>>107669Not in the mood to draw tonight, but I'll bump the thread with some tips
An excellent book to read is Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain, it's a classic, and I realised relatively recently that my art teacher for 5 years basically did nothing but lift from that book, we even did the exact exercises in the book as lessons.
The bottom line for the entire thing is that art is not about the ability to draw itself, it's about the ability to accurately translate what you can see to your hand to draw.
Try to look at parts of something in relation to other parts, it helps you keep everything proportional. Don't be afraid to long breaks, even up to a couple days, to help get rid of what you think it SHOULD look like, so when you come back you can see what it actually looks like. I'm working on an irl painting right now, and after I finished the preliminary sketch for hours it looked fine, ready to paint, but I left it for a couple days while I wait on paints to come, and when I came back I reevaluated and decided I needed to enlarge some parts, and change the angles on a whole bunch of stuff.
Specifically for ponies one of the things that will instantly elevate your work is noticing colour, I could be wrong but I don't think I've ever seen a pony from the show with a black outline, they all seem to have a slightly darker shade of their main body colour for their outline.
Their manes and tails are usually all done in a darker shade of 1 of the colours of their mane, usually whichever colour is most prevalent in their mane or tail (in the case of Rainbow Dash it's the colour that most prevalent in her design over all: blue). The mane or body colour clashing too much with an outline colour can make a drawing seem "off" even if it's drawn perfectly fine. I had that problem when drawing Leslie (ancap pony) all the depictions I'd seen used black to outline her entirely but once i made her body outline yellow, a black outline clashed horribly with the dark yellow of her mane and I eventually decided on a dark reddish colour as something sort of in between black and yellow.
Also as a rule of thumb I tend to go with "there's no such thing as black" something an art teacher once told me about drawing still life. While it isn't strictly true it has uses, effectively what he meant was that in nature most things that may appear black are actually dark shades of multiple colours, and you should build up layers of dark browns and purples etc to create black rather than using a black pencil. Similarly if you're drawing digitally to create a more realistic natural look, avoid using black, use a dark shade of something else, blue or purple are my go-to blacks. If you want something to look digital then use black, however in MLP black is used very sparingly it only really seems to appear on eyes and villains. Even the night sky is usually blue or purple, notably the zebras don't have black stripes, even their hooves are dark grey, noticeably lighter than the black used on their eyes . You'll notice in both my drawings of Leslie her hair is actually a dark grey and not true black, it's a small detail but it's something to remember if you want to try and draw show quality, because the show doesn't use much black, it's bright and pastel coloured.
I'm not really sure what else I can think of right now, i may randomly post more tips if I remember anything specific. But for the most part my number 1 tip is just pay attention to how they do things in the show. The designs are all relatively simple and they actually don't have much variety, they tend to depict things from the same angles for your average scene. Use reference, constantly look at how they did something in the show while you're drawing, or some of the better drawings in the "how to draw ponies" guides have every possible angle if you need help.
For you specifically there's some tips i have for your drawing here
>>107579 but I'd want to draw over it to illustrate my points and it's rude enough as it is directing this blog post of art tips at you.
If you want advice on that drawing specifically though let me know.