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>>119052She asked him
twice to clarify, explain, or elaborate upon the “do not betray [my trust]” line, pulling away from him to signify that this was a very important issue to her that must be answered, and twice, he refused
>Her statementHe could ask. He may not get an honest answer, but he could ask
>and she's even considering taking him now as his coltfriend.
That stallion was Dark Star, funnily enough.
>>119057What is there to clarify? He simply asked not to break his trust. He wasn't implying anything aside from 'Don't screw me over'. If she wanted specifics, she would've asked 'That's rather vague, mind telling me what can break your trust?' instead of going suspicious and scared she's been found out or something with 'What are you implying?'.
>He could askBut he doesn't want to, because by this point he knows it's a useless line of conversation currently and needs to gain more trust with this mare if he wants to get an honest answer.
>>119055Iron doesn't mesh well with Skies and we'll leave it at that. >>119059SighHave you ever seen the “Don’t you fuck me?” scene in the movie Scarface? It’s worded pretty much the same, and it is very obviously a threat.
https://youtu.be/IcInPRRfr9EHe’s clearly implying that he does not trust her. He says this immediately after he has pretty much told her straight up “I am still going to try to date this other girl, by the way,” which is him telling her he does not intend to be faithful in the normal sense, and in any case is a pretty big thing for him to ask. So she is puzzled and offended that he implies that he does not trust her, since she has given her no reason not to, whereas he explicitly told her not to trust him to be faithful.
>>119061Reeee realistic behavior is people not talking to each other and hating each other. I want ponies fucking.
Also I tried to resolve it in character with unsubtle non-verbal cues. It didn’t take
>>119063I mean, I guess she would just walk off like a stranger, maybe complain to Silver later, and in any event act colder.
I’m just frustrated when character interactions and relationships are ruined by a small shit and a lack of communication. I’m getting blue balled too.
I’m just bitching, but yes, she would return to being a combat focused NPC
>>119066He never learns, damn it! He just thinks that if he offends another person, it must be because he is right and superior, and the offended person is bad and inferior
We can proceed like normal. It’s just a shame, that’s all
>>119064>>119066>>119067I have to admit retreat is not exactly a good option if what you want is a climax and Iron to learn.
Nothing will be gained or lost, after all, and no one learns from it.
Although it is pretty realistic, I won't lie.
>>119068I'm not sure I'd call what transpired as "realistic". It was just...bad. Poor Sands...
>>119069Miscommunication killing off relationships? It happens all the time.
>>119070Again, I'm not sure I'd call what happened miscommunication. Maybe it was on your end, but to everyone else it came off as overly harsh and callous, especially after his pretty terrible responses to Sands' previous questions.
>>119071Harsh? He asked something very simple which needed no further explanation. A relationship is based on trust, after all.
>>119072It's the way it was worded. "Don't betray mine" sounds far more adversarial than, say "I'll put my trust in you".
>>119073Sure, but it's not worth breaking up over.
>>119074I can't really do much if she goes away, but you're right. He'll have to let it simmer. >>119080Is he here tho? I can't say for sure.Well, I guess I better do this again.>>119049Seeing Sands getting upset again, he puts a hoof on her flank again with a curious, worried gaze.
"Are you upset about something in particular?"
>>119081>>119081I wrote a huge thing. Then you made this postShe flinches, and turns her head back. Then she pulls her forelegs back. She speaks, loudly, suddenly, and with hurt in her voice.
“Why do you think I will betray you? Do you not trust me?”
>>119082Iron's eyes widen in surprise followed by fervent nodding.
"I do trust you, Sands, but there is something that has been bugging me after you went for a private talk with Silver."
He looks at her, ears drooped and a doubtful expression.
"There is a big secret you are not telling me."
>>119083“.... What? Why would you think that? Silver.... Is that the unicorn? Silver pulled me aside to talk about your Zebra”
>>119084"But why did he? Why did he not stop you?"
He pauses for a bit.
"And why do you need immunity against law enforcement? You were a slave worker here, right?"
>>119085“He wanted to tell me about your Zebra mare”
Then she looks down
“Well.... sort of...”
>>119086Iron cocks his head at her uncertainly, ears still drooped.
"What do you mean?"
>>119087“I was captured by these criminals... before that, well...”
>>119088Iron awaits patiently her story.
>>119089“So maybe I
didn’t work in elderly care... I was just telling that to the kid because he thought he recognized me... working as a waiter for snooty ponies doesn’t pay big, and certainly not enough to pay rent”
>>119090Iron is still not satisfied with the response given, but gives her a small grin at her since she is telling the truth.
"So what did you do before then?"
>>119091“So maybe I worked with a local organized gang. Perhaps swindling a few stallions, or distracting customs agents as cargos are offloaded. Maybe I did some illegal things. And maybe I was captured as a part of a turf war...”
>>119092Iron cocks his head, confused by her actions.
"Why did you call for immunity if they had nothing on you?"
>>119091>>119092*pouty unicorn sounds*
She hangs her head low, and her eyes half closed
>>119093“You never know what they know, or what they’ll find”
>>119094Iron looks a bit iffy, still bothered by something.
"Why did you not mention it when I offered you to do illegal activities, then?"
>>119095Iffy as in head cocked, ears drooped and eyebrow cocked.
>>119095“I was asking you about.... Well, dating. I was surprised and disappointed to hear a business proposal instead”
>>119097Iron hums a bit before pulling her chin up gently with a hoof, ears drooped and brow lowered and staring at her gently.
"Is that everything? I dislike having secrets with the ones I love."
He blinks once.
"It is what breaks my trust the most."
>>119098She sits down, and places her forehooves together
“I
may have collaborated with the gangsters here just a tiny little bit...”
>>119099Iron's eyes widen and his ears perk up.
(How many secrets are in there?)
"What kind of collaboration?" he asks
>>119100She looks into his eyes
“Let’s not dwell on things”
>>119101Iron can't help but feel even more worried, ears drooping back again.
"It is important to share these kinds of things, Sands. We cannot cover things up between eachother."
>>119102“Okay okay okay okay... fine. They would have us locked together. Sometimes in a workshop, sometimes... down there. They would give food, or more favorable treatment to prisoners who would tell when others were not working hard, or were planning escape or what have you, as well as who knew the patterns of Customs, which I did”