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Anonymous
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Welcome. This thread is for you Anons who wishes to improve your writing or just chill among Anons that do.
This is suppose to be a chill af thread. It's fine if it becomes a slider thread. I'll only make a new one of these if there is intrest.

>What is the need for this thread when we already have Glimglam's review thread and Anonfilly?
Compared to Glimglam's thread this thread is about what we Anons will or want to create. The only reviewing that might happened here is incidental, as in providing critic to some other work through comparison with the work at hand, and when one Anon tells another what his opinions of their work is.
This thread is first and foremost about producing stories.
This cannot be done in the Anonfilly thread since it is about Anonfilly first and foremost.

>Why a thread like this? Cannot we just have threads pop up organically because an Anon chose to post a green?
Yes, you are right. And this thread is absolutely not against other threads that circle around a singular story made by an Anon.
What this thread really is, is a form of support group for anyone wanting to write but are struggling with something in their writing process, like myself.
I thought it would be a good idea to talk to other Anons who also have similar goals about our stories and are struggling in creating them. Maybe, you struggle on something I don't and maybe I struggle on something you don't and therefore we can provide advice to each other on how to overcome our problems? Maybe some mysterious wise Anonsage lurks and our discussion prompts him to tell us his method he gained from meditating on top of K2 for five years without chicken tendies.

As stated before this is relaxed thread. If you like the thread, you don't have to pressure yourself into posting something to bump it. If anyone would like a continuation of it, I'll post a new one if it hits the archive. It's also okay to get off topic sometimes as well. I understand that conversations can lead to tangents and that it can be a relief finding someone else to talk to about things with, especially if few shares the perspective. If things get out of hand, I, or someone else, will ask you to kindly take this discussion to another thread or more fitting board, even perhaps. As an actual sugguestion, not a hidden insult. You and another Anon might discover something really intresting to talk about so why not create a thread about it?
Memetexts are, of course, welcomed.
Also, you don't have to share your problems if you don't want to. If you feel like telling us about your story that's enough. Story ideas can be really intresting to listen to and it might help you in return. Again, only do that if you want to.

So that's about it for the thread's header. The rest that follows is about me.

Right now, I thought about making the most simplest story I could think off. It's a simple hero's journey story. I do this because of two reasons. First off, I wanna know that I can start a project and see it to the end. I have only succeeded in finishing short stories before, you see, so this time I wanna try something longer. I also wanna keep it simple so that I don't get overwhelmed during the process of writing it.
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Anonymous
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>>330420
Nothing I'm that post pertains to writing. Take it to the /sp/ or /test/ threads.
Anonymous
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>>330421
Spare me. I think I've already done far more than my fair share of trying to keep this kind of horseshit cordoned off. If I recall correctly, you guys were the ones that wanted to throw shit everywhere. Like telling people to take it to /sp/ is going to stop it the next multitude of times. I wanted no part of this, remember. The trouble found me, not the other way around.
Anonymous
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>>330417
You misunderstood me. I just meant it has been going one for way longer.
>>>330420
Yeah, he's latest posts have really started to hammer that in. It is a you say. I don't wanna waste my time on this guy. If he'll be like whitenoise in the background of these threads, so be it. I can do nothing about it.
>>330418
I read some more of it today. Will try to come up with some thoughs, hasn't really been good or bad exluding the things I have already mention.
Anonymous
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>>330426
Sven, you were cool mate. But I'd GTFO and yesterday if I were you. Regardless, cheers.
Anonymous
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>>330428
>But I'd GTFO and yesterday if I were you.
Yeah. I think I'll take a break from this board for a like one or two weeks. It has started to take up too much time.
>>330418
So Miguel, if you still want feedback on your story from me, send such a request to this burner email; then I can continue doing that through it.
[email protected]
Otherwise, you'll have to wait for my return. Adios.
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>>330429
Whatever, take your time.

All in all, i wish i had posted in a more opportune time, it's been entertaining i guess
Anonymous
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>>330417
But all I want to fix is my story
Anonymous
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In the movie Idiocracy there's this bit where the hero is loathed by the idiot populace he's trying to save. They throw him in an arena to be killed by monster trucks. It's a literal public execution cheered on by the idiot masses whose bloodlust only fades once someone on TV tells them the hero is right and shows them his "water crops with WATER" idea is right.
It's a powerful piece of propaganda.
The average everyday man is saved from the idiots by the prostitute on TV. Trusting the TV saves the day, or the idiot's tendency to trust the TV saves the day depending on how you look at it.
For a movie meant to demonize idiots, it lets them walk away thinking it's ok if they keep trusting "the right" people on TV, whoever they are. And for the smug libtards, it blames declining IQ scores not on the turd-world immigration leftist scum enables, but on the conservative rural christians.

Maybe it wasn't right for the hero of my story to get the money he needs to move from fagland to churchtopia so easily. Maybe there should have been an arena fight against something huge (libtard sheep in giant robots?) Sparky wins by blowing up a big TV that was spewing enemy propaganda.
It's symboic. (CAW)

I got messages saying the opener of the story was too dark and turned away a few viewers. Maybe instead of thinking about how hopeless everything seems he could be thinking "My big fight is coming soon. I still have hope".
Anonymous
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>>330468
>For a movie meant to demonize idiots, it lets them walk away thinking it's ok if they keep trusting "the right" people on TV, whoever they are.
I wouldn't go that far, tbh. The real message was to get personally involved in politics or globa affairs, even if you don't think you're he right person and are only average. It opens with "Lead, follow, or get ot of the way", but the real message was to lead, or a the very least follow who you believe in.
I may be biased because I like the movie.
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>>330469
I thought the movie opened on demographics and inheritable IQ being framed as high-IQ cityslicker jews who never get around to sex vs white redneck americans.
Personally I like the film too. It's hilarious. I'm trying to view media through the propaganda lens to improve my own.

Btw I was thinking... anyone who genuinely desires freedom ends up realizing only nazis can defend freedom from jews. Anyone who desires free speech and free thought will eventually hear a good argument for the truth and learn about how fake the holohoax is. So maybe instead of trying to make my audience hate libtards as much as me and support a white christian ethnostate I should focus on more family-friendly pro-freedom pro-truth ideas. Time can handle the rest.
Anonymous
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>>330471
>I thought the movie opened on demographics and inheritable IQ being framed as high-IQ cityslicker jews who never get around to sex vs white redneck americans.
It moreso opened on the "smart" people who have the means to fix society failing to do so.
>white redneck americans
Redneck yes, but I wouldn't say the focus was on him being white. They compared a bunch of intelligent educated Americans all failing to reproduce when a single redneck managed to have thousands of spawn because he didn't give a fuck. There was no shortage of niggers in the idiocracy; even UPGRAYDD mabaged to have thousands of descendants who shared his retarded surname.
The point was that waiting around for the "correct" people to fix society is stupid, because if they were competent or willing enough to fix it it wouldn't be broken in the first place: people are not suddenly going to wake up and get smarter about the shit they do; if anything, they're only getting dumber. Average people need to take matters into their own hands.
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>>330471
>maybe instead of trying to make my audience hate libtards as much as me and support a white christian ethnostate I should focus on more family-friendly pro-freedom pro-truth ideas.
This is a better approach. Focusing on what you hate/exclude is a fool's errand unless you make a point to elevate what's important. Normies may seem braindead for allowing society to rot, but the problem isn't necessarily ntelligence but rather that they don't have their priorities straight. People need to be taught why family, freedom and truth are important things worth protecting; and people who are on the fence about those ideals could benefit to have them reinforced.
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yo this looks like that kingdom hearts thingy.jpg
>>330505
That's another thing I've been thinking about...
FIM is a semi-liberal show sometimes. There are a lot of good things about this show, but when Rarity bats her eyelashes to make simps work for her it's treated with no less severity than if Fluttershy were to ask nicely to get pet bears to pull their cart. The thought that the simps might expect payment never comes into their mind. Men like Spike are called greedy if they accept too many gifts, or expect them.
FIM's take on Dragons not raised by ponies are the feminist writers take on men not "raised primarily by women": Brutish thrill-seeking bullies. No wonder so many male fans of this show self-insert or make up new male characters when there are so few male characters to use as your de facto self-insert.
Spike's treated like an afterthought and in that book where he was turned into a pony, his Cutie Mark wasn't fire or a scroll or a dragon claw, it was Rarity's face on his ass representing his talent at being a Rarity simp.
So the average audience of FIM fanfiction is already likely to lean left through deliberate evil or through not knowing better.
Then there's Fallout. Despite all its pro-libertarian messages about self-reliance and considering the fallout of your actions and being the shotgun-toting pure-hearted smart talker the world needs, despite its occasional flirtations with the conservative's power fantasy of power-armoured Power Ranger Halo Spartans and Giant Robots killing Communists and A Jew's Perception Of Nazis for you while conflating the two, the series still chose to take "1960s America bad" to an absurd degree with the Enclave. I wish I could chalk this up to Bethesda being shit writers who love their black and white villains but even Fallout 1 and 2 had this kind of shit.
The Globalist NWO ruining the world is painted as an exclusively American thing with American businessmen and politicians and generals working together. The thought that they might be working with the commie Chinese and other threats to whites never comes up and demographics? Never brought up intentionally. The idea that the descendants of these people might have good intentions for America? Laughable when they're typically written as cartoon supervillains with conquering America or genociding America before repopulating it on the mind. The most even-handed approach the franchise ever took to the Enclave was when they were depicted as countryless and tired old veterans ready to go out in a blaze of glory "making up for their past sins" by "fighting for the right side instead for a change".
Don't get me started on the "sterile" "Master Race". Sure he mentions wanting to transform the world through making them mixed mutants united under his heel but there are countless other words this collectivist racemixing transhumanist fleshcancer could have used to describe himself and the end result of his project. Would it have really killed them to call his army The Collective? Couldn't they depict a commie honestly without slipping in some "hurr durr nazis bad" buzzwords too? Hitler would have opposed The Master if he was real.
Then there's the NCR. What makes the NCR bad? Well, the same thing a Liberal would claim makes America bad minus anything that Liberal has to say about race. "Imperialism, Bureaucracy, Dumb People, Taxes, Rich Men(cow barons), and a corrupt democracy full of Evil Corrupt Individuals!" say the authors, unwilling to depict a single libtard NCR politician hurting innocents in the pursuit of pussy libtardism whether he knows he's serving communism or not.

So already, while there are certainly exceptions (Just look at this site, or any Fallout fan who prefers Obsidian!Brotherhood Of Steel or the Enclave or Caesar's Legion to the New Cuckifornia Republic or Minutemen) the average intended fan of Fallout or MLP is likely to lean left.

Then there's Fallout Equestria. It's dogshit.
It's also tremendously Liberal.
While Liberalism failed Equestria in this story, the author's intent is clearly to depict ponies as fools who "lost their way" and failed to live up to Sufficient Liberalism.
The mane six were granted absolute power and ruined Equestria by failing to be sufficiently Liberal, even as they were both being warred on by moon-phobic Luna-loathing mindlessly-religious school-bombing heartless barbaric Zebra cultists AND making refugee camps for all the Ziggers who felt like being fed and doing drugs in Equestria despite the pony and pony police presence.
Fluttershy's peacetard behaviour gives the Ziggers healing ICBMs, they reverse-engineer them into nuclear dynamite vests and smuggle them into Equestria with the help of the traitorous Four Stars corporation.
Equestria burns and dies so 200 years later, libtard murderhobos who view libtardery as the only way despite their token disagreements on shooting rapists in the act vs dragging them away to be rehabilitated and killing their enemies with needle guns and shotgun-toting allies vs killing them with shotguns yourself while claiming you've "Never killed anypony and have still never killed anypony as far as you're concerned".
FE's libtards view roaming the world and killing all who fail to live up to their leftist moral standard as their goal in life. They don't just invade bandit lands and "self-defense" any criminals protecting their stolen territory, they openly instigate fights with and remorselessly kill+rob Brotherhood Of Steel TechnoFeudalists and Arbu cannibals and Red Eye's Slavers for being "Bad"(TM).

Fallout Equestria is a tranny leftist's power fantasy and despite all its purple prose and B.S. about Values and Moral Greys, LP never has her certainty in her right to kill+take+redistribute as she pleases challenged plus all her villains are one-note villains who mwahaha. Bootleg Rita Repulsa minus the charm, Pro-Slavery Wannabe-God, and a cardboard cutout named General whatever whose goal is genociding the earth below Bioshock Infinite style.

FE Fanfic? Too niche.
Must find new angle.
Anonymous
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>>330508
I was never really fond of Fallout in the first place, and even less so of FoE, so I can't really provide any constructive opinions on the matter.
Anonymous
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>>330509
Do you think I was too obvious with my subtle gay joke in one of the later chapters?

>“Are you sure? I heard a rumor that a cat named Friday-”
>“Everyone's heard rumors about the legendary Doc Friday, and how he's so spectacularly homosexual, it can damage the space-time continuum and make the impossible happen. Everyone's heard the story of him getting the gold medal for the fastest gay cat to ever do the Olympic backstroke in front of a live audience in a literal swimming pool full of horse semen. Everyone's heard the stories of him sucking a literal six hundred and sixty six penises in one night until each one achieved climax at Club Manhole on Secret Gay Homosexual Orgy Night. They're completely fictional. If someone that gay ever existed, why would he ever go to a decidedly straight Butler cafe like this one when there are so many gay Butler cafes out there? Club Manhole has its Secret Gay Homosexual Orgy Night every Friday, so the jokes about gay shit happening 'on Friday' write themselves.”

Gay cat sounds like Kkat, and his female self-insert OC is named "Friday". But it's got plausible deniability because Doc Friday is a Fallout character.
Anonymous
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>>330510
Low hanging fruit, but no; Doc Friday sounds like Silver Star
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I've got it.
Christian Sonic fanfiction.
That's what I need to write.
Anonymous
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>>330517
Deus vult
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>>330517
Do it.
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A thought occurs.
Sonic isn't already a Christian. It would be awkward if I had him randomly praise Christ. I suppose I could add a new raised-Christian character. But he or she would be very out of place when most sonic plots are the same thing over and over. Sonic could go on a mission to stop Eggman from nuking famous churches but that isn't the sort of thing Eggman does.
But Sonic already fights a russian roboticist with a family connected to american conspiracies. And what does he fight to protect? The environment, individual liberty, and his animal buddies.
His sites are full of people longing for the times when he was cool. Back when Sonic had lines better than "Baldy McNosehair". Back when he went on Adventures instead of Boosting down bland rollercoaster tracks full of bowling pins.
Let's rock baby. Aw yeah, this is happening.
Libertarian Sonic Fanfiction time.
Now featuring my most subtle, mature, and hilarious writing yet!
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Hey, does this fic have good writing?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/213696/the-sparkle-in-his-eye

It starts off just retelling Ratchet And Clank 1 but with Twilight added in.
However from RAC2 2 onwards it diverges more.
The villains in 2 and 4 try getting filly Twilight on their side. Which makes things more interesting than 3 which just retells 3 but with OP Twilight "improving" everything in a manner that reminds me of old Fix Fics.
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>>330524
>>330579
Nigel, Im gonna speak from the heart here. I know, you probably have me filtered, but Im gonna try anyway. I can always reset my shit and get to yiu later, its no hurry.
Anyway.
You should stop trying to write literary stories. You suffer from much of the same writing blocks that I have, and cant realky commit to writing an actually good story; it will always be a caricature of a good story.
Which is why you would be a fantastic TTRPG GM. TTRPGS arent afforded the luxury of a deep and intricate storyline, it just needs to make enough sense to get the party motivated to go from point A to.point B. This is also why FoE would have worked as a pony MOD rather than a pony story.
I say this as a GM, you would be great. But with the most heartfelt sympathy, you will never be a real writer.
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>>330581
But I don't want to do tabletop RPGs. I want to make video games. Fanfiction is a hobby.
Anonymous
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>>330600
Vidya could work, but the market is oversaturated, and 'autistic AF' isnt a marketable selling point for a coder
Anonymous
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>>330601
But I'm not selling myself as a coder. I'm selling the games I'm making solo.
Anonymous
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>>330606
So, whos your target audience?
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>>330630
The pokemon game is for geniuses ready for a higher-IQ pokemon experience, the sonic game is accessible in its gameplay to accomodate beginners and story-wise it's for my fellow adventurebros (boostfags go to a layer of hell where they run forever down a coridoor that looks like Green Hill while going nowhere due to their meaningless fixed speed. Lmao jk boost is fine adventure is just 50x better), and the original game I'm working on is for me and anyone with my highly niche tastes. I know some people and some teams have spent years working on pokemon fangames, but I plan on repeating none of their mistakes so it's fine.
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>>330651
Good answer
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>>330651
>X work is for all the Spic & Shorty loving cuckolds that need to be told how the plot goes through MY selective niche marketing and super unrelateable injokes
>Y work is for all those power fantasy furfags I personally know that won't be (((offended))) by m-muh flagellated normieness
>Z work is for all the hyper-sensitive furfaggots that don't yet consider me a complete niggershit even though I !!totally am!!

There, fixed your fursecution complex lies.
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>>329984
>I don't think this is something that can be fixed without mod intervention.
That has been the defining conundrum since I chose to come here a little over 3 years ago. I would absolutely love to get into the core of this thread, IF IT WERE NOT FOR THE CONSTANT AUTISTISPERGING OF NIGGEL. Of the >20,000,000 words I wrote for old /mlp/ (and for a CERTAIN thread here the XX million or so), it is virtually impossible to TRY and help someone with their brainblock, braindrain, writer's block, lack of motivation, etc. etc. etc. etc. etc., without that fucking dipshit involving himself as if he was the greatest author to have ever lived!

I'll be clear, this once: I did not hate you at all until a certain event last year, which you should damned well remember. Before my previous PC's hard drive died, I trawled every single conversation relating to /mlpol/. The more I came to realize how much of a control freak you were, the more my lack of care slowly became absolute, true hatred upon recognizing you were the one protecting Nigel and his pigshit insanity from any real consequences. Equally as bad, what I've come to recognize is you do not understand lacking awareness of, and being unable to mediate, along with ignoring this board's social dynamics has crippled any topical discussion that should be had.

Why are you even allowing this event to happen, lotus? Laziness? I would understand that. I've burned myself out of every single topic that I wrote for the past 9 years. At times I wake up, look at my PC, and wonder if I COULD ever finish the stories that were started. I hate that. I hate feeling complacent that 'well, maybe it shouldn't be finished since most people here are intelligent enough to finish the ending on their own'. Is it mere decadence, do you like seeing drama unfold? That I would also understand: the Late Greek Empire era showed that drama can be GOOD for people to witness so that they can learn from it, but this.. actual madness has gone on far too damned long. Do you honestly want to fix this entire situation, lotus? Then do the job you have been entrusted to by all the users of this site: get rid of Nigel for his consistently insane, never-makes-a-single-valid-point, gaslighting-for-numulp-is-great-for-flavor, bootlicking leftiness.

I don't even know who the fuck hclegend was or what he did but if you can't come to an honest decision, I will damned sure BECOME better than him if doing so makes even the slightest improvement. Make. the. correct. choice.

>>329987
Post 328456 was me. I'm not only pissed that lotus specifically chose to delete that post, which exposed his past behaviors and bias, I'm disappointed at the lack of basic decency given the 50+ anons that want Nigel gone. In the past hour, that fact alone has made me rethink ever coming to this site, especially given the painfully ignorant insult lotus gave for my 3-day ban.

>>329990
Ninjas, I sincerely apologize for how I treated you last year, and, by extension, a certain artistic person that you knew exceptionally well whom was suffering from unwarranted life problems. I cannot knowlingly apologize for every iota of harm that burning the bridge from you to me has caused. I made that choice willingly in accordance to how shit was going at the time. I regret making that choice now as nothing will heal those scars.

>>330304
Thank you, sir. You've cut down what I have had to state about Niggel to 8 total sentences. And, no, it's been (according to several posters in this thread) 4+ years of that furfag futa-apologist tranny being here without ever being banned, even temporarily. But, at this point, I'm finding it almost impossible to find a shred of empathy for most people. It's draining to consider being here.
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>>330726
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>>>/sp/18916 →
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>>330774
>>>/sp/18917 →
Stop derailing. Theres no excuse anymore. Theres plenty of off topic, vent, sperg threads, some of which youre OP of. If you cant cross-board link and keep appropriate material in the appropriate threads, you will be censured. Not staff, thats not a threat, its an observation. Take it as you will.
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>>330786
>>>/sp/18918 →
Stop derailing
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An idea occured.

You know how a ton of stories have the hero refuse the call because he's not yet ready to save anyone?

My Sparky story has Sparky happily accept Twilight's call to adventure and go to see her, after living his daily life, which tells the audience the Nobles are bad.

But... Is Sparky only accepting the invitation to be a hero because I want to go on an adventure with Twilight and save the world?

What if Sparky rejected Twilight's offer and yelled in Twilight's face, calling her a faggot and pointing out faults in FE in the process? He could prove he's not ready to save anyone yet, and the day could convince him it's time to go with Twilight and risk everything anyway.

But what is left to save? FE takes place 200 years after Equestrian schizophrenic liberalism doomed the world yet it persists wherever Kkat treated it like the only good option in a neverending struggle against every childish cartoonish depiction of everything a libtard would mention if asked to define "evil": racism(enclave and Goddess) slavery(Red Eye), and pooping outside of a toilet or litterbox or designated shitting street(Raiders). There is nothing alive 200 years later the "heroes" of FE meaningfully fight against connected to the end of Equestria. Trixie survived the apocalypse in name only, "The Goddess" acts not like a Twilight and Trixie fusion gone mad but like a generic cackling baddie badly imitating The Master from F1. No matter how many sick fight scenes some shotgun-toting murderhobo could get into 200 years after Equestria is ashes, he can't make everything go back to normal no matter how many fights he wins even though Kkat pretends otherwise so his murderhobo can sacrifice herself for a fake happy ending once he got sick of writing FE.

The best thing Sparky can do for his people is get the bomb collars deactivated and kill all the Nobles to free his home, then seek to build a better world in the ashes of the old world by remembering the life lessons taught by the failure of liberalism and cuckservativism and democracy and big governments... Or time travel to before the war to prevent it from ever happening, like Trunks going back in time to give The Z-Fighters the cure for Goku's AIDS and a heads-up on who the next season's baddie is. But what kind of a story would that make? The hero portals back and talks sense into ponies and then kills all ziggers then fades away with a smile on his face now that history has been changed for the better. That's not a story, that's a meme.

I know my last character was Silver from years ago. But should this character really be Silver from 06?
Lotus
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>>330726
>IF IT WERE NOT FOR THE CONSTANT AUTISTISPERGING OF NIGGEL.
I do understand your frustration towards Nigel, yes.

>I did not hate you at all until a certain event last year, which you should damned well remember
I don't, no. Yes, I remember many of the things that happened last year, but I have no idea what one incident is the basis of your grudge, what it has to do with you, or why you care. I don't recall ever seeing or interacting with you before you started acting like I fucked your wife and pissed in your cereal. If you want to hate me for reasons, that's fine, I don't really care. But please understand I don't fucking know who you are.

>protecting Nigel and his pigshit insanity from any real consequences
Okay, let's work towards curbing the more obnoxious behavior. I agree with what I believe is the basic gist of your post which is that the previous staff response has been inadequate and there needs to be a change.

>get rid of Nigel for his consistently insane, never-makes-a-single-valid-point, gaslighting-for-numulp-is-great-for-flavor, bootlicking leftiness.
An outright permanent ban, I think, is not necessary, good, or enforceable. Limited term bans for specific behavior, however, may be fruitful. You notice how Nigel shuts up when mod intervention is possible. So I think something can be done, or at least attempted.

>I'm not only pissed that lotus specifically chose to delete that post, which exposed his past behaviors and bias
I deleted all posts relating to the argument that had been made in the thread within the past week. I don't think that anyone questions your claims that Nigel is narcistic etc., so I don't think the post is necessary. It didn't convince Nigel, in any event, and everyone else is already convinced.

>painfully ignorant insult
I apologize for my insensitivity. In my job I have had to work with and try to get help for very many persons suffering from mental illness and I do understand how it causes people to suffer, and how little help is available for such persons in the United States. So I do apologize.

>3 day ban
It was a one day ban, and to be very frank, your belligerence towards all posters on this website is at least as obnoxious as Nigel's belief that he is the greatest art critic in human history.

>4+ years of that furfag futa-apologist tranny being here without ever being banned, even temporarily
He has been banned on at least one occasion that I can remember. The thing is, Nigel actually does stop, at least momentarily, when warned. So he's been given many warnings.

Thank you for your more measured and reasonable response here. I do however have to agree with >>330767 that the proper thread for this discussion is on /sp/

Also, I'm deleting two Nigel posts, FYI.

Nigel, stop that shit
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>>330878
I came here wanting my fic reviewed.
But if you think there's some other way I should act that would prevent these situations in the future, can you tell me what that is?
If a hater starts screeching every insult he knows at me trying to derail threads, how should I respond? How can I get the thread back on topic to be about writing and writing discussion?
I'm tired of those Nigelposters too.
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>>331026
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>>331042
>>>/sp/18952 →
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>>331027
Why was this not removed?
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>>331044
Because it is a meme. You are on thin ice if you want us to remove anything and everything negative about you and your story. This behavior is unbecoming, and this is your last warning. You will not demand that people be censored on this platform. Do I make myself clear?
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>>331044
I wasn't signed in, but you get the point.
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Becausefuck it
Here's a reading shirpost recommendation of foriegn works
SSS Class Suicide Hunter (the translation team and the original author are fucking eloquint. It's a joy for the word usage and linking flow stuff. This nailed charactoirizing, story flow, showing with telling that works.)
Minor plot points and plotholes that arn't addressed due to still being in production. It's not finished.
s://woopread.com/series/sss-class-suicide-hunter/chapter-1/

Ending Maker
(One remark about ((())). Basically power couple doing shit. Doing power fantasy then doing powee fantasy. It's good for what it is bonus points for off handidly mentioning the odd entwinement with business and politics.) This one is finished.

FFF-Class Trash hero
(Everyone is an unlucky dumb fucker except they aren't, except for those who are. Is entertaining in the low brow expressing of 'one' trick. Succeeding.) This one is also finished.
Wait a fucking second it's all power fantasy schlock. Yes, but they succeeded in other aspects as well.)
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>>331045
I do not want anything negative or positive about my story removed. I hate censorship. It was a genuine question, I'm sorry if it sounded like an attack.
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>>331097
I've been thinking about how so many great protagonists have a conflict of interest somewhere in their tale.

Avatar Aang wanted to be a normal kid and a good Air Nomad monk but had to be The Avatar and defeat the Fire Lord.
Edward Elric wanted to get his limbs and his brother's body back but had to serve the State as a State Alchemist.
Ruby Rose has no conflict as she simply does as she is told by those she decides to follow.
And Silver Star has no conflict as he is simply an overpowered cunt who likes Twilight.

If I am to write a good protagonist, it's not enough that he gets involved in conflicts like the quest to gather a few important items first. He has to have an internal conflict like the desire to be doing anything else right now, or an external conflict like duties and responsibilities getting in the way of what he wants to do with his life. Right?
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What conflict is intrinsic to the world of FIM?
Ponies just sort of live ordinary lives unless extraordinary circumstances present a problem only main characters can solve.
Then main characters solve it for everyone else.
Sometimes ponies aren't sure what to do with their lives for a while but nopony is ever... drafted, for example.
Perhaps if my OC was military it could create conflict in his life by giving him responsibilities that pull him away from waifu and fun adventures?
Then again Equestria's military is kind of a joke. Plus making him military would make him stronger and I'm trying to nerf him to be less OP.
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>>331224
>Then again Equestria's military is kind of a joke.
Equestria doesn't need brute force.
You are underestimating the power of magic.
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In case, anyone's interested, a shitstorm is brewing in fim-fiction thread at /mlp/, apparently trannies and faggots fighting over some garbage related to a shit fic or collection of fics, i dunno

https://boards.4channel.org/mlp/thread/38096893#p38099065
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>>331383
>shitstorm
On my way.
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>>331383
God, that fimfic general is homosexual. They never provide any arguments for whether futa is gay or not, they're just actual homosexuals/actual trannies who literally have a fetish for shoving their degeneracy in your face and then spitting in your face by calling it normal. Arguing with them is like talking to a giggling homosexual junkie who doesn't even take the argument seriously and also fellates dogs.
If it was normal for human females to have four arms it would be normal to find that attractive. Same goes for if it was normal for human women to be futa. For insects that lay their eggs inside the bodies of others, this is normal. Female moles have cocks according to some book I once read. It would be normal for male moles to like that or at least not mind it. It would be normal for male birds to find female bird wings attractive. But humans? Humans will fuck horses and stick their dick in armpits and fantasize about fucking winged humans and werewolves and girls who are car-sized spiders from the waist down, and then say "At least I'm not turned on by feet. That would be weird".
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>>330651
Check this out

>>>/vx/158330 →