape that slightly curves. Butt's fore-cheek also goes all the way up to the tail, and the belly you drew that connects into the back hind leg looks weird. It should be round, following the circle you were supposed to draw as an underlay. It ends at about the same spot though.

It also doesn't look like you are properly construction your chest using two circles that are the same size. The butt isn't bigger than the chest unless you are going for extreme foreshortening which the show doesn't do. The front leg's shoulder should be on the chest and in front of it, not to the right side of it.

There's more I could say but you should really just do quicker sketches until you have the proportions and anatomy down, kind of like I'm doing in the redline.

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