Does anyone remember those greentext stories we used to have on MLPchan and /mulp/ a few years ago?
The story happened in a socialist-technocrat union of countries far away from Equestria where ponies are brainwashed into egalitarianism, thought control and mass surveillance, all ruled by President Lorelei Kernav, and a few more ponies who desire to dominate the world. ( Way before Glimmer )
If you got a complete archive, drop them ITT!
/mlpol/ - My Little Politics
Archived thread
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>>109199
When an industria thread appears, it's usually headcanon discussion
So far, it's about a 1984 pony dystopia where magic and friendship doesn't exist.
So far, the user diamond tiara was writting a story where diamond tiara and nyx were kidnapped and brainwashed to "coexist" within the city.
There must be some archived threads in desuarchive /mlp/, and there was a thread on the non-longer existing board /cyb/.
You can check them for further info
When an industria thread appears, it's usually headcanon discussion
So far, it's about a 1984 pony dystopia where magic and friendship doesn't exist.
So far, the user diamond tiara was writting a story where diamond tiara and nyx were kidnapped and brainwashed to "coexist" within the city.
There must be some archived threads in desuarchive /mlp/, and there was a thread on the non-longer existing board /cyb/.
You can check them for further info
>>109205
I would question why we make a board hidden since there isn't much boards to begin with, but meh.
Whatever the guys up there say what's good
I would question why we make a board hidden since there isn't much boards to begin with, but meh.
Whatever the guys up there say what's good
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oki, since there's a thread about it here's something i've been working on, it'a bit long but if you have an idea, tell me what you think about that story, I'm still thinking of going further and continuing it after the last chapter, as originally intended.
https://u.teknik.io/tsajl.doc
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/343510/the-diamond-in-the-gear
the password is just "poni" for fimfic users.
note, it's really the first story I'm really working on, the rest is just greentext.
https://u.teknik.io/tsajl.doc
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/343510/the-diamond-in-the-gear
the password is just "poni" for fimfic users.
note, it's really the first story I'm really working on, the rest is just greentext.
>>113259
i think i had written a second part but it's completely gone in the wrong direction, no further ideas right now. but well i don't know if i'm really good at all this. i only started to greentext again recently.
i think i had written a second part but it's completely gone in the wrong direction, no further ideas right now. but well i don't know if i'm really good at all this. i only started to greentext again recently.
>>113331
DT could be found dying, but healed by a unicorn in some old factory, and learn more about this strange world, and warn them about who is Nyx, if she knows her weaknesses.
DT could be found dying, but healed by a unicorn in some old factory, and learn more about this strange world, and warn them about who is Nyx, if she knows her weaknesses.
>>113331
I don't know why you say you left the story in a bad spot.
>good shit
- dt is out of industria
- she made contact with her friend
- she can run away since industria isn't as powerful as they say outside their country
>bad shit
- nyx is still inside
- she has been brainwashed
- she will kill everything in a near future, including all industria
- dt is stuck in a forgotten factory, so she won't have anything from herbs to heal, to common grass to eat
You are in the moment dude, the do-or-die path. I know you will write something amazing.
You can do it, i believe in you
I don't know why you say you left the story in a bad spot.
>good shit
- dt is out of industria
- she made contact with her friend
- she can run away since industria isn't as powerful as they say outside their country
>bad shit
- nyx is still inside
- she has been brainwashed
- she will kill everything in a near future, including all industria
- dt is stuck in a forgotten factory, so she won't have anything from herbs to heal, to common grass to eat
You are in the moment dude, the do-or-die path. I know you will write something amazing.
You can do it, i believe in you
>>113384
's a good idea. i've been letting this story in a hiatus for a year or something so thanks for the ideas.
>>113391
nah, she's still in Industria, just outside the city. she might make another friend. escaping industria is another story, i keep that for the end. and yeah, something will have to be done with Nyx, since Kernav is just testing her so far, she will want to know how to use her as a weapon, maybe sending her back to Equestria, to provoke a crisis in Canterlot, and then take the control after removing Nyx properly, knowing her weakness. a bit like some terrorist organization in the middle west.
's a good idea. i've been letting this story in a hiatus for a year or something so thanks for the ideas.
>>113391
nah, she's still in Industria, just outside the city. she might make another friend. escaping industria is another story, i keep that for the end. and yeah, something will have to be done with Nyx, since Kernav is just testing her so far, she will want to know how to use her as a weapon, maybe sending her back to Equestria, to provoke a crisis in Canterlot, and then take the control after removing Nyx properly, knowing her weakness. a bit like some terrorist organization in the middle west.
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>>113425
Nyx is the name of that black alicorn filly OC ( and forced meme) everyone on /mlp/ loves to hate with a passion - and want to see massacred like a hundred of fluffy ponies boiling alive in a barrel of sulfuric acid.
it's based on this story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/41596/past-sins
yeah i kind of fell for that meme, but decided to make something useful with her, not being like a bot.
jokingly, the plot of this story on MLPchan back then was "let's find a sidekick to DiamondTiara" well
>NYX!
and here we go, i kind of had to find her a role and it got me into reading Past Sins, which is actually not bad at all, storywise.
Nyx is the name of that black alicorn filly OC ( and forced meme) everyone on /mlp/ loves to hate with a passion - and want to see massacred like a hundred of fluffy ponies boiling alive in a barrel of sulfuric acid.
it's based on this story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/41596/past-sins
yeah i kind of fell for that meme, but decided to make something useful with her, not being like a bot.
jokingly, the plot of this story on MLPchan back then was "let's find a sidekick to DiamondTiara" well
>NYX!
and here we go, i kind of had to find her a role and it got me into reading Past Sins, which is actually not bad at all, storywise.
>>113437
While Past Sins is well written, it's funamentally just one of those Naruto fanfics where he's adopted by Tsunade or Kakashi or Hinata's Dad as a kid, and has a happy-ish childhood while The Evil Village Council and an unusually-evil country leader(Celestia/Third Hokage, who may or may not be forced to do this by Danzo) wants the kid taken away from his foster parents because of the power sealed within the orphan kid.
It was a cliche in the Naruto fandom, a cliche that was never done well. It felt fresh and new in that fandom, because it was made during the early days of the fandom when ANYTHING could become a meme and stay a meme. And then it overstayed its welcome so much it became a meme, due to having no substance beyond "Cute filly wants to be regular cute filly but isn't".
Stories with Nyx are usually much better than the story she came from, for that reason.
While Past Sins is well written, it's funamentally just one of those Naruto fanfics where he's adopted by Tsunade or Kakashi or Hinata's Dad as a kid, and has a happy-ish childhood while The Evil Village Council and an unusually-evil country leader(Celestia/Third Hokage, who may or may not be forced to do this by Danzo) wants the kid taken away from his foster parents because of the power sealed within the orphan kid.
It was a cliche in the Naruto fandom, a cliche that was never done well. It felt fresh and new in that fandom, because it was made during the early days of the fandom when ANYTHING could become a meme and stay a meme. And then it overstayed its welcome so much it became a meme, due to having no substance beyond "Cute filly wants to be regular cute filly but isn't".
Stories with Nyx are usually much better than the story she came from, for that reason.
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>>113451
This. It's not a bad story, just a bit cliche. The author definitely has skills and potential. The first half was wonderful and I fell in love with the little filly no, not in that way you pervert, but maybe I'm just a sucker for cute characters and parental relationships.
The second was okay but extremely predictable. It was rather dull as well since the protagonist was more powerful than any of the villains and had them literally serve her. It kept falling back on the same "man vs. self" conflict that amounted to a simple identity crisis. One could always see what the protagonist would eventually do and what would happen, but it stretched on without any real consequences. It can be compared to Samurai Jack but where the protagonist is Aku, he's not really evil, and he never committed any evil greater than a temporary darkness. The ending would have been satisfying had it not been so predictable, had there been actual redemption the revelation that "no one was really evil but was mind-controlled by negative emotions" was really lame, and/or if there were real consequences.
As it is, Nyx is a very likeable character and deserves a good story.
This. It's not a bad story, just a bit cliche. The author definitely has skills and potential. The first half was wonderful and I fell in love with the little filly no, not in that way you pervert, but maybe I'm just a sucker for cute characters and parental relationships.
The second was okay but extremely predictable. It was rather dull as well since the protagonist was more powerful than any of the villains and had them literally serve her. It kept falling back on the same "man vs. self" conflict that amounted to a simple identity crisis. One could always see what the protagonist would eventually do and what would happen, but it stretched on without any real consequences. It can be compared to Samurai Jack but where the protagonist is Aku, he's not really evil, and he never committed any evil greater than a temporary darkness. The ending would have been satisfying had it not been so predictable, had there been actual redemption the revelation that "no one was really evil but was mind-controlled by negative emotions" was really lame, and/or if there were real consequences.
As it is, Nyx is a very likeable character and deserves a good story.
>>113618
That's the first intelligent thing I've ever read from a Nyx fan. In over five years. I only ever saw "Nyx haha Glimmer haha they're both best ponies your waifus are shit haha! if you disagree you care too much about pony" on /mlp/.
That's the first intelligent thing I've ever read from a Nyx fan. In over five years. I only ever saw "Nyx haha Glimmer haha they're both best ponies your waifus are shit haha! if you disagree you care too much about pony" on /mlp/.
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>>113451
>>113618
>>113645
yeah and that's the challenge, make something neat out of a character hates, just like Lauren Faust rebooted My Little Pony. now let's have some greens.
>Urbania, Industria
>Nyx is accompanied with a few agents of the Securitron, trotting proudly with them, in the presidential building.
>The president is waiting for her
>Lorelei: ""Nyx! Gentlecolts! Wonderful work last night, I gotta say, it's your first time and you managed to uncover a network of corrupted officials, AND eliminate a threat we have been tracking for ages, you're skilled. Oh yeah, you're impressive."
>Nyx's smiling, a bit hesitating "I'm not certain about a 100% success, maybe I need more training."
>The securitron agents remains silent, standing still as their military discipline taught them
>Nyx:"Also, it's the first time I work in a team and this is kind of... new to me"
>Lorelei:"Like I explained to you, you're different, my little pony. You know, every pony here have to be the same. It's what keeps us from being in conflict, it's what preserves the social cohesion and general friendship, but we have to be different, if we want to be the guardians of this peace and homogeneity. Unicorns and pegasus wants to destroy this order, an order ponies wanted, regardless their fur patterns! And it's a bit our role."
>Nyx is observing the architecture and aesthetics of the presidential office, and the view over the never ending city as the sun is rising, filtering through the clouds and the gray sky.
>Nyx:"Unicorns are strange, I've been raised by one partially, before I found out she lied to me, manipulated me,"
>Lorelei:"From what I heard, Twilight Sparkle has a strange attraction over young fillies. She's infertile, and can't be naturally pregnant I heard, so she's going to consider maybe kidnapping a random filly to fulfill her possessive motherhood desires. As somepony who studied psychology initially, this is how it works. This is why I did organize your kidnapping."
>The white mare laughed. "Or rather, enhanced meeting. It was clear that the two alicorns had decided of your fate, because you could've changed the world. They really would've killed you for threatening them."
>Nyx's being remembered DiamondTiara's quote "What if one day I become the ruler of Industria?"
>Lorelei:"This is a democracy, I'll ensure the ponies who can vote will make sure to vote for you, for this you need to prove what you're worth or ponies won't ever follow you, but really I like your ambition! But before starting in politics, you have all the time to grow up!"
>Nyx's feeling like she's really going to be special, old memories and envies once buried are emerging again in her mind. The idea that she could rule Equestria.
>Lorelei: "But is that really what you want? Ruling a country and its satellite states across the continent, and managing the world is a full time job. I'm looking at that clock all the time. All of this is management, being president isn't being a queen or a princess, it's being active and devoted, and making one important calculated decision very minute."
>Nyx's heart just broke "Oh.."
>A wall of television screens in the presidential office is displaying the last news, and various data related to the economy and production. "More information about the attack on the Metropolis 043 Distribution Center, where a pegasus armed with a deadly neurotoxin have been intercepted by the authorities."
>Stock footage images of another pegasus being arrested, with other ponies terrorized around
>"The female unicorn accompanying the pegasus has been neutralized later yesterday by a squadron of the Securitron during her escape, the security cameras revealed she took an hostage filly, Darlene Tomska, 12 years old, and used her as an equine shield using a mind control spell. The corpse of the juvenile pony haven't been retrieved but the two dissidents who have been neutralized are probably part of a much larger group of unicorn supremacists, but which is shrinking everyday thanks to the efforts of our for-"
>Lorelei sighs as she mutes the sound with some mugshots " You know, There's no vacancies in this job, I have this mandate for ten years, started in the year 0114 and it will end in six years, renewable once, if I accept. I still want to see you as the one who will lead the liberation of the world from three alicorns. And I heard a fourth's in the making. We really need to advance if we want the civilization to keep going. I'm not limiting myself to the 260 million ponies here in the union, but have to take in account 3 billion of equines across the world."
>Nyx: "Could I ... get another name or being called something else than an alicorn?"
>Lorelei: "Uhm. Yes, what would be your... preferred species?
>Nyx: "I haven't took the time to think about it before. Pony?"
>Lorelei: "Agreed. Note that we never called you an alicorn, if you encounter somepony who dares mis-speciing you for an alicorn, this is now a federal offense. "
>Nyx: "...Thank you, President Kernav!"
>Lorelei: "Nyx, call me Lorelei! Is there everything you need otherwise? Want anything? Videogame, television, entertainment... "
>Nyx:"There's... Some books Twilight never wanted me to read. I know these might be illegal here due to the subversive nature"
>Lorelei:"Nyx, darling, you must understand that you're not these ponies, you're no more Twilight's pony, make us a list of their titles and I'll charge my intelligence services to acquire them for you as soon as possible, please check this with Edwin Bardhall, I'm delivering the service request permission form immediately!"
>She's signing a paper and gives it to the filly.
>Nyx smiles, boops Lorelei's nose.
>The white mare in black uniform doesn't understand why she does this
>Nyx's leaving with the guards Thanks, Lorelei!"
>The presidential mare never been used to this kind of affectiveness
>>113618
>>113645
yeah and that's the challenge, make something neat out of a character hates, just like Lauren Faust rebooted My Little Pony. now let's have some greens.
>Urbania, Industria
>Nyx is accompanied with a few agents of the Securitron, trotting proudly with them, in the presidential building.
>The president is waiting for her
>Lorelei: ""Nyx! Gentlecolts! Wonderful work last night, I gotta say, it's your first time and you managed to uncover a network of corrupted officials, AND eliminate a threat we have been tracking for ages, you're skilled. Oh yeah, you're impressive."
>Nyx's smiling, a bit hesitating "I'm not certain about a 100% success, maybe I need more training."
>The securitron agents remains silent, standing still as their military discipline taught them
>Nyx:"Also, it's the first time I work in a team and this is kind of... new to me"
>Lorelei:"Like I explained to you, you're different, my little pony. You know, every pony here have to be the same. It's what keeps us from being in conflict, it's what preserves the social cohesion and general friendship, but we have to be different, if we want to be the guardians of this peace and homogeneity. Unicorns and pegasus wants to destroy this order, an order ponies wanted, regardless their fur patterns! And it's a bit our role."
>Nyx is observing the architecture and aesthetics of the presidential office, and the view over the never ending city as the sun is rising, filtering through the clouds and the gray sky.
>Nyx:"Unicorns are strange, I've been raised by one partially, before I found out she lied to me, manipulated me,"
>Lorelei:"From what I heard, Twilight Sparkle has a strange attraction over young fillies. She's infertile, and can't be naturally pregnant I heard, so she's going to consider maybe kidnapping a random filly to fulfill her possessive motherhood desires. As somepony who studied psychology initially, this is how it works. This is why I did organize your kidnapping."
>The white mare laughed. "Or rather, enhanced meeting. It was clear that the two alicorns had decided of your fate, because you could've changed the world. They really would've killed you for threatening them."
>Nyx's being remembered DiamondTiara's quote "What if one day I become the ruler of Industria?"
>Lorelei:"This is a democracy, I'll ensure the ponies who can vote will make sure to vote for you, for this you need to prove what you're worth or ponies won't ever follow you, but really I like your ambition! But before starting in politics, you have all the time to grow up!"
>Nyx's feeling like she's really going to be special, old memories and envies once buried are emerging again in her mind. The idea that she could rule Equestria.
>Lorelei: "But is that really what you want? Ruling a country and its satellite states across the continent, and managing the world is a full time job. I'm looking at that clock all the time. All of this is management, being president isn't being a queen or a princess, it's being active and devoted, and making one important calculated decision very minute."
>Nyx's heart just broke "Oh.."
>A wall of television screens in the presidential office is displaying the last news, and various data related to the economy and production. "More information about the attack on the Metropolis 043 Distribution Center, where a pegasus armed with a deadly neurotoxin have been intercepted by the authorities."
>Stock footage images of another pegasus being arrested, with other ponies terrorized around
>"The female unicorn accompanying the pegasus has been neutralized later yesterday by a squadron of the Securitron during her escape, the security cameras revealed she took an hostage filly, Darlene Tomska, 12 years old, and used her as an equine shield using a mind control spell. The corpse of the juvenile pony haven't been retrieved but the two dissidents who have been neutralized are probably part of a much larger group of unicorn supremacists, but which is shrinking everyday thanks to the efforts of our for-"
>Lorelei sighs as she mutes the sound with some mugshots " You know, There's no vacancies in this job, I have this mandate for ten years, started in the year 0114 and it will end in six years, renewable once, if I accept. I still want to see you as the one who will lead the liberation of the world from three alicorns. And I heard a fourth's in the making. We really need to advance if we want the civilization to keep going. I'm not limiting myself to the 260 million ponies here in the union, but have to take in account 3 billion of equines across the world."
>Nyx: "Could I ... get another name or being called something else than an alicorn?"
>Lorelei: "Uhm. Yes, what would be your... preferred species?
>Nyx: "I haven't took the time to think about it before. Pony?"
>Lorelei: "Agreed. Note that we never called you an alicorn, if you encounter somepony who dares mis-speciing you for an alicorn, this is now a federal offense. "
>Nyx: "...Thank you, President Kernav!"
>Lorelei: "Nyx, call me Lorelei! Is there everything you need otherwise? Want anything? Videogame, television, entertainment... "
>Nyx:"There's... Some books Twilight never wanted me to read. I know these might be illegal here due to the subversive nature"
>Lorelei:"Nyx, darling, you must understand that you're not these ponies, you're no more Twilight's pony, make us a list of their titles and I'll charge my intelligence services to acquire them for you as soon as possible, please check this with Edwin Bardhall, I'm delivering the service request permission form immediately!"
>She's signing a paper and gives it to the filly.
>Nyx smiles, boops Lorelei's nose.
>The white mare in black uniform doesn't understand why she does this
>Nyx's leaving with the guards Thanks, Lorelei!"
>The presidential mare never been used to this kind of affectiveness
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>>113743
>As soon Nyx and the two agents accompanying her leaves the presidential office, Lorelei's going back to her desk, motorized doors are closing and she's setting up her screen in video-conference mode.
>She's sitting on her seat, in front of some more ponies in uniform.
>Lorelei:"Greetings!"
>Vernon Dagglehetch, a stallion :"President Kernav, we have read the report of yesterday's operation"
>Lorelei:"It was undoubtedly a success, we're gaining the desire for our ponies to demand more security as you desired."
>Hedda Trotshaw, a unicorn mare :"The project Njorun should remain kept in secrecy, training an alicorn to do the job of Securitron Corp is audacious, but comes with risks. If the public or a foreign intelligence finds about it, illegal information networks will spread, I doubt our communication networks can cover this efficiently without leaving a doubt about the integrity of the government, but what if the subject goes rogue?"
>Lorelei:"There is no risks, the MPCB has analyzed and have determined everything we must know about Nyx. I mean project Njorun, we remain in control, if the subject escapes our control, I'm launching the neutralization protocol without any hesitation"
>Igmar Bardhem, a stallion :"On the strategy of using Njorun on external operations, dismantling the loyalists in Kolechia, you have our approval. This will dismantle their government, and the population will embrace our troops. There's a young pony there who's regarding us as an example, please check his dossier. He will be our ally and the first democratic president of the Republic of Kolechia."
>Edward Padgestone, an old, fat stallion: "And as usual, we inherit their mineral and fossil resources, this is promising! Old Celestia will whine again at our methods and all, I can't wait!"
>Lorelei's smiling:"All according to the plan. Mares and gentlecolts, to the future of our new world order!"
>All are rejoicing, retaining some creepy laughter, then stands still, shouting altogether "Glory to Industria!"
>The camera pans out of the office, and the building dominating the governmental and control building complex, with desert streets, and a constant smog.
>As soon Nyx and the two agents accompanying her leaves the presidential office, Lorelei's going back to her desk, motorized doors are closing and she's setting up her screen in video-conference mode.
>She's sitting on her seat, in front of some more ponies in uniform.
>Lorelei:"Greetings!"
>Vernon Dagglehetch, a stallion :"President Kernav, we have read the report of yesterday's operation"
>Lorelei:"It was undoubtedly a success, we're gaining the desire for our ponies to demand more security as you desired."
>Hedda Trotshaw, a unicorn mare :"The project Njorun should remain kept in secrecy, training an alicorn to do the job of Securitron Corp is audacious, but comes with risks. If the public or a foreign intelligence finds about it, illegal information networks will spread, I doubt our communication networks can cover this efficiently without leaving a doubt about the integrity of the government, but what if the subject goes rogue?"
>Lorelei:"There is no risks, the MPCB has analyzed and have determined everything we must know about Nyx. I mean project Njorun, we remain in control, if the subject escapes our control, I'm launching the neutralization protocol without any hesitation"
>Igmar Bardhem, a stallion :"On the strategy of using Njorun on external operations, dismantling the loyalists in Kolechia, you have our approval. This will dismantle their government, and the population will embrace our troops. There's a young pony there who's regarding us as an example, please check his dossier. He will be our ally and the first democratic president of the Republic of Kolechia."
>Edward Padgestone, an old, fat stallion: "And as usual, we inherit their mineral and fossil resources, this is promising! Old Celestia will whine again at our methods and all, I can't wait!"
>Lorelei's smiling:"All according to the plan. Mares and gentlecolts, to the future of our new world order!"
>All are rejoicing, retaining some creepy laughter, then stands still, shouting altogether "Glory to Industria!"
>The camera pans out of the office, and the building dominating the governmental and control building complex, with desert streets, and a constant smog.
>>113752
The ponies who lorelei was talking with, are the same ponies of the secret cult of industria's future NWO?
The ponies who lorelei was talking with, are the same ponies of the secret cult of industria's future NWO?
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>>113755
Yep, the ponies who have been shilling and influencing the governments for the past decades, and controls everything. Bankers, spin doctors, thinkers... They're not official but all are on the top of the pyramid, the 1% of the 1%.
>>113752
>It's cold, as I'm emerging from my sleep, taking back my spirits...
>I can't feel my hooves, and some acute pain finishes waking me up.
>I'm forcing myself opening my eyes.
>My chest hurts, but my head is like clogged.
>Looks like a river.. it's also raining.
>I'm shaking, there's blood on my hoof, it can't be good, but I'm alive.
>There's a repetitive background noise, sounds like thunder. There's a distant storm. But this is something else.
>Every move I make is painful but I need to get out of here, I'm trying to breathe.
>Come on Diamond get up.
>I'm trying to crawl among the rocks, get down to a more stable surface.
>It's starting to rain again. More and more, washing myself from the dirt and mud...
>despite my blurred vision, it looks like a beach.
>That repetitive brontide is the ocean's waves crashing over the coast.
>Breathing hurts my sides, but I can deal with it.
>I'm walking a few meters, trying to find a place to sit. hungry, tired, and looking at some drops of blood flowing over my body, and on the sand.
>The waves reaching my hooves are taking them away immediately.
>Minutes are passing, and I'm determined to walk a bit, no idea where, my mind is completely empty.
>How did I get there first, is that how death looks like? If I died I shouldn't be suffering or bleeding.
>I noticed some kind of building, I'm slowly moving there trying to find a shelter, or I'm going to die of hypothermia.
>it looks bigger than i imagined, a strange, giant structure of concrete, partially eroded. Were those fortifications or something?
>This is the most uncanny place I ever went to, but I never seen the ocean before. I admit it's impressive. I'm waiting here for a moment, gazing, trying to recall what happened.
>Remember mares naked in a club, that filly, that pegasus getting shot. Nyx. Her getting killed. Alice, we escaped together but it was foolish.
>There's lightnings over the horizon and the sky gets even more darker.
>Spend some time here as I'm warming up, waiting for this tempest to fade out.
>Look at the horizon again and remember things that tend to fade away with shivers all over my back, beyond this ocean, thousands and thousands of kilometers away it's Equestria, Manehattan, I suppose. Ponyville, even... Recalling what it was like, but all of their faces are burred. Mom, dad, Silverspoon, Scootaloo, Rainbowdash... I'm fighting with my brain realizing my memory is slowly erasing itself. What was the last book I read, when was the last time I met Lyra, or Pinkie. What are the name of ponies in class. ...I have a problem.
>The rain stopped, there's some clouds moving, quite fast as I start noticing the structure draws its own shadow on the rocks.
>Go back and start walking on a random direction.
>No idea where but I'm doing it already. The smell of fresh air gives me the energy I need, even if there's still no grass visible around. only rocks, sand, and a ruined concrete road.
>I'm walking again, rather start ignoring the pain that might be caused by a broken rib, feeling dizzy, like on drugs. or lacking of.
>See a large building in the distance. I'm going there, I will try to see what's in here. I need something to eat, I need some water....
>I'm taking a piss, there's some red splattering all over. What is it. Is that ...
"Fuuuck..."
>And on top of that I'm hemorrhagic. this is why I'm dizzy.
>I probably won't make it alive, even if the current of the river took me down here while I was knocked out.
>Almost there. And it's raining again.
>the engraved numbers on top of the door tells me I'm still in Industria, but the building looks like it's been empty for a while.
>I'm entering, the rusty metallic door makes a noise echoing in the whole building.
>Only some cardboard boxes, tables and misc stuff thrown away
>I'm only navigating on instinct now.
>There should be an emergency box, like a medikit like in these silly games, my hearts are almost empty and magic remains zero.
>Climb on concrete stairs, more like crawling... strangely, there's no much dust on these.
>The first floor's a deserted office, a few computer terminals stands on the floor, with miscellaneous papers, office accessories.
>Found some toilets, with a sink.
>open the valve and oh thank Celestia, there's running water!
>drink as much as I can.
>keep on looking around the toilets but no emergency kit.
>I need to find something else than crates full of papers, this is truly a labyrinth at some point, a mess.
>There's a room with less usual things so far. Crates, some cloth...
>books, that's different. A candle. And a fridge. Not powered, there's no more power on this building certainly since decades.
>Bingo. It contains edibles! ... Carrots. I'm rushing on it, it's so delicious I'm in tears, rolling on the floor. There's also a bag of chips and box of biscuits on top of a computer monitor.
>I don't care about how old these are.
>It's delicious.
>my stomach hurts but it's being filled, but my vision is even blurrier than usual.
>I'm trying not to vomit, I need energy.
>I just hear the entry door slamming.
>I'm not crazy I did close it behind me.
>I'm not alone.
>I need to crawl and hide somewhere.
>Securitron agents are certainly patrolling all around
>There's hoofsteps resonating in the hangar part of what kind of seems to be some naval or transportation company.
>The best I can do is hide under an office table.
>It's closing in.
>There's a cutter under these office furnitures. I'm grabbing it in my mouth.
>I'm going to be stealth and kill this horse, slice his jugular..
>steal his uniform, helmet, and call for an emergency backup.
>it's the law of the jungle, now.
Yep, the ponies who have been shilling and influencing the governments for the past decades, and controls everything. Bankers, spin doctors, thinkers... They're not official but all are on the top of the pyramid, the 1% of the 1%.
>>113752
>It's cold, as I'm emerging from my sleep, taking back my spirits...
>I can't feel my hooves, and some acute pain finishes waking me up.
>I'm forcing myself opening my eyes.
>My chest hurts, but my head is like clogged.
>Looks like a river.. it's also raining.
>I'm shaking, there's blood on my hoof, it can't be good, but I'm alive.
>There's a repetitive background noise, sounds like thunder. There's a distant storm. But this is something else.
>Every move I make is painful but I need to get out of here, I'm trying to breathe.
>Come on Diamond get up.
>I'm trying to crawl among the rocks, get down to a more stable surface.
>It's starting to rain again. More and more, washing myself from the dirt and mud...
>despite my blurred vision, it looks like a beach.
>That repetitive brontide is the ocean's waves crashing over the coast.
>Breathing hurts my sides, but I can deal with it.
>I'm walking a few meters, trying to find a place to sit. hungry, tired, and looking at some drops of blood flowing over my body, and on the sand.
>The waves reaching my hooves are taking them away immediately.
>Minutes are passing, and I'm determined to walk a bit, no idea where, my mind is completely empty.
>How did I get there first, is that how death looks like? If I died I shouldn't be suffering or bleeding.
>I noticed some kind of building, I'm slowly moving there trying to find a shelter, or I'm going to die of hypothermia.
>it looks bigger than i imagined, a strange, giant structure of concrete, partially eroded. Were those fortifications or something?
>This is the most uncanny place I ever went to, but I never seen the ocean before. I admit it's impressive. I'm waiting here for a moment, gazing, trying to recall what happened.
>Remember mares naked in a club, that filly, that pegasus getting shot. Nyx. Her getting killed. Alice, we escaped together but it was foolish.
>There's lightnings over the horizon and the sky gets even more darker.
>Spend some time here as I'm warming up, waiting for this tempest to fade out.
>Look at the horizon again and remember things that tend to fade away with shivers all over my back, beyond this ocean, thousands and thousands of kilometers away it's Equestria, Manehattan, I suppose. Ponyville, even... Recalling what it was like, but all of their faces are burred. Mom, dad, Silverspoon, Scootaloo, Rainbowdash... I'm fighting with my brain realizing my memory is slowly erasing itself. What was the last book I read, when was the last time I met Lyra, or Pinkie. What are the name of ponies in class. ...I have a problem.
>The rain stopped, there's some clouds moving, quite fast as I start noticing the structure draws its own shadow on the rocks.
>Go back and start walking on a random direction.
>No idea where but I'm doing it already. The smell of fresh air gives me the energy I need, even if there's still no grass visible around. only rocks, sand, and a ruined concrete road.
>I'm walking again, rather start ignoring the pain that might be caused by a broken rib, feeling dizzy, like on drugs. or lacking of.
>See a large building in the distance. I'm going there, I will try to see what's in here. I need something to eat, I need some water....
>I'm taking a piss, there's some red splattering all over. What is it. Is that ...
"Fuuuck..."
>And on top of that I'm hemorrhagic. this is why I'm dizzy.
>I probably won't make it alive, even if the current of the river took me down here while I was knocked out.
>Almost there. And it's raining again.
>the engraved numbers on top of the door tells me I'm still in Industria, but the building looks like it's been empty for a while.
>I'm entering, the rusty metallic door makes a noise echoing in the whole building.
>Only some cardboard boxes, tables and misc stuff thrown away
>I'm only navigating on instinct now.
>There should be an emergency box, like a medikit like in these silly games, my hearts are almost empty and magic remains zero.
>Climb on concrete stairs, more like crawling... strangely, there's no much dust on these.
>The first floor's a deserted office, a few computer terminals stands on the floor, with miscellaneous papers, office accessories.
>Found some toilets, with a sink.
>open the valve and oh thank Celestia, there's running water!
>drink as much as I can.
>keep on looking around the toilets but no emergency kit.
>I need to find something else than crates full of papers, this is truly a labyrinth at some point, a mess.
>There's a room with less usual things so far. Crates, some cloth...
>books, that's different. A candle. And a fridge. Not powered, there's no more power on this building certainly since decades.
>Bingo. It contains edibles! ... Carrots. I'm rushing on it, it's so delicious I'm in tears, rolling on the floor. There's also a bag of chips and box of biscuits on top of a computer monitor.
>I don't care about how old these are.
>It's delicious.
>my stomach hurts but it's being filled, but my vision is even blurrier than usual.
>I'm trying not to vomit, I need energy.
>I just hear the entry door slamming.
>I'm not crazy I did close it behind me.
>I'm not alone.
>I need to crawl and hide somewhere.
>Securitron agents are certainly patrolling all around
>There's hoofsteps resonating in the hangar part of what kind of seems to be some naval or transportation company.
>The best I can do is hide under an office table.
>It's closing in.
>There's a cutter under these office furnitures. I'm grabbing it in my mouth.
>I'm going to be stealth and kill this horse, slice his jugular..
>steal his uniform, helmet, and call for an emergency backup.
>it's the law of the jungle, now.
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>>113775
>all of my body's alarms are lighting up like a christmas tree, all kind of warnings.
>[blood loss] [vital organ defective] [low body temp] [metabolic functions fail] [ ETA to coma : 00:09:42:349 ]
>but I need to fight this time.
>I'm hearing him closing in
>it stops
>pony:"Is there anypony here?"
>the voice sounds feminine. Perfect.
>stop breathing, my teeth are clenched around the office knife. I'm ready to jump.
>pony:"hello?"
>I need to stay concentrated. I can't trust my eyes in this situation, only my ears.
>Stop crying Diamond, you will make it.
>I see her closing in on the reflection of an old computer monitor standing on the floor.
>pony:"I know somepony's here! Show yourself, come on!"
>she's closer.
>I'm rushing into her like a velociraptor on her prey.
>Pony: "YIIIH!"
>There's a huge bump, like an electric shock, a blinding light and I'm being thrown away
>did I get shot? Tazed?
>Pony: "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? OH GOD!"
>I'm trying to open my eyes,screaming because the shock just made my ribcage worse.
>lost my knife.
>Pony: "I sensed your presence and there's blood all around, who are you? Hey!"
>she's scared, but approaching me as all I can do is moaning
>Pony: "you're wounded? what happened? Did you got attacked? Raped?"
>I'm feeling like floating.
>Pony: "I'm gonna see what I can do, hey you're young!"
"Hmmng yeah. I fell. From a gate... I was hungry"
>Pony: stop talking, it's fine.
"don't call the police or emergency, they're going to lock me in that cell forever, or lobotomize me. I don't wanna go back there."
>I just found out the pony's a unicorn.
>Pony: " just... I'm not very skilled you know. I'm just going to check you! My god, you've got some ribs broken and a damaged kidney, this isn't good."
>she's skilled
>Pony:"I'm not skilled with medicine enough, I just know basics, I can give you some medicine, but I will have to bring you back to the city if you wanna stay alive"
>door's slamming again
>Pony:"you need to eat something too"
"hmm. i borrowed you a carrot or two"
>Pony: "D..Don't worry you can have all you want, I also got hay, and potatoes and lot of cookies, chocolate, sugar! You'll need glucose!"
>some other pony:"who are you talking to - AAH!"
>Pony:"She was here when I came back home"
"this place is your home?"
>Pony:"kind of. Don't worry I don't want to hurt you."
"I'm not"
>other pony:"Wow Hyerta I never thought you could harm anypony, Holy shit she's almost dead! And what did you do to her pussy?"
>Hyerta:"I found her like this, she told me she fell from somewhere"
>other pony:"What if the cops find us here? I don't like any of this. Hey wait is that a cutie mark? Look at her flank"
"hmmnng!" I mumbled in complaining of being shaked
>Hyerta:"there, drink this. You'll feel better first."
>other pony:"It's risky but I should bring Night Shine, she's the best doctor around."
>Hyerta:"Hurry up then!"
>other pony:"I'll be back! Hold on.. er.. "
"My names' Diamond Tiara"
>the other pony shouted "I.. I'm Greenshaw, and don't worry okay? You're in good hooves!"
>He's gone. That colt/stallion just rushed, but maybe I did a mistake
"maybe it's not a good idea, ponies around me keep dying, and I'm certainly researched."
>Hyerta's staring at me as she's wrapping me in her bed. "You're kidding me..."
>I'm recounting her about my story, and how I ended here
>She now looks kind of worried. Maybe I talk too much. She haven't talked much.
>Hyerta:"There drink this, DiamondTiara. It'll help you doing better in the meantime."
>gobble whatever stuff she's giving to me. not asking questions this time
>Hyerta:"That's gonna help you sleep for a moment."
"I don't want to sleep"
>Hyerta's preparing some stuff. unwrapping plastic all around me. Apparently there's electricity here.
"What Hyerta's origin? I mean, that's a weird name..."
>Hyerta:"It's a pseudonym."
"That's nice."
>She's looking at me, then looks at the floor, thinking, trying not to look at me.
>I'm falling asleep as the drug she gave to me finally kicks in.
>Blonk.
>all of my body's alarms are lighting up like a christmas tree, all kind of warnings.
>[blood loss] [vital organ defective] [low body temp] [metabolic functions fail] [ ETA to coma : 00:09:42:349 ]
>but I need to fight this time.
>I'm hearing him closing in
>it stops
>pony:"Is there anypony here?"
>the voice sounds feminine. Perfect.
>stop breathing, my teeth are clenched around the office knife. I'm ready to jump.
>pony:"hello?"
>I need to stay concentrated. I can't trust my eyes in this situation, only my ears.
>Stop crying Diamond, you will make it.
>I see her closing in on the reflection of an old computer monitor standing on the floor.
>pony:"I know somepony's here! Show yourself, come on!"
>she's closer.
>I'm rushing into her like a velociraptor on her prey.
>Pony: "YIIIH!"
>There's a huge bump, like an electric shock, a blinding light and I'm being thrown away
>did I get shot? Tazed?
>Pony: "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? OH GOD!"
>I'm trying to open my eyes,screaming because the shock just made my ribcage worse.
>lost my knife.
>Pony: "I sensed your presence and there's blood all around, who are you? Hey!"
>she's scared, but approaching me as all I can do is moaning
>Pony: "you're wounded? what happened? Did you got attacked? Raped?"
>I'm feeling like floating.
>Pony: "I'm gonna see what I can do, hey you're young!"
"Hmmng yeah. I fell. From a gate... I was hungry"
>Pony: stop talking, it's fine.
"don't call the police or emergency, they're going to lock me in that cell forever, or lobotomize me. I don't wanna go back there."
>I just found out the pony's a unicorn.
>Pony: " just... I'm not very skilled you know. I'm just going to check you! My god, you've got some ribs broken and a damaged kidney, this isn't good."
>she's skilled
>Pony:"I'm not skilled with medicine enough, I just know basics, I can give you some medicine, but I will have to bring you back to the city if you wanna stay alive"
>door's slamming again
>Pony:"you need to eat something too"
"hmm. i borrowed you a carrot or two"
>Pony: "D..Don't worry you can have all you want, I also got hay, and potatoes and lot of cookies, chocolate, sugar! You'll need glucose!"
>some other pony:"who are you talking to - AAH!"
>Pony:"She was here when I came back home"
"this place is your home?"
>Pony:"kind of. Don't worry I don't want to hurt you."
"I'm not"
>other pony:"Wow Hyerta I never thought you could harm anypony, Holy shit she's almost dead! And what did you do to her pussy?"
>Hyerta:"I found her like this, she told me she fell from somewhere"
>other pony:"What if the cops find us here? I don't like any of this. Hey wait is that a cutie mark? Look at her flank"
"hmmnng!" I mumbled in complaining of being shaked
>Hyerta:"there, drink this. You'll feel better first."
>other pony:"It's risky but I should bring Night Shine, she's the best doctor around."
>Hyerta:"Hurry up then!"
>other pony:"I'll be back! Hold on.. er.. "
"My names' Diamond Tiara"
>the other pony shouted "I.. I'm Greenshaw, and don't worry okay? You're in good hooves!"
>He's gone. That colt/stallion just rushed, but maybe I did a mistake
"maybe it's not a good idea, ponies around me keep dying, and I'm certainly researched."
>Hyerta's staring at me as she's wrapping me in her bed. "You're kidding me..."
>I'm recounting her about my story, and how I ended here
>She now looks kind of worried. Maybe I talk too much. She haven't talked much.
>Hyerta:"There drink this, DiamondTiara. It'll help you doing better in the meantime."
>gobble whatever stuff she's giving to me. not asking questions this time
>Hyerta:"That's gonna help you sleep for a moment."
"I don't want to sleep"
>Hyerta's preparing some stuff. unwrapping plastic all around me. Apparently there's electricity here.
"What Hyerta's origin? I mean, that's a weird name..."
>Hyerta:"It's a pseudonym."
"That's nice."
>She's looking at me, then looks at the floor, thinking, trying not to look at me.
>I'm falling asleep as the drug she gave to me finally kicks in.
>Blonk.
>>113802
>I'm hearing ponies talking, voices, but can't really understand what they're saying.
>I can hear something beeping, buzzing from times to times.
>strange noises and I feel like floating.
>I'm feeling warm and comfortable, not feeling any pain anymore
>trying to open my eyes.
>there's a bottle as seen in hospitals with a tube going to a needle in my hoof.
>i fucking hate needles. but I'm not in a hospital or anything.
>moans
>I can hear some noise around here, like somepony tapping on something
>I wonder for how long I've slept. Did somepony took the time to cure me ?
>Check myself, apparently yes, there's even one of these machines that detects my heartbeat so it means I'm fine.
>The bed's very comfy but I want to get up.
>stretch, make some noises, sit on my bed and notice Hyerta on another room, sitting in front of a few computer monitors.
>There's another male pony visibly working with her, but not a unicorn.
>She noticed I'm awake, and comes check on me.
>Hyerta:"One second she's awake."
>I'm looking at the view from this building over a cloudy horizon with rain hitting the large windows. There's a simple electric heater just for the room.
>The unicorn's coming to check after me.
>Hyerta:"You're fine, you really had two broken ribs, a broken femur, and a few organs perforated, but some fellow unicorn took care of you. You'll need this IV til tomorrow so don't play with it, don't remove it.you let me do, ok?"
"okay. er... thank you for everythi-"
>Hyerta:"We're going to have to talk. There's a few things that aren't clear with the story you told us."
>she's removing a few stuck sicking on me. EKG patches, catheter, and a hoofcuff that prevented me to run away, and levitates the IV bag
>kind of feeling a bit embarrassed here, so I'm sitting on the bed
>Hyerta:"follow me."
>proceed, get down the bed, it's good that I'm kind of safe.
>walk and meet that colt/stallion again
>Hyerta:"This is Liam."
" Hi Liam!"
>he's waving at me briefly then goes back on typing on his computer.
>we're moving to the room with some books, and she's questioning me
>Hyerta:"You say you're from Ponyville, Equestria. Good because this exists. But you say paramilitaries brought you here and a friend to Industria. "
"I have kind of a.... blurred memory about this. Yeah, we have been both kidnapped, and well, my friend, Nyx"
>Hyerta: "Unicorn or pegasus?"
"Alicorn."
>Hyerta:"There's only three alicorns, two in Equestria, one more in the Crystal empire. Am I missing something?"
"Twilight is a princess now."
>Hyerta:"Never heard of. But well, you claim this unicorn, Nyx, has been recruited by the government to actively search and destroy us..."
"it's ...kind of a complex story, she's been manipulated and turned evil. Also she's an alicorn filly."
>Looks like she don't believe me
>I kind of sound like a conspiracy nut
"What are you guys doing here, hiding? I kind of found you by accident..."
>Hyerta:"I don't believe in coincidences or ending here by accident. All administrations have changed and dropped this facility like many others decades ago. There's many places like this.. "
>She's picking a mug of tea on the table and sips it. There's another for me.
>Hyerta:"Sure some bad things happened to you, somepony took care of it. Also that intraveinous solution should help your body evacuating all the drugs you have been administered since the past months."
>look at the plastic thing going in my foreleg
"Oh that's the point of this thing. Do you think I'll be able to... dream again?"
>Hyerta:"Yes, and you'll even be able to think by yourself again and recover your full memory. Tell me Diamond, Did your friend, Alice told you about us?"
"She told me about this country used to be unicorns and pegasus before the popular revolution where, you know, magic is evil and winged ponies are forbidden, and have to undergo wing removal or else they are shot. I.. Don't you... Have you considered like, leaving this place and escape? Being safer somewhere else?"
>She looks kind of pissed.
>Hyerta:"Never. We are here to stay, we're determined to take back our country from the hooves and the control of Kernav and her government. If we could exile, seek political asylum in Equestria, Unicornia, but that would be betraying what our ancestors wanted and have built. As for what we're doing here, it's top secret. We can't trust nopony, not even you."
>aw
"I understand, I would feel the same in your situation.."
>but not at this point, come on!
"Have anypony managed to leave?"
>Hyerta:"Rich unicorns did, bribing the security forces. Others accepted to submit and get a surgery that disables their magic and will to conform. The rest try to join the army, hope they can be sent in a mission, with the risk of being shot for deserting. Or join shipping services, but there's also a huge security in this domain too, but that's not impossible, just find a flaw in the security, every system has one. Afterall, you came here by some kind of backdoor."
>It's obvious, they're hackers. Preparing discs and other digital storage, devices to interfere with the systems and networks controlled by the government.
"Regarding Nyx, I think she's a serious threat. She's a magical being, and that's kind of hypocritical from Kernav to use her.
>Hyerta:"drink it while it's still warm. I'm going to contact a few friends I trust and tell them about it, but right now we must ensure you're not a threat to us."
"Hyerta isn't your real name, right. Same for Liam, I kind of understand that. How can I prove you that I want to be on your side..."
>Hyerta smiles
>Hyerta:"I wonder why Equestria would send in such a young spy anyways. We need to know why they haven't just killed you. If you want my opinion, they're testing how their psychological manipulations works on ponies from there, perhaps to plan an invasion. But that's just my idea."
>I'm hearing ponies talking, voices, but can't really understand what they're saying.
>I can hear something beeping, buzzing from times to times.
>strange noises and I feel like floating.
>I'm feeling warm and comfortable, not feeling any pain anymore
>trying to open my eyes.
>there's a bottle as seen in hospitals with a tube going to a needle in my hoof.
>i fucking hate needles. but I'm not in a hospital or anything.
>moans
>I can hear some noise around here, like somepony tapping on something
>I wonder for how long I've slept. Did somepony took the time to cure me ?
>Check myself, apparently yes, there's even one of these machines that detects my heartbeat so it means I'm fine.
>The bed's very comfy but I want to get up.
>stretch, make some noises, sit on my bed and notice Hyerta on another room, sitting in front of a few computer monitors.
>There's another male pony visibly working with her, but not a unicorn.
>She noticed I'm awake, and comes check on me.
>Hyerta:"One second she's awake."
>I'm looking at the view from this building over a cloudy horizon with rain hitting the large windows. There's a simple electric heater just for the room.
>The unicorn's coming to check after me.
>Hyerta:"You're fine, you really had two broken ribs, a broken femur, and a few organs perforated, but some fellow unicorn took care of you. You'll need this IV til tomorrow so don't play with it, don't remove it.you let me do, ok?"
"okay. er... thank you for everythi-"
>Hyerta:"We're going to have to talk. There's a few things that aren't clear with the story you told us."
>she's removing a few stuck sicking on me. EKG patches, catheter, and a hoofcuff that prevented me to run away, and levitates the IV bag
>kind of feeling a bit embarrassed here, so I'm sitting on the bed
>Hyerta:"follow me."
>proceed, get down the bed, it's good that I'm kind of safe.
>walk and meet that colt/stallion again
>Hyerta:"This is Liam."
" Hi Liam!"
>he's waving at me briefly then goes back on typing on his computer.
>we're moving to the room with some books, and she's questioning me
>Hyerta:"You say you're from Ponyville, Equestria. Good because this exists. But you say paramilitaries brought you here and a friend to Industria. "
"I have kind of a.... blurred memory about this. Yeah, we have been both kidnapped, and well, my friend, Nyx"
>Hyerta: "Unicorn or pegasus?"
"Alicorn."
>Hyerta:"There's only three alicorns, two in Equestria, one more in the Crystal empire. Am I missing something?"
"Twilight is a princess now."
>Hyerta:"Never heard of. But well, you claim this unicorn, Nyx, has been recruited by the government to actively search and destroy us..."
"it's ...kind of a complex story, she's been manipulated and turned evil. Also she's an alicorn filly."
>Looks like she don't believe me
>I kind of sound like a conspiracy nut
"What are you guys doing here, hiding? I kind of found you by accident..."
>Hyerta:"I don't believe in coincidences or ending here by accident. All administrations have changed and dropped this facility like many others decades ago. There's many places like this.. "
>She's picking a mug of tea on the table and sips it. There's another for me.
>Hyerta:"Sure some bad things happened to you, somepony took care of it. Also that intraveinous solution should help your body evacuating all the drugs you have been administered since the past months."
>look at the plastic thing going in my foreleg
"Oh that's the point of this thing. Do you think I'll be able to... dream again?"
>Hyerta:"Yes, and you'll even be able to think by yourself again and recover your full memory. Tell me Diamond, Did your friend, Alice told you about us?"
"She told me about this country used to be unicorns and pegasus before the popular revolution where, you know, magic is evil and winged ponies are forbidden, and have to undergo wing removal or else they are shot. I.. Don't you... Have you considered like, leaving this place and escape? Being safer somewhere else?"
>She looks kind of pissed.
>Hyerta:"Never. We are here to stay, we're determined to take back our country from the hooves and the control of Kernav and her government. If we could exile, seek political asylum in Equestria, Unicornia, but that would be betraying what our ancestors wanted and have built. As for what we're doing here, it's top secret. We can't trust nopony, not even you."
>aw
"I understand, I would feel the same in your situation.."
>but not at this point, come on!
"Have anypony managed to leave?"
>Hyerta:"Rich unicorns did, bribing the security forces. Others accepted to submit and get a surgery that disables their magic and will to conform. The rest try to join the army, hope they can be sent in a mission, with the risk of being shot for deserting. Or join shipping services, but there's also a huge security in this domain too, but that's not impossible, just find a flaw in the security, every system has one. Afterall, you came here by some kind of backdoor."
>It's obvious, they're hackers. Preparing discs and other digital storage, devices to interfere with the systems and networks controlled by the government.
"Regarding Nyx, I think she's a serious threat. She's a magical being, and that's kind of hypocritical from Kernav to use her.
>Hyerta:"drink it while it's still warm. I'm going to contact a few friends I trust and tell them about it, but right now we must ensure you're not a threat to us."
"Hyerta isn't your real name, right. Same for Liam, I kind of understand that. How can I prove you that I want to be on your side..."
>Hyerta smiles
>Hyerta:"I wonder why Equestria would send in such a young spy anyways. We need to know why they haven't just killed you. If you want my opinion, they're testing how their psychological manipulations works on ponies from there, perhaps to plan an invasion. But that's just my idea."
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>>114358
>sip the cup of tea, try not to sound insisting or bragging, annoying or anything. She needs to trust me.
>She's right not to believe in coincidences, maybe that's my destiny, who knows.
>Maybe I belong here, not in Ponyville continuing to live ignoring the reality of the rest of the world
>No one's a prophet in his own country... But who am I? I'm just a pony, don't know magic or anything.
>Everything in here is different from what I've seen
>I'm looking at the walls, walking around the room, out of curiosity.
>There's paintings, drawings and many other works on the walls from various ponies with different pseudonyms. I even wonder how they could have made these... Are they thieves or..
"That's a real museum!"
>Hyerta:"...Kind of. A while ago it's been decided to close the museums and destroy the paintings, they have been deemed as elitist, provocating, pornographic and censored. If we didn't organize a raid, they would all be destroyed. Same for these books, music, and everything."
>look at the details of the canvas, the colors... the realism.. I forgot I could see something like this again.
>Hyerta:"A lot have been incinerated. There's a black market also where some have been sold to other countries, by the members of the government. Some have been infiltrated in the authorities to save what we could save. That's the history of our nation."
"You've done the right thing, for how long will you have to hide this?"
>Hyerta sighs, looking at one of the paintings. "I don't know. We hope one day there will be a fault in the system, that we get the ponies to wake up, a crisis. A war, another revolution. We have no more resources, Industria have to outsource more and more, pillage other countries to satisfy its needs. Intensive agriculture and chemicals destroyed our soil for years now ponies eat some chemical stuff you prefer not to know what it's made of. But rest assured some have some illegal gardens so we can survive. We exchange skills and knowledge, information, software, and everything the government has banned, it will take years, but we can make it."
>She's forcing herself to smile.
>Hyerta:"I want to believe ponykind can stop being blind and look at themselves, and demand more, but most refuse to disconnect, even if they would, most would refuse, preferring their comfort rather than comfrontation, the lies they live into, the peace, this false concepts of equality and social justice, their supposedly perfect, ideal society built on the destruction of what made us ponies."
>she's whispering, with a tear rolling on her cheek
>I'm looking at her
>Hyerta:"This.. that's what keeps me alive."
>Look around, Liam's concentrated on programming stuff, with a bunch of books and technical documentation from various systems and databases and a headphones on his ears, listening to some music.
"So yeah you're hackers."
>Hyerta:"yep. Well, I'm still studying, I'm better with self defense and performing magic to attack and shield from bullets. Liam's a head with cracking and finding exploits in various software. My job, or my passtime, remains to scan, compile most of the books and store them to discs. no labels, no source, it can be copied and shared, this get in the minds of ponies who want to look at something else than TV pretending they work extra. Every apartment there have CCTV so they know what goes on. The data networks are controlled, so it's a no-no. Same for the paintings and music. We're more dangerous than the local drug dealer, if you're caught with that you get locked in their Psychocial Reinsertion Center and end up lobotomized, but hopefully they all are communicated with a password. Now, you know already too much."
"Ow that's ... er, a tough job indeed. Hey! I remember, I have a friend in Equestria who's into computers, SilverSpoon, she's a bit ...special, but she's a fine pony, there's just one in all Ponyville, she never wanted me to even touch it, it's just big shelves full of electronics with big tape recorders, she would be happy to meet you! I .. "
>Memory kicks back in, with a feeling of nostalgia
"I miss her a lot..."
>I'm looking by the window, the moonlight's filtering through the clouds, showing a gloomy, surreal landscape with some buildings in ruins there and there, with the red light glow of the city in the distance, illuminating the sky, and the smog from the factories surrounding it, all with a little red light on the top.
>Liam's not really talkative, but rather friendly. minding his own business as we're dining together. Salad, mushrooms, tomatoes.. all kind of good stuff, with just a desk lamp.
>I'm telling them all kind of stuff and realize I'm really doing better.
>Liam:"Yeah I went there too. They're not vaccines or antibiotics. It's psychotropic substances, some ponies are kind of immune to it, I lied to the psych test, playing the mong for years, but I realized I always been different, wanted to know how things really worked. And met some ponies like me."
"Was wondering, are ponies there scared of rain?"
>Liam:"Kind of, they're afraid from everything they cannot control, even grass or anything that grows between concrete, they hurry and throw all kind of substance, that's why nothing grows anymore, all to profit the same corporation that manufactures the food they eat."
>finish eating. ...But still feel some emptiness inside of me
>Hyerta:"How was that? Everything's okay?"
"Just... was just thinking about Alice again."
>They're remaining silent.
>Liam:"It's not your fault Diamond. You tried, and that alone required courage."
"I wanna learn how to fight. I'd like to know how to handle a gun or a sword, and..."
>Hyerta:"You tried to attack me when you crashed in here, if I never used any of my sense, or if Liam came first, he'd be dead!"
>Liam's laughing a bit like, "no way"
>Hyerta:"But you're right, you need to know some things."
>sip the cup of tea, try not to sound insisting or bragging, annoying or anything. She needs to trust me.
>She's right not to believe in coincidences, maybe that's my destiny, who knows.
>Maybe I belong here, not in Ponyville continuing to live ignoring the reality of the rest of the world
>No one's a prophet in his own country... But who am I? I'm just a pony, don't know magic or anything.
>Everything in here is different from what I've seen
>I'm looking at the walls, walking around the room, out of curiosity.
>There's paintings, drawings and many other works on the walls from various ponies with different pseudonyms. I even wonder how they could have made these... Are they thieves or..
"That's a real museum!"
>Hyerta:"...Kind of. A while ago it's been decided to close the museums and destroy the paintings, they have been deemed as elitist, provocating, pornographic and censored. If we didn't organize a raid, they would all be destroyed. Same for these books, music, and everything."
>look at the details of the canvas, the colors... the realism.. I forgot I could see something like this again.
>Hyerta:"A lot have been incinerated. There's a black market also where some have been sold to other countries, by the members of the government. Some have been infiltrated in the authorities to save what we could save. That's the history of our nation."
"You've done the right thing, for how long will you have to hide this?"
>Hyerta sighs, looking at one of the paintings. "I don't know. We hope one day there will be a fault in the system, that we get the ponies to wake up, a crisis. A war, another revolution. We have no more resources, Industria have to outsource more and more, pillage other countries to satisfy its needs. Intensive agriculture and chemicals destroyed our soil for years now ponies eat some chemical stuff you prefer not to know what it's made of. But rest assured some have some illegal gardens so we can survive. We exchange skills and knowledge, information, software, and everything the government has banned, it will take years, but we can make it."
>She's forcing herself to smile.
>Hyerta:"I want to believe ponykind can stop being blind and look at themselves, and demand more, but most refuse to disconnect, even if they would, most would refuse, preferring their comfort rather than comfrontation, the lies they live into, the peace, this false concepts of equality and social justice, their supposedly perfect, ideal society built on the destruction of what made us ponies."
>she's whispering, with a tear rolling on her cheek
>I'm looking at her
>Hyerta:"This.. that's what keeps me alive."
>Look around, Liam's concentrated on programming stuff, with a bunch of books and technical documentation from various systems and databases and a headphones on his ears, listening to some music.
"So yeah you're hackers."
>Hyerta:"yep. Well, I'm still studying, I'm better with self defense and performing magic to attack and shield from bullets. Liam's a head with cracking and finding exploits in various software. My job, or my passtime, remains to scan, compile most of the books and store them to discs. no labels, no source, it can be copied and shared, this get in the minds of ponies who want to look at something else than TV pretending they work extra. Every apartment there have CCTV so they know what goes on. The data networks are controlled, so it's a no-no. Same for the paintings and music. We're more dangerous than the local drug dealer, if you're caught with that you get locked in their Psychocial Reinsertion Center and end up lobotomized, but hopefully they all are communicated with a password. Now, you know already too much."
"Ow that's ... er, a tough job indeed. Hey! I remember, I have a friend in Equestria who's into computers, SilverSpoon, she's a bit ...special, but she's a fine pony, there's just one in all Ponyville, she never wanted me to even touch it, it's just big shelves full of electronics with big tape recorders, she would be happy to meet you! I .. "
>Memory kicks back in, with a feeling of nostalgia
"I miss her a lot..."
>I'm looking by the window, the moonlight's filtering through the clouds, showing a gloomy, surreal landscape with some buildings in ruins there and there, with the red light glow of the city in the distance, illuminating the sky, and the smog from the factories surrounding it, all with a little red light on the top.
>Liam's not really talkative, but rather friendly. minding his own business as we're dining together. Salad, mushrooms, tomatoes.. all kind of good stuff, with just a desk lamp.
>I'm telling them all kind of stuff and realize I'm really doing better.
>Liam:"Yeah I went there too. They're not vaccines or antibiotics. It's psychotropic substances, some ponies are kind of immune to it, I lied to the psych test, playing the mong for years, but I realized I always been different, wanted to know how things really worked. And met some ponies like me."
"Was wondering, are ponies there scared of rain?"
>Liam:"Kind of, they're afraid from everything they cannot control, even grass or anything that grows between concrete, they hurry and throw all kind of substance, that's why nothing grows anymore, all to profit the same corporation that manufactures the food they eat."
>finish eating. ...But still feel some emptiness inside of me
>Hyerta:"How was that? Everything's okay?"
"Just... was just thinking about Alice again."
>They're remaining silent.
>Liam:"It's not your fault Diamond. You tried, and that alone required courage."
"I wanna learn how to fight. I'd like to know how to handle a gun or a sword, and..."
>Hyerta:"You tried to attack me when you crashed in here, if I never used any of my sense, or if Liam came first, he'd be dead!"
>Liam's laughing a bit like, "no way"
>Hyerta:"But you're right, you need to know some things."
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>>114379
"I want to believe ponykind can stop being blind and look at themselves, and demand more, but most refuse to disconnect, even if they would, most would refuse, preferring their comfort rather than comfrontation, the lies they live into, the peace, this false concepts of equality and social justice, their supposedly perfect, ideal society built on the destruction of what made us ponies.(...)This.. that's what keeps me alive."
I know that feel.
"I want to believe ponykind can stop being blind and look at themselves, and demand more, but most refuse to disconnect, even if they would, most would refuse, preferring their comfort rather than comfrontation, the lies they live into, the peace, this false concepts of equality and social justice, their supposedly perfect, ideal society built on the destruction of what made us ponies.(...)This.. that's what keeps me alive."
I know that feel.
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>green so far
i know she is in the literal definition of "wrong place, wrong time", but i hope she can come out stronger and wiser.
i hope the people she mets can protect her smile
i know she is in the literal definition of "wrong place, wrong time", but i hope she can come out stronger and wiser.
i hope the people she mets can protect her smile
>>114416
>>114624
yeah i think as someone said earlier that i should insist describing feelings and more reactions about my characters. note that i only greentext when i got time, i'm in some kind of holidays rn so enjoying doing nothing but draw, do stuff with poni, etc. note that it's far from being perfect, just an essay or something to the response "why you never develop this" "what's the story behind that" etc. so sometimes i put some soundrack radio or currentcondition.org as music background and start putting whatever idea i get inspired from the actual world politics.
>>114379
>Hyerta:"But you're right, you need to know some things."
"Like, kung-fu? Hacking? You have any firearms? Or any weap... Ah, nevermind if you had any you'd have used them."
>Hyerta smirked:"nah, most of these have been ...illegal. I'd explain you some more about the History of this place in case you ever wonder why we don't want to leave, but if ever you can go back home, you can carry this story with you. Because no more books will relate it. Cause you know, we know we can be shot anytime."
"Of... unicorns in Industria?"
>Hyerta picks a cig out of a box, and lits it up, sitting on her couch. "It sounds complex but actually simple. We used to be a group of five, relatively small states funded by unicorns. Back then we had a lot of rivalities with others, especially Crystal Empire and Ponyland. We developed an independence, scientific, technical and economic, even Celestia approved the direction we took once, but it didn't last. We had lesser and lesser resources, and went through many crisis, civil wars, workers demanding a better wage... I gotta say the ministers we had, wether in Idris, Urkesh, Gilead, Pretoria, or Ixana were incompetent and set everything in place for it, through lobbying and conflicts of interests. Bankers wanted this crisis. Press, military contractors, transports, agriculture and distribution were already acquired by different corporations, until bankers sold those to one giant cartel that controls them all. Government were still in charge of countries, until one day, a pony, Angus Barner, better known as Boss, took the opportunity of giving those ponies what they wanted, and initiate a strange popular revolution, but backed by the bankers and the elites, who had enough of the relative democracy we still had back then. It was ninety years ago."
"Security, Equality and Order, right? Yeah I kind of studied this in the cultural enrichment center or something."
>Hyerta nodded. "This pony indeed. Boss wanted to unite all the little states into one big country, Industria. A powerful country built with a so-called modern political line for the modern world, they pushed the ideology of social progress to the extreme, promises of production and wealth, then came with all kind of new laws. Ponies are no longer allowed to use magic, since it ruins the business and interfer with technical installations. Pegasus are forbidden to fly. The government played on a discriminative agenda of dividing ponies socially, while bringing more and more zebras to ensure a cheaper and less demanding workforce. Also, zebras and unicorns are infertile, hence the unicorn population decreased. Yes we did speak out, yes there have been whistle blowers all across the century denouncing it, even fragilizing the government, forming resistance groups, dissidents, but generally, earth ponies doesn't question the authority because the party in power is favorable to them, to their lowest interests, still, sometimes they realize they still need us. That despite all the technology there are things, there's diseases or mysteries they can't control or manage to explain with science or logic. The world is strange and for them, something strange shouldn't be explained. Speaking of strange things, would you tell me more about Nyx?"
>Liam's back to his computer screen
"The big thing about her, all I know, she can feel, detect unicorns who use magic. She has kind of found Alice like that. Like a radar guided missile, zooming on her target. I don't really think she's been fully brainwashed, just encouraged to work with Kernav and this military police, and she knows she can be somepony here, instead of serving under Celestia and Luna. Nightmare Moon is Nyx. and yes she's linked with Luna, a strange magical way I don't fully understand"
>Hyerta nods and starts to understand.
>Also I kind of make more sense, guess it's better.
"Twilight had filled a lot of books examining her magic, analyzing her, and everything about her origin, and she could be the only pony on Earth who's able to stop this alicorn from becoming a danger to the whole world."
>Hyerta:"Or is she? You said you were at her library most of the time and never returned most of her books, and it was the right thing since that library got destroyed. Kind of recognize myself with you there."
>She smiles, and have an idea in mind. But which one?
>Hyerta:"There must be a way to stop Nyx, she might have a weak point, something Twilight might have mentioned in her notes about her. Something you may or may have noticed back then."
"You know I'm still trying to recover my memory"
>Hyerta exhales the smoke to the ceiling and squishes her cig on the cendar on the table
"Only one thing I recommend is to talk to other unicorns about her"
>Hyerta:"Will do." She gets up "But don't worry you will recover your mind with that detox remedy. Just a question of days. Oh jut, we only have one bed, and sleeping in the couch isn't a problem for me, hope you don't mind sharing your bed with this pony"
"Does Liam ever sleeps?"
>Liam: "No, I meant, yes of course!"
"That's all good, again, thank you for everything, and goodnight!"
>Hyerta smiled "You're welcome!"
>She's crashing on the couch with a set of bed layers and a pillow and a comics book. "Goonight guys!"
>>114624
yeah i think as someone said earlier that i should insist describing feelings and more reactions about my characters. note that i only greentext when i got time, i'm in some kind of holidays rn so enjoying doing nothing but draw, do stuff with poni, etc. note that it's far from being perfect, just an essay or something to the response "why you never develop this" "what's the story behind that" etc. so sometimes i put some soundrack radio or currentcondition.org as music background and start putting whatever idea i get inspired from the actual world politics.
>>114379
>Hyerta:"But you're right, you need to know some things."
"Like, kung-fu? Hacking? You have any firearms? Or any weap... Ah, nevermind if you had any you'd have used them."
>Hyerta smirked:"nah, most of these have been ...illegal. I'd explain you some more about the History of this place in case you ever wonder why we don't want to leave, but if ever you can go back home, you can carry this story with you. Because no more books will relate it. Cause you know, we know we can be shot anytime."
"Of... unicorns in Industria?"
>Hyerta picks a cig out of a box, and lits it up, sitting on her couch. "It sounds complex but actually simple. We used to be a group of five, relatively small states funded by unicorns. Back then we had a lot of rivalities with others, especially Crystal Empire and Ponyland. We developed an independence, scientific, technical and economic, even Celestia approved the direction we took once, but it didn't last. We had lesser and lesser resources, and went through many crisis, civil wars, workers demanding a better wage... I gotta say the ministers we had, wether in Idris, Urkesh, Gilead, Pretoria, or Ixana were incompetent and set everything in place for it, through lobbying and conflicts of interests. Bankers wanted this crisis. Press, military contractors, transports, agriculture and distribution were already acquired by different corporations, until bankers sold those to one giant cartel that controls them all. Government were still in charge of countries, until one day, a pony, Angus Barner, better known as Boss, took the opportunity of giving those ponies what they wanted, and initiate a strange popular revolution, but backed by the bankers and the elites, who had enough of the relative democracy we still had back then. It was ninety years ago."
"Security, Equality and Order, right? Yeah I kind of studied this in the cultural enrichment center or something."
>Hyerta nodded. "This pony indeed. Boss wanted to unite all the little states into one big country, Industria. A powerful country built with a so-called modern political line for the modern world, they pushed the ideology of social progress to the extreme, promises of production and wealth, then came with all kind of new laws. Ponies are no longer allowed to use magic, since it ruins the business and interfer with technical installations. Pegasus are forbidden to fly. The government played on a discriminative agenda of dividing ponies socially, while bringing more and more zebras to ensure a cheaper and less demanding workforce. Also, zebras and unicorns are infertile, hence the unicorn population decreased. Yes we did speak out, yes there have been whistle blowers all across the century denouncing it, even fragilizing the government, forming resistance groups, dissidents, but generally, earth ponies doesn't question the authority because the party in power is favorable to them, to their lowest interests, still, sometimes they realize they still need us. That despite all the technology there are things, there's diseases or mysteries they can't control or manage to explain with science or logic. The world is strange and for them, something strange shouldn't be explained. Speaking of strange things, would you tell me more about Nyx?"
>Liam's back to his computer screen
"The big thing about her, all I know, she can feel, detect unicorns who use magic. She has kind of found Alice like that. Like a radar guided missile, zooming on her target. I don't really think she's been fully brainwashed, just encouraged to work with Kernav and this military police, and she knows she can be somepony here, instead of serving under Celestia and Luna. Nightmare Moon is Nyx. and yes she's linked with Luna, a strange magical way I don't fully understand"
>Hyerta nods and starts to understand.
>Also I kind of make more sense, guess it's better.
"Twilight had filled a lot of books examining her magic, analyzing her, and everything about her origin, and she could be the only pony on Earth who's able to stop this alicorn from becoming a danger to the whole world."
>Hyerta:"Or is she? You said you were at her library most of the time and never returned most of her books, and it was the right thing since that library got destroyed. Kind of recognize myself with you there."
>She smiles, and have an idea in mind. But which one?
>Hyerta:"There must be a way to stop Nyx, she might have a weak point, something Twilight might have mentioned in her notes about her. Something you may or may have noticed back then."
"You know I'm still trying to recover my memory"
>Hyerta exhales the smoke to the ceiling and squishes her cig on the cendar on the table
"Only one thing I recommend is to talk to other unicorns about her"
>Hyerta:"Will do." She gets up "But don't worry you will recover your mind with that detox remedy. Just a question of days. Oh jut, we only have one bed, and sleeping in the couch isn't a problem for me, hope you don't mind sharing your bed with this pony"
"Does Liam ever sleeps?"
>Liam: "No, I meant, yes of course!"
"That's all good, again, thank you for everything, and goodnight!"
>Hyerta smiled "You're welcome!"
>She's crashing on the couch with a set of bed layers and a pillow and a comics book. "Goonight guys!"
>>115026
It's really a depressing story, I relate to part of this story, maybe ause I'm an eurofag and we both live in Industria, or the EU right now, but the moment where DT try to understand why the unicorns prefers to resist instead of the exile give those ponies some personality.
What does DT really wants?
It's really a depressing story, I relate to part of this story, maybe ause I'm an eurofag and we both live in Industria, or the EU right now, but the moment where DT try to understand why the unicorns prefers to resist instead of the exile give those ponies some personality.
What does DT really wants?
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>>114624
The choice of DT for this role is original. Yes she can get out wiser, learn things she would have never learned in her rich family or her life in Equestria.
The arrogant bully prick she is gets bullied, and she's facing many questions about her origins, her family and who to side with.
I imagine Eliza looking like this mare with her smile, I wonder if we'll see her again in the story.
The choice of DT for this role is original. Yes she can get out wiser, learn things she would have never learned in her rich family or her life in Equestria.
The arrogant bully prick she is gets bullied, and she's facing many questions about her origins, her family and who to side with.
I imagine Eliza looking like this mare with her smile, I wonder if we'll see her again in the story.
>>115569
the personalities there are kind of ambiguous in general, a bit sketchy, just like real people, you can't really tell what other ponies want either.
>>115582
no spoilers, but yes i've been searching ideas with old ideas i had, only fragments and scenes, and now i gotta connect these scenes with a continuity.
>>115026
>be me
>get woke up
>I recognize this place, it’s the Golden Oak Library
>Maybe all of that was just a dream
>I’m getting up, doing what I do usually, I know Twilight just asked me not to touch any of her stuff
>AppleBloom: “You’re going to be in trouble, you know this library is full of traps for fillies like you!”
“Nah she just pretends, there’s no traps”
>Go check on what Twilight was writing on her notes and all her mess, as she just went outside with Nyx.
>AppleBloom: “You really want to be in trouble, it’s irredeemable with you!”
“I’m just looking at what she’s writing, it can be interesting no? Focus on your homework!”
>AppleBloom makes that face hiding behind her book about ‘how to make explosives and other chemical reactions’ as I’m looking at Twilight’s notes
“She’s writing to your brother, Big Macintosh actually.. There’s things about how she enjoyed his penis in her, another one describing her pregnancy”
>AppleBloom’s rushing over Twilight’s desk yelling “She’s writin’ WHAT?”
“just kidding”
>AppleBloom’s jumping on me: “Diamond Tiara you’re silly! You’re perverted!”
“Aw come on! Aahahahehehe.. You should be proud of yer big bro!”
>She’s reading her notes again
>AppleBloom: “She’s writing things about what she discovered from Nyx. This filly’s weird yanno”
>take a look at Twilight’s notes
>It details a lot about Nyx’s strengths, weaknesses, being mostly psychological.
>Twilight wrote much more about how some cult of nightmare moon emerged and invoked her more like a demon, with a list of unexplained magic, how Celestia cleaned it all and how Twilight is hiding her…
“Now that’s interesting… she’s really from another world according to her, Nyx can become the most powerful alicorn, but can also explain something Celestia herself always wanted to understand, where does she and her sister Luna comes from, and this answer lies in Nyx. Nyx is not Luna, nor her daughter, for she is exclusively a creature of the night, an entity that takes control of the bodies of magic beings like alicorns and unicorns, as demonstrated with Rarity last year. She is the force of our nightmares, and now took the form of a filly…”
>AppleBloom’s interrupting me “The Mewwn! You’re silly you’re not a unicorn! You can’t understand any of this”
>keep reading page by page, even parts about what Nyx fears and how she can get defeated. But a clear feeling of déjà-vu is haunting me.
“I’ve read all this before”
>AppleBloom: “When? She just wrote it this morning!”
“I remember this drawing she did. I.. haven’t read this one.”
>AppleBloom’s looking at me like the weirdo I am “Then why don’t ya read it now”
>move the pile of paper, under all the things only gibberish, and glyphs that doesn’t makes sense.
“I get it now, I’m not here.”
>it’s raining outside, I haven’t paid attention. Only now because a lightning flashed through the windows.
>AppleBloom: “What? Ah you okay Diamond? You’re unushally strange t’day.”
>grab her and kiss her, hug her tightly, plunge my muzzle on her fur
>she looks surprised as I’m suddenly doing it all but I couldn’t stop me from doing so.
“Bloomie… I miss you so much... I’m sorry.. ” I can’t stop snuggling and carressing, petting her.
>She’s hugging me back as I’m falling in tears, closing my eyes
>AppleBloom’s whispering: “We all do, yanno, where are ya?”
>I can feel her fur, her heart beating against mine, her warmth..
>I’m feeling much better, having her nearby me again, it’s like a dream but it’s not ending.
>loud thunder noise wakes me up.
>open my eyes.
>I’m on a large room, in front of a windowed bay.
>I really thought I was back in Ponyville, was that just a dream?
>This is not Applebloom. I’m pressing my belly against Liam’s sheath, I’m hugging him.
>Shit I forgot this is his room too, he lives here.
>stare at his chest. Is he asleep? Did I kiss him? Oh sweet Celestia did I…
>He’s looking at me as it’s plain night
>Liam whispered: “It’s ok, just a storm outside, don’t worry”|
>He’s caressing my mane
“Sorry… I… I just dreamed”
>Liam: “You called me AppleBloom”
“it’s just a filly who’s in my class and we live in the same town. I don’t even like her!”
>Liam: “you serious?”
“I..kind of miss everypony there.”
>Liam’s grabbing the bed layers over us again
>Liam: “How’s it like there, I mean, Equestria?”
“…Different. Ponies are different, there’s grass and trees, there’s a huge forest, smaller houses, chaotic roads…all kind of animals. No TV or computers, those are rare thing. No… metro network either, no police or billboards with ponies on it. There’s buildings but in Manehattan. When school’s over we can go trot outside and have fun, make fun of other ponies, when we’re in holidays we go camping or go on adventure in the woods, spend the nights outside, looking at the stars… when it rains or when it’s cold and snowing we go back inside our homes and make a fire, drink some hot chocolate, listen to music,…”
>Liam: “Inside? A fire?”
“Yeah no I mean, on a fireplace, ”
>Liam: “Sounds so cool”
“How did you got in here? Most colts and fillies are in some kind of prison buildings, did you manage to escape?”
>Liam: “I never really got compatible with their drugs and my head never really had a compatibility to the educational system and TV propaganda. So since I knew I’d spend the rest of my life locked into a psychosocial center of some kind, you know, a crazy house, being lobotomized, castrated, destroyed and recycled, I decided to escape, and got helped by a few ponies like me years ago.”
>keep hugging him, wanting to dream again being with AppleBloom..
the personalities there are kind of ambiguous in general, a bit sketchy, just like real people, you can't really tell what other ponies want either.
>>115582
no spoilers, but yes i've been searching ideas with old ideas i had, only fragments and scenes, and now i gotta connect these scenes with a continuity.
>>115026
>be me
>get woke up
>I recognize this place, it’s the Golden Oak Library
>Maybe all of that was just a dream
>I’m getting up, doing what I do usually, I know Twilight just asked me not to touch any of her stuff
>AppleBloom: “You’re going to be in trouble, you know this library is full of traps for fillies like you!”
“Nah she just pretends, there’s no traps”
>Go check on what Twilight was writing on her notes and all her mess, as she just went outside with Nyx.
>AppleBloom: “You really want to be in trouble, it’s irredeemable with you!”
“I’m just looking at what she’s writing, it can be interesting no? Focus on your homework!”
>AppleBloom makes that face hiding behind her book about ‘how to make explosives and other chemical reactions’ as I’m looking at Twilight’s notes
“She’s writing to your brother, Big Macintosh actually.. There’s things about how she enjoyed his penis in her, another one describing her pregnancy”
>AppleBloom’s rushing over Twilight’s desk yelling “She’s writin’ WHAT?”
“just kidding”
>AppleBloom’s jumping on me: “Diamond Tiara you’re silly! You’re perverted!”
“Aw come on! Aahahahehehe.. You should be proud of yer big bro!”
>She’s reading her notes again
>AppleBloom: “She’s writing things about what she discovered from Nyx. This filly’s weird yanno”
>take a look at Twilight’s notes
>It details a lot about Nyx’s strengths, weaknesses, being mostly psychological.
>Twilight wrote much more about how some cult of nightmare moon emerged and invoked her more like a demon, with a list of unexplained magic, how Celestia cleaned it all and how Twilight is hiding her…
“Now that’s interesting… she’s really from another world according to her, Nyx can become the most powerful alicorn, but can also explain something Celestia herself always wanted to understand, where does she and her sister Luna comes from, and this answer lies in Nyx. Nyx is not Luna, nor her daughter, for she is exclusively a creature of the night, an entity that takes control of the bodies of magic beings like alicorns and unicorns, as demonstrated with Rarity last year. She is the force of our nightmares, and now took the form of a filly…”
>AppleBloom’s interrupting me “The Mewwn! You’re silly you’re not a unicorn! You can’t understand any of this”
>keep reading page by page, even parts about what Nyx fears and how she can get defeated. But a clear feeling of déjà-vu is haunting me.
“I’ve read all this before”
>AppleBloom: “When? She just wrote it this morning!”
“I remember this drawing she did. I.. haven’t read this one.”
>AppleBloom’s looking at me like the weirdo I am “Then why don’t ya read it now”
>move the pile of paper, under all the things only gibberish, and glyphs that doesn’t makes sense.
“I get it now, I’m not here.”
>it’s raining outside, I haven’t paid attention. Only now because a lightning flashed through the windows.
>AppleBloom: “What? Ah you okay Diamond? You’re unushally strange t’day.”
>grab her and kiss her, hug her tightly, plunge my muzzle on her fur
>she looks surprised as I’m suddenly doing it all but I couldn’t stop me from doing so.
“Bloomie… I miss you so much... I’m sorry.. ” I can’t stop snuggling and carressing, petting her.
>She’s hugging me back as I’m falling in tears, closing my eyes
>AppleBloom’s whispering: “We all do, yanno, where are ya?”
>I can feel her fur, her heart beating against mine, her warmth..
>I’m feeling much better, having her nearby me again, it’s like a dream but it’s not ending.
>loud thunder noise wakes me up.
>open my eyes.
>I’m on a large room, in front of a windowed bay.
>I really thought I was back in Ponyville, was that just a dream?
>This is not Applebloom. I’m pressing my belly against Liam’s sheath, I’m hugging him.
>Shit I forgot this is his room too, he lives here.
>stare at his chest. Is he asleep? Did I kiss him? Oh sweet Celestia did I…
>He’s looking at me as it’s plain night
>Liam whispered: “It’s ok, just a storm outside, don’t worry”|
>He’s caressing my mane
“Sorry… I… I just dreamed”
>Liam: “You called me AppleBloom”
“it’s just a filly who’s in my class and we live in the same town. I don’t even like her!”
>Liam: “you serious?”
“I..kind of miss everypony there.”
>Liam’s grabbing the bed layers over us again
>Liam: “How’s it like there, I mean, Equestria?”
“…Different. Ponies are different, there’s grass and trees, there’s a huge forest, smaller houses, chaotic roads…all kind of animals. No TV or computers, those are rare thing. No… metro network either, no police or billboards with ponies on it. There’s buildings but in Manehattan. When school’s over we can go trot outside and have fun, make fun of other ponies, when we’re in holidays we go camping or go on adventure in the woods, spend the nights outside, looking at the stars… when it rains or when it’s cold and snowing we go back inside our homes and make a fire, drink some hot chocolate, listen to music,…”
>Liam: “Inside? A fire?”
“Yeah no I mean, on a fireplace, ”
>Liam: “Sounds so cool”
“How did you got in here? Most colts and fillies are in some kind of prison buildings, did you manage to escape?”
>Liam: “I never really got compatible with their drugs and my head never really had a compatibility to the educational system and TV propaganda. So since I knew I’d spend the rest of my life locked into a psychosocial center of some kind, you know, a crazy house, being lobotomized, castrated, destroyed and recycled, I decided to escape, and got helped by a few ponies like me years ago.”
>keep hugging him, wanting to dream again being with AppleBloom..
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>>119112
>That morning Hyerta [pronounced Irta, but this country loves to make simple things overcomplicated] she got our breakfast ready.
>Hyerta's coming to greet me in the room, as Liam's still half sleeping
>Hyerta:"Did you slept well?"
"Oh sure yeah, I can dream again, and I just remember everything in detail, I never had this before! I even woke up Liam, but he should take some rest."
>She's looking at my intraveinous thing
>Hyerta:"Yeah it's almost empty, and seems to have worked well. Your metabolism and everything should go back to normal after this clean-up. Bring me your hoof."
>she's levitating some cotton and bottles, slowly, carefully takes the duct tape off and the needle out of my arm with her magic, and swiftly put a band-aid on it.
>I should be scared, but couldn't feel a thing.
>The sky outside is a bit grey-ish, It's no longer raining.
>I'm starting to feel close to this couple of ponies. They're nice. They're determined, the more I talk with them, the more I learn things, and Liam looks fascinated by the stories I recount him, but can barely imagine or believe me most of the time, explaining the elements of Harmony, magic, the Mane Six defeating monsters, the legends and mysteries of the Everfree Forest
>Liam:"So you get a cutie mark, by magic, this means you have some kind of energy about it"
"Cutie marks are a science we barely really understand, even myself. you only get one once you discover who you are. and ... Mine has almost faded away. This is scary"
>Hyerta's fiddling with electronic devices, while eating some boxed muffins."don't worry, it will be back to how it used to be, but yes, cutie marks are a magic thing. It's the genes and fur color. But it's everypony's magic."
>I wonder what she's preparing, a bomb maybe?
"What are you working on?"
>Hyerta:"A short-wave radio. I've been on it since a few days so far, I fix things sometimes."
"Hyerta, I wanted to ask, if there's anything I can do to help, I mean, I wanna be on your side, but what can I do?"
>Hyerta:"You're a filly, I'd be worried if anything happened to you. ...I can't take any risk but if you would like... "
>she's looking at me, thinking.
>Hyerta:"There's a few ponies in the city who would be glad to know about Nyx. You and Liam could go meet them together."
"Before, ... I'd like to leave a message, do you have like a tape recorder?"
>Hyerta:"I might have a camera around. I mean, a video camera, the only one here, off-line, not sending any data to the Boss, records on cassette, it should just work. You need it?"
"I'd like to record a message for you guys, and for anypony who would eventually carry it to Equestria... illegally. If anything bad happens to me, you never know!"
>She's looking at me, a bit concerned.
>Liam's drinking his coffee.
>Minutes later, I'm installing a tripod, putting the camera on service, tests the sound, manage to get a background as neutral as possible.
>keep in mind to anonymize the video the best I can.
>shout randomly "test" and "check" to verify if the mic gets everything I'm talking about on tape, and start recording.
"Hello everypony"
>yep, i could have been more creative. I explain essentially what happened to me, again, and everything I remember, and it's perfect because I recall everything in details. From the moment Twilight had to leave and hoped to count on me for a few hours,
>the more I remember things, the more I have flashbacks about how I got brainwashed in this institute.
>I get flashbacks of being drugged.
>ugly ponies forcing me to eat their food
>getting exams of all kind, and even having some of the "doctors" abusing me, putting me on a table and pushing his cock inside of me, while armed guards are watching, waiting their turn to shove their electric rod on my vulva, as a punishment for wanting to run away. I recall I always did my best to be uncontrollable, and fight back, bucking them sometimes, even wounding myself, breaking stuff, getting beating up and shocked as I'm on the floor, but biting the balls of some guard who also got shocked as his colleague put some kilovolts on my ass again.
>I'm in tears but as memories are emerging again.
>I'm also explaining everything I've read from Twilight's notes regarding Nyx. Who is Nyx. Nyx's powers, her origins, how Twilight raised her like her daughter, the cults, and how apparently Kernav and her government are using her to serve the interests of Industria and their project of world government, having ironically an alicorn on their side.
>there's even shittier memories emerging in my mind. About my life in Equestria. How I was treated like shit by a mother who never wanted me, who regrets not having the right to abort and always did it for the money, how I miss Twilight, actually. This silly pony did care about me... not seeing the bully, the pest in me...
"You wanted to be nice with me, and I betrayed you, Twilight, Pinkie, SilverSpoon, Daddy, Lyra, Sweetie Belle, Rarity, AppleJack, Applebloom, Scootaloo..."
>sobs
"I assume that as being my entire responsibility. I should have insisted to stay at home and do nothing. Even if I know that whatever you went after was certainly a diversion....but..."
>More flashbacks emerges from the night we left Twilight's place with Nyx.
>There were ponies out there. Hidden, looking at what's going on.
"Actually, we were already tracked in Ponyville, and this squadron was armed to take over Twilight's palace. There was a white, beige pony in the streets observing us, avoiding city's lights. A beige pony with a red mane. I never seen him in Ponyville before. I also knew with many times we played in the ruins of that castle, he followed us. I have seen that pony the last time on the gate where they exchanged me and Nyx with this unicorn..."
>That morning Hyerta [pronounced Irta, but this country loves to make simple things overcomplicated] she got our breakfast ready.
>Hyerta's coming to greet me in the room, as Liam's still half sleeping
>Hyerta:"Did you slept well?"
"Oh sure yeah, I can dream again, and I just remember everything in detail, I never had this before! I even woke up Liam, but he should take some rest."
>She's looking at my intraveinous thing
>Hyerta:"Yeah it's almost empty, and seems to have worked well. Your metabolism and everything should go back to normal after this clean-up. Bring me your hoof."
>she's levitating some cotton and bottles, slowly, carefully takes the duct tape off and the needle out of my arm with her magic, and swiftly put a band-aid on it.
>I should be scared, but couldn't feel a thing.
>The sky outside is a bit grey-ish, It's no longer raining.
>I'm starting to feel close to this couple of ponies. They're nice. They're determined, the more I talk with them, the more I learn things, and Liam looks fascinated by the stories I recount him, but can barely imagine or believe me most of the time, explaining the elements of Harmony, magic, the Mane Six defeating monsters, the legends and mysteries of the Everfree Forest
>Liam:"So you get a cutie mark, by magic, this means you have some kind of energy about it"
"Cutie marks are a science we barely really understand, even myself. you only get one once you discover who you are. and ... Mine has almost faded away. This is scary"
>Hyerta's fiddling with electronic devices, while eating some boxed muffins."don't worry, it will be back to how it used to be, but yes, cutie marks are a magic thing. It's the genes and fur color. But it's everypony's magic."
>I wonder what she's preparing, a bomb maybe?
"What are you working on?"
>Hyerta:"A short-wave radio. I've been on it since a few days so far, I fix things sometimes."
"Hyerta, I wanted to ask, if there's anything I can do to help, I mean, I wanna be on your side, but what can I do?"
>Hyerta:"You're a filly, I'd be worried if anything happened to you. ...I can't take any risk but if you would like... "
>she's looking at me, thinking.
>Hyerta:"There's a few ponies in the city who would be glad to know about Nyx. You and Liam could go meet them together."
"Before, ... I'd like to leave a message, do you have like a tape recorder?"
>Hyerta:"I might have a camera around. I mean, a video camera, the only one here, off-line, not sending any data to the Boss, records on cassette, it should just work. You need it?"
"I'd like to record a message for you guys, and for anypony who would eventually carry it to Equestria... illegally. If anything bad happens to me, you never know!"
>She's looking at me, a bit concerned.
>Liam's drinking his coffee.
>Minutes later, I'm installing a tripod, putting the camera on service, tests the sound, manage to get a background as neutral as possible.
>keep in mind to anonymize the video the best I can.
>shout randomly "test" and "check" to verify if the mic gets everything I'm talking about on tape, and start recording.
"Hello everypony"
>yep, i could have been more creative. I explain essentially what happened to me, again, and everything I remember, and it's perfect because I recall everything in details. From the moment Twilight had to leave and hoped to count on me for a few hours,
>the more I remember things, the more I have flashbacks about how I got brainwashed in this institute.
>I get flashbacks of being drugged.
>ugly ponies forcing me to eat their food
>getting exams of all kind, and even having some of the "doctors" abusing me, putting me on a table and pushing his cock inside of me, while armed guards are watching, waiting their turn to shove their electric rod on my vulva, as a punishment for wanting to run away. I recall I always did my best to be uncontrollable, and fight back, bucking them sometimes, even wounding myself, breaking stuff, getting beating up and shocked as I'm on the floor, but biting the balls of some guard who also got shocked as his colleague put some kilovolts on my ass again.
>I'm in tears but as memories are emerging again.
>I'm also explaining everything I've read from Twilight's notes regarding Nyx. Who is Nyx. Nyx's powers, her origins, how Twilight raised her like her daughter, the cults, and how apparently Kernav and her government are using her to serve the interests of Industria and their project of world government, having ironically an alicorn on their side.
>there's even shittier memories emerging in my mind. About my life in Equestria. How I was treated like shit by a mother who never wanted me, who regrets not having the right to abort and always did it for the money, how I miss Twilight, actually. This silly pony did care about me... not seeing the bully, the pest in me...
"You wanted to be nice with me, and I betrayed you, Twilight, Pinkie, SilverSpoon, Daddy, Lyra, Sweetie Belle, Rarity, AppleJack, Applebloom, Scootaloo..."
>sobs
"I assume that as being my entire responsibility. I should have insisted to stay at home and do nothing. Even if I know that whatever you went after was certainly a diversion....but..."
>More flashbacks emerges from the night we left Twilight's place with Nyx.
>There were ponies out there. Hidden, looking at what's going on.
"Actually, we were already tracked in Ponyville, and this squadron was armed to take over Twilight's palace. There was a white, beige pony in the streets observing us, avoiding city's lights. A beige pony with a red mane. I never seen him in Ponyville before. I also knew with many times we played in the ruins of that castle, he followed us. I have seen that pony the last time on the gate where they exchanged me and Nyx with this unicorn..."
>>119722
>keep giving as much as details as possible. Everythin everypony should know as I'm remembering again everything in detail.
>too much details. fuck that.
"So here's the idea. I can't get out of here, or maybe not alive, I don't know yet, like I said I always tried and will always try, but I want you guys to know I'm alive, I've been here in Industria, in that garage for four months, but I'm determined to destroy this conspiracy, expose this system, before it destroys all ponykind!"
>Aand.. Cut!
>Hyerta had the idea to put some random car and trotting ponies noises on her stereo, simulating some urban background, in the case the tape ends in wrong hooves, and being analyzed by the Securitron to determine where it was filmed.
>except she's feeling heartbroken listening to me. Liam also's kind of feeling bad.
>She's coming and hugs me; silently, comforting me.
>I'm really feeling like nothing, like I just talked about everything but now I'm feeling rage going on inside of me.
>I'm taking some time, discussing with Liam, then later, reading some of the books the ponies here saved. Some are about bare-hooves combat and self defense.
>no wonder this book's illegal, it explains how one pony can kill an opponent, by knowing how and where to buck.
>all about movements and everything.
>Hyerta's panicking as I'm starting to put some in practice like "Diamond, you're still recovering from a perforated kidney and a few broken bones! You still need some rest, calm down."
>okay, she might have brought some unicorn to fix me and she might be right.
>a bit later we discover we can also trot on the roof's top. Breathing some fresh air from the large, trotting, etc.
>But clearly, I don't want to stay locked on this building forever.
>Hyerta:"Follow me, I got some stuff to show you. Pick the stuff you need."
>I'm following her, picking a neon green and purple saddlebag.
>There's a tunnel under this building.
"Er. these are the sewers, right?"
>Hyerta : "nah, these are technical tunnels, the sewers goes on the other direction. this tunnel's designed to bring interconnections, power and water, and takes you on the city. Most cities here have all kind of labyrinths underneath, this tunnel can be perfect to escape, no one really think about monitoring those or placing CCTV cameras in them. It's planned for the maintenance and upgrade of infrastructures, that's why we can trot into it all the way."
>she's illuminating the place with her horn. It's kind of narrow and gloomy but at this point I don't care.
>some dead roaches and spider webs hanging from old cables are finally some rare signs of uncontrolled life in this country.
>we're not talking much, and after trotting underground for several minutes we finally reach larger galleries, with service stairs.
>There's some brontide, loud noise resonating from times to times. There's also more humidity, dripping water from the ceiling of the galleries and other caverns...
>Hyerta:"That's the metro, underground trains are going in all directions."
"yep. Alice made me visit this place, a few desert stations, or underachieved ones."
>Hyerta:"oh yeah now you get the basic ideas, it's easy to get to loose somepony in there. just pay attention to the directions to find your way back."
>we're ending into a large hall, with signs, and more stairs
>Hyerta:"Sector 203 is still at the periphery of the city, but you can always peek a bit around before exiting, then immediately merge with the other ponies, avoid eye contact with others if there's any, don't talk to them, pretend you always lived there in this block..."
"I see, I think I can do this."
>She's smiling at me, as we go back, through the tunnels, and an even lower level, where a river flows under the city, rather actually the drainage. scary place, as if I fell into it, I'd drown immediately. We're walking on some rusty gate over it, and finally get to a hidden door outside the city, going back to the building where Liam was wondering where we went again.
>keep giving as much as details as possible. Everythin everypony should know as I'm remembering again everything in detail.
>too much details. fuck that.
"So here's the idea. I can't get out of here, or maybe not alive, I don't know yet, like I said I always tried and will always try, but I want you guys to know I'm alive, I've been here in Industria, in that garage for four months, but I'm determined to destroy this conspiracy, expose this system, before it destroys all ponykind!"
>Aand.. Cut!
>Hyerta had the idea to put some random car and trotting ponies noises on her stereo, simulating some urban background, in the case the tape ends in wrong hooves, and being analyzed by the Securitron to determine where it was filmed.
>except she's feeling heartbroken listening to me. Liam also's kind of feeling bad.
>She's coming and hugs me; silently, comforting me.
>I'm really feeling like nothing, like I just talked about everything but now I'm feeling rage going on inside of me.
>I'm taking some time, discussing with Liam, then later, reading some of the books the ponies here saved. Some are about bare-hooves combat and self defense.
>no wonder this book's illegal, it explains how one pony can kill an opponent, by knowing how and where to buck.
>all about movements and everything.
>Hyerta's panicking as I'm starting to put some in practice like "Diamond, you're still recovering from a perforated kidney and a few broken bones! You still need some rest, calm down."
>okay, she might have brought some unicorn to fix me and she might be right.
>a bit later we discover we can also trot on the roof's top. Breathing some fresh air from the large, trotting, etc.
>But clearly, I don't want to stay locked on this building forever.
>Hyerta:"Follow me, I got some stuff to show you. Pick the stuff you need."
>I'm following her, picking a neon green and purple saddlebag.
>There's a tunnel under this building.
"Er. these are the sewers, right?"
>Hyerta : "nah, these are technical tunnels, the sewers goes on the other direction. this tunnel's designed to bring interconnections, power and water, and takes you on the city. Most cities here have all kind of labyrinths underneath, this tunnel can be perfect to escape, no one really think about monitoring those or placing CCTV cameras in them. It's planned for the maintenance and upgrade of infrastructures, that's why we can trot into it all the way."
>she's illuminating the place with her horn. It's kind of narrow and gloomy but at this point I don't care.
>some dead roaches and spider webs hanging from old cables are finally some rare signs of uncontrolled life in this country.
>we're not talking much, and after trotting underground for several minutes we finally reach larger galleries, with service stairs.
>There's some brontide, loud noise resonating from times to times. There's also more humidity, dripping water from the ceiling of the galleries and other caverns...
>Hyerta:"That's the metro, underground trains are going in all directions."
"yep. Alice made me visit this place, a few desert stations, or underachieved ones."
>Hyerta:"oh yeah now you get the basic ideas, it's easy to get to loose somepony in there. just pay attention to the directions to find your way back."
>we're ending into a large hall, with signs, and more stairs
>Hyerta:"Sector 203 is still at the periphery of the city, but you can always peek a bit around before exiting, then immediately merge with the other ponies, avoid eye contact with others if there's any, don't talk to them, pretend you always lived there in this block..."
"I see, I think I can do this."
>She's smiling at me, as we go back, through the tunnels, and an even lower level, where a river flows under the city, rather actually the drainage. scary place, as if I fell into it, I'd drown immediately. We're walking on some rusty gate over it, and finally get to a hidden door outside the city, going back to the building where Liam was wondering where we went again.
>>119752
The story is neato so far
For some reason, the ambience of the city escapes reminds of the game dreamweb.
It was always gloomy and rainy in all the city
The story is neato so far
For some reason, the ambience of the city escapes reminds of the game dreamweb.
It was always gloomy and rainy in all the city
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>>119769
that's the intention, if i had the time to draw a comic about this world, it would look like suburb places here, with seamless bars of apartment buildings omnipresent in most big cities here. if it had a soundtrack, it would be essentially some kind of dissonant 80's gloomy synthcore.
again, it's without pretension or anything, i only write what I got on mind about an ideal dictatorship created in the name of hardcore socialist ideals and marxism, enforced by the same elite who claims to "want the best for you"
still the usage of some words might sound quite ... meh or not appropriate enough sometimes.
Also, there's an anime's ambience that also made me want to create this cold universe, Kaiba. visually and story-wise it's transhumanism to the extreme, where people's souls are stored on some chips and bodies are just businesses. cute, creepy, uncanny, it can have something.
>>119752
>Hyerta's putting some kind of black sweaters with a hood, covering her horn as we head outside.
"Isn't that risky?"
>Hyerta: "not much" she nodded. "i can defend myself, don't worry about that."
>There's some kind of long street, they call it a draining channel we're following, and discussing about magic and spells.
>Hyerta's a unicorn and hardly believe me when I tell her about what ponies here can do.
>We're on the periphery of the city where millions of ponies are living and working, in a synchronous movement, and in spite of it, this place is desert.
>There's factories and entrepots everywhere around us, with chimneys and towers pointing at the sky, like an army of cannons aimed at the stars, all aligned, and on the other side, chaotic amount of roads, and gates over roads, gates over gates, with some occasional vehicles and trucks.
>there's a huge contrast between the symmetry of these factories and the surrealist, almost creative aspect of these roads intertwined, on several levels.
>Am i really here or just dreaming all of this, or in some kind of coma after an accident?
>Hyerta:"So I was listening to you recording your message earlier, as you recovered your memory.."
"and things I kind of preffered to forget"
>Hyerta:"time will do that. They used you as a testbed for all kind of drugs so you told them everything you knew about Nyx, and you know, Kernav wants everything under her control, and be able to take something down if necessary, if not she would have never managed to capture this alicorn first. ...Perhaps they have tested it on her, but what if Twilight was wrong, even intentionally, as she stated this is all but theory?"
"You think you have strong enough magic to beat an alicorn?"
>Hyerta gasps, and laughs. "That's why we should gather unicorn stallions who are masters in this domain."
>we continue walking in desert lanes and arrive on a region with more sparse buildings. all are the same; identical copy.
>there we walk across a green-ish filly. or is he a colt? hard to tell. this, with the random blocks of concrete dropped in the middle of the road to serve as art is what we might use not to get lost in there.
>that little pony seemed to avoid us, looking at his own reflection in a puddle previously, then moved on.
"kind of unusual. I thought all ponies were locked in brainwashing centers."
>Hyerta:"Not all of them obviously. It's a good thing. Act like you don't care."
"Where exactly are you taking me?"
>Hyerta:"I know somepony who live here, a unicorn who had the chance to keep his horn and never really got caught."
>arrive at the door of the building
>she's ringing to one apartment. all have numbers, no name. The pony we were searching for had the number 042.
>Hyerta:"don't worry he might be a bit weird. all of these buildings have cameras, don't look at them."
>some buzzing noise and the door unlocks.
>we're entering, and there's a lift door opening.
>I remain as silent as possible
>a few seconds later we arrive at the 25th floor. knock into a door.
>Hyerta:"Nell?"
>Nell:"do come inside! Hello!...er"
"Hi" I greeted the white unicorn, looking around. "I'm Diamond Tiara."
>Nell:"Hyerta, I told you to get rid of her. Did you gave a shot of flash?"
>Hyerta:"Nah she's with me, she wasn't kidding, there's really something going on."
"What do you call a flash here?"
>Nell:"a drug that makes you wake up not remembering what happened yesterday, the only side effect known is anal pain. Do you know how many times I get asked this?" He's looking at Hyerta "So, what do you guys want? Also don't forget you owe me a little service for fixing her."
>Hyerta:"I think she's here for that."
>He's looking at me, levitating me briefly
>Nell:"Nah too young. She really looks like a brat, even when she was under anesthesia I wasn't interested about anything else to her."
>He's a bastard. I kind of like this.
"You... oh fine, you're the pony who fixed me? good job."
>Nell:"I usually save the lives of ponies who have been shot by the cops multiple times, that was nothing. Hyerta insisted. Also I had to use an anesthesia because you kept yelling and crying."
"Okay, then bad news I will have to talk a lot to you. I will give you a very valuable information that could save your life... and many other ponies."
>And here I go, we sit around a table on a gloomy apartment devoid of decoration, only a table, a fluorescent tube on the ceiling, TV screen embedded in the wall displaying all kind of numbers continuously, and some kind of camera with a photograph just in front of it.
"...And that's all I know."
>Nell:"So now you're hiding with Liam and Hyerta, got that."
>Hyerta:"Do you think you can take care of this Nyx?"
>Nell:"My job is about killing ponies, pegasus, or unicorns, I'm quite skilled at that but an alicorn? We'll need a strategy, a bait, a method to trap her. Or ensure she goes out of control, and let Kernav's army take care of her."
"Why would she do that? The only thing Kernav care about is to stay in power."
that's the intention, if i had the time to draw a comic about this world, it would look like suburb places here, with seamless bars of apartment buildings omnipresent in most big cities here. if it had a soundtrack, it would be essentially some kind of dissonant 80's gloomy synthcore.
again, it's without pretension or anything, i only write what I got on mind about an ideal dictatorship created in the name of hardcore socialist ideals and marxism, enforced by the same elite who claims to "want the best for you"
still the usage of some words might sound quite ... meh or not appropriate enough sometimes.
Also, there's an anime's ambience that also made me want to create this cold universe, Kaiba. visually and story-wise it's transhumanism to the extreme, where people's souls are stored on some chips and bodies are just businesses. cute, creepy, uncanny, it can have something.
>>119752
>Hyerta's putting some kind of black sweaters with a hood, covering her horn as we head outside.
"Isn't that risky?"
>Hyerta: "not much" she nodded. "i can defend myself, don't worry about that."
>There's some kind of long street, they call it a draining channel we're following, and discussing about magic and spells.
>Hyerta's a unicorn and hardly believe me when I tell her about what ponies here can do.
>We're on the periphery of the city where millions of ponies are living and working, in a synchronous movement, and in spite of it, this place is desert.
>There's factories and entrepots everywhere around us, with chimneys and towers pointing at the sky, like an army of cannons aimed at the stars, all aligned, and on the other side, chaotic amount of roads, and gates over roads, gates over gates, with some occasional vehicles and trucks.
>there's a huge contrast between the symmetry of these factories and the surrealist, almost creative aspect of these roads intertwined, on several levels.
>Am i really here or just dreaming all of this, or in some kind of coma after an accident?
>Hyerta:"So I was listening to you recording your message earlier, as you recovered your memory.."
"and things I kind of preffered to forget"
>Hyerta:"time will do that. They used you as a testbed for all kind of drugs so you told them everything you knew about Nyx, and you know, Kernav wants everything under her control, and be able to take something down if necessary, if not she would have never managed to capture this alicorn first. ...Perhaps they have tested it on her, but what if Twilight was wrong, even intentionally, as she stated this is all but theory?"
"You think you have strong enough magic to beat an alicorn?"
>Hyerta gasps, and laughs. "That's why we should gather unicorn stallions who are masters in this domain."
>we continue walking in desert lanes and arrive on a region with more sparse buildings. all are the same; identical copy.
>there we walk across a green-ish filly. or is he a colt? hard to tell. this, with the random blocks of concrete dropped in the middle of the road to serve as art is what we might use not to get lost in there.
>that little pony seemed to avoid us, looking at his own reflection in a puddle previously, then moved on.
"kind of unusual. I thought all ponies were locked in brainwashing centers."
>Hyerta:"Not all of them obviously. It's a good thing. Act like you don't care."
"Where exactly are you taking me?"
>Hyerta:"I know somepony who live here, a unicorn who had the chance to keep his horn and never really got caught."
>arrive at the door of the building
>she's ringing to one apartment. all have numbers, no name. The pony we were searching for had the number 042.
>Hyerta:"don't worry he might be a bit weird. all of these buildings have cameras, don't look at them."
>some buzzing noise and the door unlocks.
>we're entering, and there's a lift door opening.
>I remain as silent as possible
>a few seconds later we arrive at the 25th floor. knock into a door.
>Hyerta:"Nell?"
>Nell:"do come inside! Hello!...er"
"Hi" I greeted the white unicorn, looking around. "I'm Diamond Tiara."
>Nell:"Hyerta, I told you to get rid of her. Did you gave a shot of flash?"
>Hyerta:"Nah she's with me, she wasn't kidding, there's really something going on."
"What do you call a flash here?"
>Nell:"a drug that makes you wake up not remembering what happened yesterday, the only side effect known is anal pain. Do you know how many times I get asked this?" He's looking at Hyerta "So, what do you guys want? Also don't forget you owe me a little service for fixing her."
>Hyerta:"I think she's here for that."
>He's looking at me, levitating me briefly
>Nell:"Nah too young. She really looks like a brat, even when she was under anesthesia I wasn't interested about anything else to her."
>He's a bastard. I kind of like this.
"You... oh fine, you're the pony who fixed me? good job."
>Nell:"I usually save the lives of ponies who have been shot by the cops multiple times, that was nothing. Hyerta insisted. Also I had to use an anesthesia because you kept yelling and crying."
"Okay, then bad news I will have to talk a lot to you. I will give you a very valuable information that could save your life... and many other ponies."
>And here I go, we sit around a table on a gloomy apartment devoid of decoration, only a table, a fluorescent tube on the ceiling, TV screen embedded in the wall displaying all kind of numbers continuously, and some kind of camera with a photograph just in front of it.
"...And that's all I know."
>Nell:"So now you're hiding with Liam and Hyerta, got that."
>Hyerta:"Do you think you can take care of this Nyx?"
>Nell:"My job is about killing ponies, pegasus, or unicorns, I'm quite skilled at that but an alicorn? We'll need a strategy, a bait, a method to trap her. Or ensure she goes out of control, and let Kernav's army take care of her."
"Why would she do that? The only thing Kernav care about is to stay in power."
>>120269
It's neat so far, could get some more adult scenes if you know what I mean!
Would you make a picture with all the characters from your story?
It's neat so far, could get some more adult scenes if you know what I mean!
Would you make a picture with all the characters from your story?
>>123488
yeah it's an idea, making a description and colorchart of the characters in this country, I'll be on it before I start a new, fulltime job. but that's an idea before I finish this story.
thanks for the motivation /mlpol/!
yeah it's an idea, making a description and colorchart of the characters in this country, I'll be on it before I start a new, fulltime job. but that's an idea before I finish this story.
thanks for the motivation /mlpol/!
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>>131520
Yes it is and that's what makes the whole plot behind Industria and its leaders interesting.
Also the way it was created, a powerful, Soros-like pony calling himself 'the Boss' taking over a nation.
Can get some vibes from 1984 or Brave New World, Idiocracy… this is still a de facto, horrible depiction of the NWO, how corporations and conglomerates, (((globalists))) are taking the power over governments, spreading social justice discourses and propaganda just like the Soviet Union did.
Then you have a nation that's nothing but a giant gulag.
Yes it is and that's what makes the whole plot behind Industria and its leaders interesting.
Also the way it was created, a powerful, Soros-like pony calling himself 'the Boss' taking over a nation.
Can get some vibes from 1984 or Brave New World, Idiocracy… this is still a de facto, horrible depiction of the NWO, how corporations and conglomerates, (((globalists))) are taking the power over governments, spreading social justice discourses and propaganda just like the Soviet Union did.
Then you have a nation that's nothing but a giant gulag.
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