Hey, Anons. I've got a pony-themed parody I need help working with but I'm a bit stuck for lyrics and most of the other places don't seem to be helping me much these days.
Given that this place has written some pretty decent MLP parodies before, I thought I could consult your help on this one.
It's called "A True True Fash (Helps A Rebbe Wrap Up)". It's the first one on the list, you can't miss it. Please and thank you!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZRxvA9Tw6om89eI22_XLdiGuRlEOOkx0Nb_kG-_2hxA/edit
/mlpol/ - My Little Politics
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>>340537
Tried a little edit, not sure if good or bad, but perhaps sparks some inspiration.
>These years of winter coolness
>were absolutely gay
>
>We've kept our hoovsies warm at home
>Time off from work to play
>But the time for us is running out
>And our people have become lost
>
>And the rules have turned against us now,
>This nonce is getting old
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>
>The time has come to welcome spring
>And all things warm and green
>But it's also time to say goodbye
>To all the subversive fiends
>We move the clouds
>And we melt the white snow
>When it’s all cleared up
>Our warmth and beauty will glow!
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - T'morrow our time is here
>
>Our greatness hibernate
>Under the snow and ice
>Soon it will be waking up
>So quietly and nice
>We help it gaining strenght
>Fix the broken souls
>We welcome back those led astray
>So our families can grow!
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - T'morrow our time is here
>
>Now that we know what they all do
>We have to find our place
>And help with all of our heart
>Tough task ahead we face
>
>How will I do without my vril?
>Help the Earth pony way
>We need to belong so we must
>Do our best today
>Do our best today!
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - T'morrow our time is here
>
>To see the light (To see the light)
>That shines (That shines)
>From our history (History)
>
>T'morrow our time is here
>T'morrow our time is here
>T'morrow our time is here!
Tried a little edit, not sure if good or bad, but perhaps sparks some inspiration.
>These years of winter coolness
>were absolutely gay
>
>We've kept our hoovsies warm at home
>Time off from work to play
>But the time for us is running out
>And our people have become lost
>
>And the rules have turned against us now,
>This nonce is getting old
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>
>The time has come to welcome spring
>And all things warm and green
>But it's also time to say goodbye
>To all the subversive fiends
>We move the clouds
>And we melt the white snow
>When it’s all cleared up
>Our warmth and beauty will glow!
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - T'morrow our time is here
>
>Our greatness hibernate
>Under the snow and ice
>Soon it will be waking up
>So quietly and nice
>We help it gaining strenght
>Fix the broken souls
>We welcome back those led astray
>So our families can grow!
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - T'morrow our time is here
>
>Now that we know what they all do
>We have to find our place
>And help with all of our heart
>Tough task ahead we face
>
>How will I do without my vril?
>Help the Earth pony way
>We need to belong so we must
>Do our best today
>Do our best today!
>
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps those lost in need
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
> - T'morrow our time is here
>
>To see the light (To see the light)
>That shines (That shines)
>From our history (History)
>
>T'morrow our time is here
>T'morrow our time is here
>T'morrow our time is here!
oh gosh... when this is finished, can it be introduced as the intro for the mlpol panel for /mlp/con?
>>340408 →
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>>340542
Some of these were good, but I definitely think that some of the original lines could still do with much more tweaking
>winter coolness
and
>Help the Earth pony way
for example, but otherwise, there are some that I think I'll keep.
>>340544
Maybe! Whoever's in charge of the /mlpol/ panel should best talk to me about this, though. See if they actually want it in, or if they'd rather release it on /mlpol/ before I release the video on my channel, et cetera.
Some of these were good, but I definitely think that some of the original lines could still do with much more tweaking
>winter coolness
and
>Help the Earth pony way
for example, but otherwise, there are some that I think I'll keep.
>>340544
Maybe! Whoever's in charge of the /mlpol/ panel should best talk to me about this, though. See if they actually want it in, or if they'd rather release it on /mlpol/ before I release the video on my channel, et cetera.
>>340611
I don't doubt that, but I came to this place for help with lyrics, since I'm stuck in rewriting some portions to my liking.
Again, I could really use the help.
I don't doubt that, but I came to this place for help with lyrics, since I'm stuck in rewriting some portions to my liking.
Again, I could really use the help.
>>340615
It's more like a mashup of Winter Wrap Up with True True Friend's chorus, but yeah.
I think this place once made a parody of Winter Wrap Up before, but I feel like some of the lyrics would date it too much and I need to find a way that's able to be somewhat "timeless" lyric wise.
It's more like a mashup of Winter Wrap Up with True True Friend's chorus, but yeah.
I think this place once made a parody of Winter Wrap Up before, but I feel like some of the lyrics would date it too much and I need to find a way that's able to be somewhat "timeless" lyric wise.
>>340609
>>winter coolness
>and
>>Help the Earth pony way
Yes, I was trying to think of something for them also the "white snow", but could not think of any at the time. But I will keep on thinking and see if I can come up whit some good ideas.
>>winter coolness
>and
>>Help the Earth pony way
Yes, I was trying to think of something for them also the "white snow", but could not think of any at the time. But I will keep on thinking and see if I can come up whit some good ideas.
>>340875
I see.
Keep working at it in, in that case. I'm just hoping this thread won't go under if it's left out too long or something.
I see.
Keep working at it in, in that case. I'm just hoping this thread won't go under if it's left out too long or something.
>>340906
>I'm just hoping this thread won't go under if it's left out too long or something.
Don't think that is an immediate problem. The oldest thread in the catalog was last bumped 2 months ago.
>I'm just hoping this thread won't go under if it's left out too long or something.
Don't think that is an immediate problem. The oldest thread in the catalog was last bumped 2 months ago.
>>340917
In that case, get back to me when you can.
I guess I'm just not used to how slow this place can be when it comes to feedback on stuff like this...
In that case, get back to me when you can.
I guess I'm just not used to how slow this place can be when it comes to feedback on stuff like this...
>>340537
Is it really that hard to think of how to change words in a song?
Maybe I could propose a different song for you guys to help make a parody of that probably isn't as intensive as this one.
Like say, the "Horse-Wessel Lied"?
Is it really that hard to think of how to change words in a song?
Maybe I could propose a different song for you guys to help make a parody of that probably isn't as intensive as this one.
Like say, the "Horse-Wessel Lied"?
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>>340537
Just thought I'd update some of the lyrical changes made since then so this thread won't die so fast. The parts in green are the parts I feel like I'd definitely like to keep in the song, but the parts without
>These years of our subversion
>were absolutely gay
We've kept our hoofsies warm at home
Time off from work to play
>But the time for us is running out,
>and our people have been sold
>And the rules have turned against us now,
>This nonce is getting old
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help you see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>The time has come to welcome spring
>And all things warm and green
>But it's also time to say goodbye
>To all subversive fiends
We move the clouds
And we melt the white snow
>When it’s all cleared up
>Our warmth and beauty will glow!
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>T'morrow our Reich spring is here
>Our snipers hibernate
>Under the snow and ice
>But soon they’ll all be popping heads
>So quietly and nice
>We help them gather up some food
>Build their hides below
>We welcome back our displaced kind
>So their families can grow!
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>T'morrow our Reich spring is here
>Now that we know what they all do
>We have to find our place
>And help with all of our heart
>Tough task ahead we face
>How will I do without my vril?
Help the Earth pony way
>We need to thrive so we must
>Do our best today
>Do our best today!
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help you see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>T'morrow our Reich is here
>To see the light (To see the light)
>That shines (That shines)
>From our history
>T'morrow our Reich is here
>T'morrow our Reich is here
>T'morrow our time is here!
Thoughts?
Just thought I'd update some of the lyrical changes made since then so this thread won't die so fast. The parts in green are the parts I feel like I'd definitely like to keep in the song, but the parts without
>These years of our subversion
>were absolutely gay
We've kept our hoofsies warm at home
Time off from work to play
>But the time for us is running out,
>and our people have been sold
>And the rules have turned against us now,
>This nonce is getting old
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help you see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>The time has come to welcome spring
>And all things warm and green
>But it's also time to say goodbye
>To all subversive fiends
We move the clouds
And we melt the white snow
>When it’s all cleared up
>Our warmth and beauty will glow!
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>T'morrow our Reich spring is here
>Our snipers hibernate
>Under the snow and ice
>But soon they’ll all be popping heads
>So quietly and nice
>We help them gather up some food
>Build their hides below
>We welcome back our displaced kind
>So their families can grow!
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help them see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>To see the light that shines from our history
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>T'morrow our Reich spring is here
>Now that we know what they all do
>We have to find our place
>And help with all of our heart
>Tough task ahead we face
>How will I do without my vril?
Help the Earth pony way
>We need to thrive so we must
>Do our best today
>Do our best today!
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>A fash will be there to help you see
>A true, true fash helps a fash in need
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>Rebbe Wrap Up! Rebbe Wrap Up!
>T'morrow our Reich is here
>To see the light (To see the light)
>That shines (That shines)
>From our history
>T'morrow our Reich is here
>T'morrow our Reich is here
>T'morrow our time is here!
Thoughts?
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