Dark Star fights against CRT in the school system continues along his path to ensure a future for his and his race's children. Iron conducts a salvage operation finds and recovers hidden treasure. Amber is learning how to exploit simps establishes relationships in her new town. Spark harbors multiple terrorist continues helping Wellspring and the wolf tribe. Silver acts as a step father for unwanted foals gives back to the community at the orphanage. All of this and more
>>154852Amber makes whiny sobs as she recounts what a horrible little pony she has been, repaying kindness with teasing, demands, and suspicion. So soon after she promised to be better too. She has a very bad headache from all of this.
That bed is brand-new yet has seen a fair share of abuse on just its first night, including crying, lovemaking, paranoid hiding, and now more crying.
>>154853Go out to find him, contemplate your emotions, or go to sleep in the hopes that can numb the pain. These are you options
unless I’m missing something, little filly.
>>154854She suddenly realizes that it has not been that long since he left, and he could still be in the neighborhood, possibly lost. Sleep might help if she can get it, but she needs to return the jacket in the morning anyway, so might as well do it now. She doesn't harbor any fantasies of winning him back, this is only the right thing to do.
Pulling herself out of bed, she puts on her cloak–sans dress–and stuffs the jacket underneath it, before setting out to find him in time.
>>154858She actually finds him, easily. Downstairs, by the phone
>>154859With tears running down her face, she approaches him with her head held low, puts his jacket down next to him, and quietly walks off.
>>154860He sees her, and turns his head away from her. He is sitting next to the phone, clearly distraught, abs he appears to have been crying, though she does not catch him in the act.
>>154861Amber cannot bear to see him in such a state, but does not dare bother him any more. She slowly leaves, withers heaving in muffled sobs.
>>154864She pauses, still facing away from him, and sniffles.
"Because I'm stupid. I'm crazy and I'm stupid."
>>154865Angrily:
“What did I do? Is it because I came onto you too strong? What did you expect by inviting me to stay the night? What was I supposed to think? You could have just said ‘no’. You could have just said you did not want to. I would have respected your boundaries. Instead, you say I am a Changeling?”
>>154866She looks back at him, tears streaming down her muzzle.
"I-I really did think…you were one. I was angry, I thought you had been hurt somewhere, that the changeling was going to hurt me and other ponies.
I was so stupid, and I made a mistake."
>>154868"You turned on the lights, and you didn't look like Mustard Trim.
I mean…you looked like you, but harsher, and you looked at me like you wanted to hurt me. Then you turned off the lights without a word, and I panicked…I'm so sorry!" she bawls, as she falls to the floor quivering.
>>154869So cuteHe blinks
“What? You really thought I was a Changeling?!”
>>154870"Yes, I was so stupid but I convinced myself. I'm so sorry, I never would have hurt you if I knew better!" she says, her body heaving with sobs.
>>154871“Oh, I’m not a Changeling.” He makes a “heheh” resembling laughter. On its own it would sound very strange, but it’s likely welcome in context.
“You…. Thought I was going to hurt you?” He asks
>>154873“No. No. No….” He looks side to side, anxious, abs rocks back and forth.
“I thought you were going to let me… I thought we were going to-“
He gently taps his hooves together.
“Then I thought about that stallion with his coworkers and the paper. And I realized I wanted to see if you still had that- the skin. You know? There should be skin or something if you are still a Virgin. I wanted to know. I wanted to see it to know for sure if you were or not. I did not want to hurt you. I needed to know.”
>>154874"Skin? Stallion?" she asks confusedly, as she wipes away her tears.
"I don't understand…."
>>154875He is silent for a minute. He looks away, and is clearly uncomfortable
“Uh…. There is supposed to be a bit of skin on your…” he Taos his hooves “on your vagina that breaks the first time you have sex and leaves blood on the sheets. I, uh, I wanted to see if you had that.”
>>154876She looks at him like he just spoke Minotaurian.
"Can you show me?" she asks uncertainly.
>>154878The young mare is still shivering and sniffling.
"Have you talked to your ma?" she asks awkwardly.
>>154879“No…” he says
“My sister answered the phone.”
>>154880"I guess that's good...." she sniffles, wiping her eyes. She doesn't press him on what they said to each other.
>>154881“What do you want?” He asks her
>>154882She shakes her head, still looking miserable albeit slightly less than before.
"I don't know. I just wanted to say sorry for what I've done. I know you don't want to see me ever again...."
>>154883He pulls his head, turns it to her, and looks her in the eyes
“Is that all you want?”
>>154886She looks up to him, her purplish eyes gazing desperately into his.
"No...." she replies, lip quivering.
>>154885These look pretty good for pony maker program. I'd love to hear more about your character some time.
>>154889You could just post it in another thread.
>>154892"You belittle me. Make me feel like less of a pony" He says to her
>>154894"Do you want to be told you are smelly, or that you 'wet the bed' like a yearling?"
>>154895She looks off to the side, ashamed.
"N-no, I don't...I'm sorry..."
>>154896"The changeling thing, I guess I can understand..."
He looks off to the side
"I don't know..."
>>154898He extends a hoof, and starts petting her.
“Do you want to be my girlfriend?”
>>154899She sighs in response to his touch.
"Yes! More than anything. I'm just a bad marefriend...."
>>154900"If I... if I hadn't turned on the lights, would you have let me penetrate you?"
>>154901Amber's yellow face becomes completely flushed, and she puts her fetlock over her muzzle.
"Yes."
>>154902"Heh" He seems flattered by that
"I let my sister know I am here. So now she knows, and I owe her for taking her time at this time of night."
>>154904"She is. Do you want me to be your somepony, today and here on?"
>>154905She smiles at him, sniffling.
"My very special somepony."
>>154906"Then I am going to put conditions on you. The first is that you owe my sister. Or at least, you owe me for what I owe to my sister. You will pay her back, one way or another."
>>154892>She's not a good characterYou say that, but I don't think so.
>>154908He actually smiles at this
"Second, don't belittle me or talk down to me. Don't say I'm smelly, or say I am a little colt, or treat me like I am a colt. Don't insult me. I cannot be with someone who is like that to me."
>>154910"I promise. No teasing," she says, smiling at him.
>>154911"It isn't teasing to me.... It's very hurtful..."
>>154914Lovely colors.
I'd love to hear more about her backstory or class distrbution. You could always post her to one of the de-facto generals and carry on the conversation there.
I considered making an RPG character-creation thread, but idk who'd be interested in that.
>>154914>Giving up all of the cute at once
Never give all, all at once"And... I want to know for sure if you are a virgin or not."
>>154917I have yet moreAmber looks curiously at him.
"Why do you seem so intent on knowing, and how are you going to find out? I think I am."
>>154918Okay, I'm intrigued.She's so cuteHe shakes his head
"What does that mean? You think you are? I care, because, well... I am one, and I want my first time to be with one. I want it to be special. I want the mare I marry to be one. I want her to be mine, her one and only." He answers with slight irritation
>>154920He smiles back, though with an equal weariness.
“I believe you. It’s just that…” he looks around, straining for words “I want to it to be proven, you know?”
His look shows that he is uncomfortable saying these things out-loud, and it is straining him to say this much.
>>154921They are still in the lobby of Amber's apartment building. Although there wouldn't be any pony or creature here at this hour, and undoubtedly private things have happened here in the past, they could be walked in on or heard at any time.
Amber looks a bit uncertain at him. After what she just did she is in no place to complain about distrust, but this is still rather odd. However, he knows much more about all of this than she does, so she lets him take the lead.
"You want to be intimate again?" she inquires.
>>154923She replies,
"After what I've done...." with tears welling up in the corners of her eyes, and she seems to push forward for a kiss. However, she moves past him and closely inspects where she hit him, her hoof very gently spreading those hairs apart.
"I'm sorry I hurt you."
>>154924He takes his right forehoof, and places it under Amber's chin, and reaches around, and holds her head up, just below the ears.
"I'll give you another chance." He says, smiling
>>154925She sniffles, returning his smile, but something yet gives her pause.
"What if I turned out to not be a virgin? What then?"
>>154926Th question makes him uncomfortable. But frankly, no part of that topic has made him comfortable, so his reaction is about the same.
"Well, I'm not sure I would want to marry you." He answers
>>154927Her ears perk up at the word, "marry." It really should come as no surprise to a country girl after doing married-couple things–kissing, cuddling, sleeping together, and soon "penetration"–but marriage has always been a dim and distant prospect, some hypothetical life goal.
She conceals her giddiness as she replies,
"I wouldn't blame you one bit. And, er, if you want to hit me back, to make us even, I wouldn't begrudge you. Don't hold back." She closes her eyes and braces herself.
>>154928Mustard Trim:
"Uh, heheh, that's alright"
Amber can only hope that if she becomes successful, locks down her love, and has all of the excitement and security she can hope for, that she may walk with as much sheer smug contentment as the 300 pound griffin that walks out of the office door next to them, and into the foyer, holding his big ring of keys. He is followed by his ragged grey stallion helper, who has a crowbar in his mouth. He turns to Mustard Trim, and imparts the following wisdom to him:
"She's lying to you about being a virgin. Wear a condom. She's trying to baby trap you so you'll marry her."Then he turns to Amber, and says the following,
"If you want him to hit you so he will be afraid to call the police that is alright. But do not call the police on him or I will take your deposit. I have some acquaintances coming over to help collect some money, and they'd very much appreciate if there were no police there to witness it."Then he turns to walk off. He has a job to do.
>>154929kekAmber glares at the interloper the whole time, giving him the stink eye. They must have heard
everything.
"I ain't rough…" she mutters.
>>154917Maybe I'll make one then. I've been working on a long-term project to compile ttrpg content that has been enjoyed and posted on this site, and that includes cataloging PCs.
>>154930Though Guido most assuredly sleeps like a pampered baby, 12:30 AM on a Sunday is work time for his sadly thankless profession. He gives a nod of "you're welcome," and walks off, going through a door to the left of the foyer.
Mustard is evidently a little distracted:
"Rough? What?"
>>154931Nice! Feel free to
>>154932"He implied I was going to stronghoof you with chicanery," she spits.
"I can be crazy or stupid sometimes, but that's downright evil." Her eyes look to be watering, as she undoubtedly experiences a small part of what Mustard must have felt when she accused him of being a changeling menace.
>>154933"Oh. Uh... it's alright" He says, smiling awkwardly. He leans in a little more, and hugs her, placing her hooves around him.
"Why don't I make a phone call, and then we go back to your room?"
>>154934Do you mean placing his hooves around her?She sniffs and nods, leaning against his warm body for however briefly.
>>154935Uh... yes. That.It's kind of odd, playing the male after so long playing femalesHe picks up the phone, inserts a few of his last coins, and lets the phone ring. He speaks into the phone, and in the short conversation, the gist is that he will in fact not be going home, but staying there.
He hangs up, and looks to Amber
>>154936Lol, gotta change things up. Also, just realized that >>154927 essentially means "I'd hit that, but not put a ring on it"When he looks back, Amber is sitting on her haunches, looking ardently out towards him. She can hardly believe that this is happening.
>>154937In an earlier version of that imagined dialogue, Mustard would have been more explicit, and basically said he expected sex if she wasn't a virgin, but would not expect it if she was.He hangs up the phone, extends his hoof, and asks her
"Want to go up?"
>>154938With a grin and a nod, she gets up and leads him back up the flight of stairs. Her tail is raised and swinging from side to side.
>>154939Strangely enough, after that - after all of that - Amber has kept her preferred colt, and will be able to sleep within his legs tonight. Amber can actually say she ended the day ahead of where she began it. So... congratulations, Amber.
He opens the door, turns on the light, and lets her walk in
>>154940Mustard was always going to end up ahead because he managed to score, but it is indeed lucky for Amber.
She fills up her flask with tap water and thirstily gulps it down, before offering it to Mustard.
"Here, you must be thirsty," she says, wearing a nervous smile and a blush on her face.
>>154941The colt is indeed thirsty. He stares at the flask for a moment, evidently in natural revulsion to drinking a from a cup just used by another. It takes him two moments to realize his own actions have made that point moot, and he takes a drink. He finishes the flask.
>>154942She fetches more water for him in case he wants more, and waits beside him with a big dorky smile and her blush intensifying.
>>154943He takes another drink, and looks over to her dopily
"hehe"
He moves to sit down on the bed
>>154944She paws the ground nervously.
"You wanted to check…."
>>154945"Yes...." He makes a smile that shows most of his teeth, and he looks away
>>154947He continues to smile awkwardly, but he tells her,
"Why don't you lay on your belly on the bed, but keep your rump and hindlegs hanging off of the edge of the bed... and raise your tail?"
>>154948She looks awkwardly at him, but does as he says. She lays herself across the foot of the bed, looks at him sitting beside her, and flips her tail up across her flank.
"O-okay…now what?"
>>154949No intimacy, just a feeling of the subject being uncomfortable but necessary. At least that's the vibe Mustard gives off. He stands up, and walks around
"Uh... I need to see your private areas."
He moves into position, lowers his head, and tries to see what he can.
>>154950This is not a view he has seen in decent lighting before, owing to his marefriend's tail being long and straight, as well as her tendency to keep it straight down over her rear. Amber's plot has fur which shortens as it moves inwards, terminating in bare skin between her buttocks, the color of sienna and several shades darker than her coat. Below the dock of her tail, which is flipped up over her back, is her medium-sized (for an equine), circular anus, sticking out slightly from her rump's valley. Adjoined to that, just below, is her marehood.
Vulvas vary widely among mares, some say as much as their faces. Amber's is medium-sized but does not puff out so much as others, and there are fewer wrinkles along its length than is typical. It starts out narrow at her anus and bulges out gradually, forming an attractively-curved shape. The very bottom of it, below where Mustard might know her clitoris to be, has a few solitary scraggly hairs on otherwise bare skin. The lips of her genitals are pressed shut, a thin seam visible where they join.
Amber is looking back at him while he examines her, her face beet-red. If he's trying to give off the impression of being a gynecologist, it's not working because her hips are quivering.
>>154951The moment of truth:
Amber's hymen
Does he see it?
Does he confirm it isn't there?
Or does some mixture of him not knowing exactly what the hell he's looking for, and the fact that it varies widely across mares to begin with, mean that he is unable to return a "yes" or a "no"?