Hahhaha...
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/588316/mah-dik11111
/mlpol/ - My Little Politics
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>>403610
Aww, that's unfortunate. Thank you for clarifying.
Oh well, I'll just save it like this and leave it in a folder until further notice.
Aww, that's unfortunate. Thank you for clarifying.
Oh well, I'll just save it like this and leave it in a folder until further notice.
>Gibs Money is a zebra stallion with a set of balls that demand respect.
>nigger arsed Celestia
No.
>nigger arsed Celestia
No.
>>403613
It's trollfic. There was this zebradom contest on fimfic. I decided to submit a trollfic that, technically, fits within the rules of the contest. But, hehe, it's a bit different underneath. ^^
>>403611
Yeah, it's nice picture.
>>403612
Dw, I kinda am counting on being suspended for this, so if that happens, I just post it here.
It's trollfic. There was this zebradom contest on fimfic. I decided to submit a trollfic that, technically, fits within the rules of the contest. But, hehe, it's a bit different underneath. ^^
>>403611
Yeah, it's nice picture.
>>403612
Dw, I kinda am counting on being suspended for this, so if that happens, I just post it here.
Fimfic is such a gay retard website and I wish we had something better. You can't even make an account without going into their pedocord and begging for one in some bizarre humiliation ritual. More and more I'm starting to think that to allow one lapse in judgement is to enable future lapses in judgement. I don't know the history that well since I've always mostly read greentext, but for fimfic the turning point was probably when they merged twilight sparkle and princess twilight sparkle. Nowadays you can see AI slop on popular and featured and it feels like a dead husk of a website.
On that note, anyone have the QRD of the context around flutterpriest's last story?
>>403606
(spoilers below, if anyone cares)
I think the largest issue for me was in the main character and the handling of him. The character was introduced as a collection of stereotypes, both them and his dialogue being dated to perhaps the 2010s or so. However, the second he arrives at the home his demeanor becomes that befitting of a conscientious young white man. He has not bathed in weeks and sells drugs. I would expect that he would act based on his introduction as a thug (I'm a balla nigga, I'm da man) ideal and lack enough self-awareness to act the way he did. The dick wart thing perhaps hints that there is more under the surface than first appears, but this never comes up again and isn't very substantial. My suspicion is that what you were trying to go for was a subversion wherein he is revealed to be a pathetic fool despite his bravado and machismo, but if so the twist comes too early to be effective. Another guess is that you perhaps wrote this in one take, and, having a writerly bone or two somewhere inside of you, your instincts sought to make the character more rounded and interesting. However, such speculation might be reaching. I disliked the big dick thing - and thought it would be funnier if his dick was an average size, everyone being mildly disappointed but still getting on with it. The ending was also flubbed. There were multiple ways I could see it going - and the one it went was not very funny. Perhaps shining armor could flip the tables (or, in accordance with zigga culture, the turntables) and turn it into a buck breaking scenario, which sort of already happened in a half assed way. Perhaps he could have immediately came before after a missed penetration attempt and had to play it off cool because of his bravado.
Onto the things I enjoyed. I liked the bit where his dick was slapping the staircase. I enjoyed cadance's immediate and swift reaction to ziggers in her royal presence (that pink ass belongs to ME). I also liked the bit with Fleur, but it could have been written better. My favorite part overall were the in-text author's notes, as I find that gimmick endearing and it made the story significantly more interesting. The reason I went through the effort of writing this is because the story gave me the belief that you are capable of writing pony fics worth reading, which I am in an unending search for. If you write pony (read:not eqg,not human oc (anons cool thoughbeit)) I will read it.
P.S. After having written all this, I have looked at your other stories and seen an a female human OC fic and an EQG fic have thusly and rightly concluded you are a huge faggot. I should have known from that gooner pic consisting of an obese human ass grotesquely merged with a being I would have otherwise thought was the Her Majesty the Solar Diarch Princess Celestia.
P.P.S. This again leans into speculation (and should be ignored if incorrect) - but based on your two quickly abandoned stories and new trollfic, you seem to be avoiding the fear of putting your heart into something - and that something not being very good. I only say this as I am a fellow artist and know myself and many other struggle with this same dilemma, but if this is the case, I urge you to keep writing. This feeling can only be resolved by going forward and through. By creating earnestly with the belief (the veracity of the belief is irrelevant) that you will improve.
P.P.P.S. I've just read your post indicating that this was for the contest, and looking at the rules I can better understand the constraints. So take the above criticism with a grain of salt. I am a retarded autistic pony loving faggot. Though, if you couldn't already tell that from my post, you should pay a visit to your doctor and ask for a faggot retard exam.
On that note, anyone have the QRD of the context around flutterpriest's last story?
>>403606
(spoilers below, if anyone cares)
I think the largest issue for me was in the main character and the handling of him. The character was introduced as a collection of stereotypes, both them and his dialogue being dated to perhaps the 2010s or so. However, the second he arrives at the home his demeanor becomes that befitting of a conscientious young white man. He has not bathed in weeks and sells drugs. I would expect that he would act based on his introduction as a thug (I'm a balla nigga, I'm da man) ideal and lack enough self-awareness to act the way he did. The dick wart thing perhaps hints that there is more under the surface than first appears, but this never comes up again and isn't very substantial. My suspicion is that what you were trying to go for was a subversion wherein he is revealed to be a pathetic fool despite his bravado and machismo, but if so the twist comes too early to be effective. Another guess is that you perhaps wrote this in one take, and, having a writerly bone or two somewhere inside of you, your instincts sought to make the character more rounded and interesting. However, such speculation might be reaching. I disliked the big dick thing - and thought it would be funnier if his dick was an average size, everyone being mildly disappointed but still getting on with it. The ending was also flubbed. There were multiple ways I could see it going - and the one it went was not very funny. Perhaps shining armor could flip the tables (or, in accordance with zigga culture, the turntables) and turn it into a buck breaking scenario, which sort of already happened in a half assed way. Perhaps he could have immediately came before after a missed penetration attempt and had to play it off cool because of his bravado.
Onto the things I enjoyed. I liked the bit where his dick was slapping the staircase. I enjoyed cadance's immediate and swift reaction to ziggers in her royal presence (that pink ass belongs to ME). I also liked the bit with Fleur, but it could have been written better. My favorite part overall were the in-text author's notes, as I find that gimmick endearing and it made the story significantly more interesting. The reason I went through the effort of writing this is because the story gave me the belief that you are capable of writing pony fics worth reading, which I am in an unending search for. If you write pony (read:not eqg,not human oc (anons cool thoughbeit)) I will read it.
P.S. After having written all this, I have looked at your other stories and seen an a female human OC fic and an EQG fic have thusly and rightly concluded you are a huge faggot. I should have known from that gooner pic consisting of an obese human ass grotesquely merged with a being I would have otherwise thought was the Her Majesty the Solar Diarch Princess Celestia.
P.P.S. This again leans into speculation (and should be ignored if incorrect) - but based on your two quickly abandoned stories and new trollfic, you seem to be avoiding the fear of putting your heart into something - and that something not being very good. I only say this as I am a fellow artist and know myself and many other struggle with this same dilemma, but if this is the case, I urge you to keep writing. This feeling can only be resolved by going forward and through. By creating earnestly with the belief (the veracity of the belief is irrelevant) that you will improve.
P.P.P.S. I've just read your post indicating that this was for the contest, and looking at the rules I can better understand the constraints. So take the above criticism with a grain of salt. I am a retarded autistic pony loving faggot. Though, if you couldn't already tell that from my post, you should pay a visit to your doctor and ask for a faggot retard exam.
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>>403616
Thank you c:
>>403618
There's a lot in your post, so there's a lot I feel like I want to respond to, but I might take it in chunks. Nothing bad tho. I honestly felt that most of your criticism was fair, and I just wanna explain how it ended up as it did.
I'm honestly grateful for anyone who reads my stuff, and especially when they give me feedback, is kick for me. ^^
>My favorite part overall were the in-text author's notes, as I find that gimmick endearing and it made the story significantly more interesting.
Aww ty c:
>The reason I went through the effort of writing this is because the story gave me the belief that you are capable of writing pony fics worth reading, which I am in an unending search for. If you write pony (read:not eqg,not human oc (anons cool thoughbeit)) I will read it.
This made me happy. Now that I'm revved up (you were sort of right btw, I wrote 3.6k words yesterday and lik 1.8-2k the day before, I think. Then the first hundred some days earlier, so yeah I kinda wrote it all in one go. Tho, I had it in the backburner since I saw the contest.) I kinda wanna write something else.
>he story gave me the belief that you are capable of writing pony fics worth reading
If you feel like you'd give another story of mine a chance, I would like to write something for you. If you have a request/prompt or a ship you'd like me to write, I'll take a crack at it. No promises on time, though. I'm notoriously bad at keeping deadlines and such things. I literally made it within six minutes to go for this contest. At the same time, I'm getting better at it. I have learnt how to work with my ADHD. I'm better at least.
Thank you c:
>>403618
There's a lot in your post, so there's a lot I feel like I want to respond to, but I might take it in chunks. Nothing bad tho. I honestly felt that most of your criticism was fair, and I just wanna explain how it ended up as it did.
I'm honestly grateful for anyone who reads my stuff, and especially when they give me feedback, is kick for me. ^^
>My favorite part overall were the in-text author's notes, as I find that gimmick endearing and it made the story significantly more interesting.
Aww ty c:
>The reason I went through the effort of writing this is because the story gave me the belief that you are capable of writing pony fics worth reading, which I am in an unending search for. If you write pony (read:not eqg,not human oc (anons cool thoughbeit)) I will read it.
This made me happy. Now that I'm revved up (you were sort of right btw, I wrote 3.6k words yesterday and lik 1.8-2k the day before, I think. Then the first hundred some days earlier, so yeah I kinda wrote it all in one go. Tho, I had it in the backburner since I saw the contest.) I kinda wanna write something else.
>he story gave me the belief that you are capable of writing pony fics worth reading
If you feel like you'd give another story of mine a chance, I would like to write something for you. If you have a request/prompt or a ship you'd like me to write, I'll take a crack at it. No promises on time, though. I'm notoriously bad at keeping deadlines and such things. I literally made it within six minutes to go for this contest. At the same time, I'm getting better at it. I have learnt how to work with my ADHD. I'm better at least.
>>403628
Glad you're someone who takes this kind of unsolicited thing well ^:)
The writing in one shot is fine if it works for you - but I'd definitely recommend waiting a day or so and then giving it a second draft. That's usually how my own creative process works. I let my brain scatter and do whatever first comes to mind and then refine it however many times it takes to become something I'm happy with.
>but I might take it in chunks
Feel free and take your time. Or, if it gets to be too much, don't bother! I am also an ADHD spastic, so I know how it is.
>If you have a request/prompt or a ship you'd like me to write
Thanks for the generous offer! I won't set any expectations and instead will be pleasantly surprised when you write something. I'd also like you to write something you'd enjoy writing, so here's a list of things I like/dislike rather than a specific request. My favorite ponies are the luna/celestia, Rainbow Dash, and cadenza. I will read just about anything that features ponies and none of these are hard and fast rules, so please mix and match or disregard any of these as you please.
>Princesses
>Anon (especially when he is a brash and boisterous retard)
>Banter
>Ponies not being excessively flanderized, and the author doing their own take on the character. (I.E. what most authors do to poor little pinkie pie breaks my heart, though this is fine when it's done for comedic purposes)
>Strong personalities in general
>Comedic stories or comedic moments in stories
And some things I greatly dislike:
>Anonfilly
>any humans in equestria other than anon
>Hugboxing/overly sentimental positivity (Not to be confused with sappy or romantic or sentimentality which I don't mind, specifically overdoing it in such a way that makes the characters flatter and more generic)
>Twilight Sparkle as a princess, later season nonsense in general
Anyway, ADHD tip, Relaxing and not being over tense about your productivity paradoxically can make you more productive because the actual thing that is hurting your creative urge is the own anxiety and stress you've built around it. Don't know if that's an issue for you but for me this has helped a lot. Also getting exercise.
Oh, and here are some stories I like:
> https://www.fimfiction.net/story/368773/peephole
A really tightly executed and funny one. I enjoy pretty much everything from 2Merr.
>https://www.fimfiction.net/story/255472/1/game-show/framiry-frued
peak retardcore
>https://ponepaste.org/1920
Something less silly than the above, this is one of the ones that breaks my heart that it was abandoned
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/434071/spellcraft-engineer
Same as above, wish this wasn't abandoned
https://ponepaste.org/3584
Silly ponies being silly
Glad you're someone who takes this kind of unsolicited thing well ^:)
The writing in one shot is fine if it works for you - but I'd definitely recommend waiting a day or so and then giving it a second draft. That's usually how my own creative process works. I let my brain scatter and do whatever first comes to mind and then refine it however many times it takes to become something I'm happy with.
>but I might take it in chunks
Feel free and take your time. Or, if it gets to be too much, don't bother! I am also an ADHD spastic, so I know how it is.
>If you have a request/prompt or a ship you'd like me to write
Thanks for the generous offer! I won't set any expectations and instead will be pleasantly surprised when you write something. I'd also like you to write something you'd enjoy writing, so here's a list of things I like/dislike rather than a specific request. My favorite ponies are the luna/celestia, Rainbow Dash, and cadenza. I will read just about anything that features ponies and none of these are hard and fast rules, so please mix and match or disregard any of these as you please.
>Princesses
>Anon (especially when he is a brash and boisterous retard)
>Banter
>Ponies not being excessively flanderized, and the author doing their own take on the character. (I.E. what most authors do to poor little pinkie pie breaks my heart, though this is fine when it's done for comedic purposes)
>Strong personalities in general
>Comedic stories or comedic moments in stories
And some things I greatly dislike:
>Anonfilly
>any humans in equestria other than anon
>Hugboxing/overly sentimental positivity (Not to be confused with sappy or romantic or sentimentality which I don't mind, specifically overdoing it in such a way that makes the characters flatter and more generic)
>Twilight Sparkle as a princess, later season nonsense in general
Anyway, ADHD tip, Relaxing and not being over tense about your productivity paradoxically can make you more productive because the actual thing that is hurting your creative urge is the own anxiety and stress you've built around it. Don't know if that's an issue for you but for me this has helped a lot. Also getting exercise.
Oh, and here are some stories I like:
> https://www.fimfiction.net/story/368773/peephole
A really tightly executed and funny one. I enjoy pretty much everything from 2Merr.
>https://www.fimfiction.net/story/255472/1/game-show/framiry-frued
peak retardcore
>https://ponepaste.org/1920
Something less silly than the above, this is one of the ones that breaks my heart that it was abandoned
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/434071/spellcraft-engineer
Same as above, wish this wasn't abandoned
https://ponepaste.org/3584
Silly ponies being silly
>>403641
>peak retardcore
>https://ponepaste.org/1920
I've barely glanced at this but is there more retardcore like it? This is going into my storage, along with OP's post. Stockpiling for a bit later.
>peak retardcore
>https://ponepaste.org/1920
I've barely glanced at this but is there more retardcore like it? This is going into my storage, along with OP's post. Stockpiling for a bit later.
>>403643
No, the SwiftM0nkey one is peak retardcore. Should be more in his bin. Other than him it's hard to think of many examples and quite a few of this genre were posted anonymously. I'll post again if I remember any others. Old /flutterrape/ would be good to look through in general.
https://poneb.in/u/Swift_M0nkey
No, the SwiftM0nkey one is peak retardcore. Should be more in his bin. Other than him it's hard to think of many examples and quite a few of this genre were posted anonymously. I'll post again if I remember any others. Old /flutterrape/ would be good to look through in general.
https://poneb.in/u/Swift_M0nkey
sunset >>403648
No, I meant Dean Cadance with Anthro Sunset, helping Twilight Sparkle win the crown! ^^
They will both be horsies c: dw
No, I meant Dean Cadance with Anthro Sunset, helping Twilight Sparkle win the crown! ^^
They will both be horsies c: dw
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>>403648
So here's the outline of my story. Don't watch the spoilers if you don't want spoilers. I just wanted to show that I have been doing something. In fact, I'm pretty proud of what I accomplished.
So here's what I come up wit . First scene: Sunset is packeed and stands before th mirror to the human realm. But in this story she hesitates. Wopndering if what is on th other side is what she actually wish for or will be worth it in the ened. As she goes trhough her bag in an effort to stall for time, Princess Celetis entre the room. It seem the guards sunset knocked out to get in her woke up and inforemd the princess. They talk and their talk is more liek a fight. Princess Cadance enters as she wondered what hte comotion is about. Sunset refuses to stand down and charges celestia or challenger her to magic duel. Celestia wins but not without showing hat sunset is close than most to the princess. Princess Celestia throws her inthe dungeon in thee castle. CAdance askes about it after and Celstia tells her that since Sunset attacked her as a toyal she cna keep her nad decide her fate. And Cadance does't oppose since she doeesn't know sunset past a the death lgare she got first time they met. The next morning, Cadance is still familizing herself wit hthe castle so she is walking around to check out all the halls and wahtnot and end up in the dungeon where sunset is hte only prisoner.Cadance, as a pegasi from birth, he touch and foootseetps are light, so she endsu p sneaking up on sunset. Sunset doesn't noticed her. She is in the middle of crying her heart out. "celstia. Why are you here? don't you care about me?" Cadance decides to truly sneak not just walk quiyrly by accident. She enteers the dungeon loudly this time. And yels hello. Sunset wipees heer tears. Sunset asks who it is. When she gets that is cadance, sshe tells her to leaveher alone. Cadance do so. Cadance asks Celestia about what she intends to to do with sunset. Celestia says she has n't decided. Or perhaps scratch this scene. Cadanc returns next day. She get yeelled away agin. This time it's less powerfu ltho. On day eventually, probably that week, Cadance returns again and this timee she isnt yelled at. Sunsts asks her why she keep returnig. Isit to gloat and mock her? Caance tells her she wants to help. Sunset is in a dour state. I dont think ther s a way you can help or somehting. Cada ce speaks to celestia after thsi. She asks her what she has decided fro sunset. Celestia says shee has plans. Cadaance is careful but pushes. Celestia says that she might be moved to prison. However, she is considering tarturus because a normal prison might not be able to lhold a magee like sunset. Cadance nods. She asks if she can take sunset out for walks in the meantime with a guard detail if necessary. Sunset cant just sit in some small room in dakrness da y in day out. Celestia quesstions her interst in sunset. from celestia's perspective she has only beeen craze to Cadanne---maybe. Celestia conceds tp the idea.
next day, Cadnace returns to Sunset. She has a guard detail wwith her. Sunset is always wearing a magic supressor. It's Gibbious moon supressor. The almost highest degree of supressor there is, or something like that. I imagine it as so: New moon -- a single pearl at the end of the horn. Crescent moon -- Three metal spirals that line up with the spirals of the horn, filling them up. Half moon --- Two outer rings are added. One at the base, the other in the middle, around hte horn. Gibbious moon -- Crystal screws are drilled into the rings in each cardinal direction till they reach the horn. Full moon -- A metal cone coveres the horn. The based is sewn to the skin. The stiches usesed are runic. The fullmoon one is the one htat is meant to be permament, so this is the biggest magic hamper sunset can be one without risk o harm once its removed. Tho, its still annoying for unicorn to not be able to use magic for daily things since they are so used to it. there is also the fact that crystal screws and screwed tight gives them a slight headache. No permamnent damage but constant annoyance. But half moon would be too weak for sunset and she could break free. sunset asks where they are going and Cadance tells her that they are going wherever she wants within the palace. At first, Sunset is like, "am I a dog on a leash?" but she does come around since, you know, she has been sitting quickly dark room for a week now. They walk to the kitchen. Get some food, and then walk out to the garden for some air. Then go to the library to pick up a book. Sunset isn't really allowed items but Cadance uses her authority as princess as well to give her s imple spell book to read. Sunset is returned to her cell. She doesn't speak much during their walk and cadance is balancing careful appraoch with respect. Later, Celestia is suppose to have a magic lesson with Cadance, however, she sends a messenger to cancel. (actually, the guards are only alloted a certain amount of time for sunset t owander about so Cadance doesn't do all those three things in one go. She first goes to get real food, or air first but last a book to read. During this time, Celestia keeps canceling their appointments, with cadance.) In tend a weeek passes and Cadance ends up asking Celestia, again gently, why she is canceling all their meetings. Or perhaps she asks, Raven inkwell, celestia's secratery, when Celestia could possibly have time for her since Cadance still needs a teacher for magic since she was a pegasus before she became an alaicorn. She learns that Princess Celestia is fully booked, all the time all week. She asks if this is always the case because she hasn't felt like that before. Raven dodges the question but Cadance asks (pleads) and get out that Celestia has increased teh workload of her schedule recently. So Cadance decides that she tries to catch the princess on her way to bed, but as she waits she ends up either in her room or some other room.
So here's the outline of my story. Don't watch the spoilers if you don't want spoilers. I just wanted to show that I have been doing something. In fact, I'm pretty proud of what I accomplished.
So here's what I come up wit . First scene: Sunset is packeed and stands before th mirror to the human realm. But in this story she hesitates. Wopndering if what is on th other side is what she actually wish for or will be worth it in the ened. As she goes trhough her bag in an effort to stall for time, Princess Celetis entre the room. It seem the guards sunset knocked out to get in her woke up and inforemd the princess. They talk and their talk is more liek a fight. Princess Cadance enters as she wondered what hte comotion is about. Sunset refuses to stand down and charges celestia or challenger her to magic duel. Celestia wins but not without showing hat sunset is close than most to the princess. Princess Celestia throws her inthe dungeon in thee castle. CAdance askes about it after and Celstia tells her that since Sunset attacked her as a toyal she cna keep her nad decide her fate. And Cadance does't oppose since she doeesn't know sunset past a the death lgare she got first time they met. The next morning, Cadance is still familizing herself wit hthe castle so she is walking around to check out all the halls and wahtnot and end up in the dungeon where sunset is hte only prisoner.Cadance, as a pegasi from birth, he touch and foootseetps are light, so she endsu p sneaking up on sunset. Sunset doesn't noticed her. She is in the middle of crying her heart out. "celstia. Why are you here? don't you care about me?" Cadance decides to truly sneak not just walk quiyrly by accident. She enteers the dungeon loudly this time. And yels hello. Sunset wipees heer tears. Sunset asks who it is. When she gets that is cadance, sshe tells her to leaveher alone. Cadance do so. Cadance asks Celestia about what she intends to to do with sunset. Celestia says she has n't decided. Or perhaps scratch this scene. Cadanc returns next day. She get yeelled away agin. This time it's less powerfu ltho. On day eventually, probably that week, Cadance returns again and this timee she isnt yelled at. Sunsts asks her why she keep returnig. Isit to gloat and mock her? Caance tells her she wants to help. Sunset is in a dour state. I dont think ther s a way you can help or somehting. Cada ce speaks to celestia after thsi. She asks her what she has decided fro sunset. Celestia says shee has plans. Cadaance is careful but pushes. Celestia says that she might be moved to prison. However, she is considering tarturus because a normal prison might not be able to lhold a magee like sunset. Cadance nods. She asks if she can take sunset out for walks in the meantime with a guard detail if necessary. Sunset cant just sit in some small room in dakrness da y in day out. Celestia quesstions her interst in sunset. from celestia's perspective she has only beeen craze to Cadanne---maybe. Celestia conceds tp the idea.
next day, Cadnace returns to Sunset. She has a guard detail wwith her. Sunset is always wearing a magic supressor. It's Gibbious moon supressor. The almost highest degree of supressor there is, or something like that. I imagine it as so: New moon -- a single pearl at the end of the horn. Crescent moon -- Three metal spirals that line up with the spirals of the horn, filling them up. Half moon --- Two outer rings are added. One at the base, the other in the middle, around hte horn. Gibbious moon -- Crystal screws are drilled into the rings in each cardinal direction till they reach the horn. Full moon -- A metal cone coveres the horn. The based is sewn to the skin. The stiches usesed are runic. The fullmoon one is the one htat is meant to be permament, so this is the biggest magic hamper sunset can be one without risk o harm once its removed. Tho, its still annoying for unicorn to not be able to use magic for daily things since they are so used to it. there is also the fact that crystal screws and screwed tight gives them a slight headache. No permamnent damage but constant annoyance. But half moon would be too weak for sunset and she could break free. sunset asks where they are going and Cadance tells her that they are going wherever she wants within the palace. At first, Sunset is like, "am I a dog on a leash?" but she does come around since, you know, she has been sitting quickly dark room for a week now. They walk to the kitchen. Get some food, and then walk out to the garden for some air. Then go to the library to pick up a book. Sunset isn't really allowed items but Cadance uses her authority as princess as well to give her s imple spell book to read. Sunset is returned to her cell. She doesn't speak much during their walk and cadance is balancing careful appraoch with respect. Later, Celestia is suppose to have a magic lesson with Cadance, however, she sends a messenger to cancel. (actually, the guards are only alloted a certain amount of time for sunset t owander about so Cadance doesn't do all those three things in one go. She first goes to get real food, or air first but last a book to read. During this time, Celestia keeps canceling their appointments, with cadance.) In tend a weeek passes and Cadance ends up asking Celestia, again gently, why she is canceling all their meetings. Or perhaps she asks, Raven inkwell, celestia's secratery, when Celestia could possibly have time for her since Cadance still needs a teacher for magic since she was a pegasus before she became an alaicorn. She learns that Princess Celestia is fully booked, all the time all week. She asks if this is always the case because she hasn't felt like that before. Raven dodges the question but Cadance asks (pleads) and get out that Celestia has increased teh workload of her schedule recently. So Cadance decides that she tries to catch the princess on her way to bed, but as she waits she ends up either in her room or some other room.
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>>403706
Continuing:
Ther eshe sees portaits or photos of prrevious students from beygone ages. That's when she finds Sunset's photo, a photo of a small filly. next to Celestia. This maeks her realized how long Sunset has been at the castle and with celestia as her student. but also otehr stuff. Celestia arrives and the two of them meet. They stand still. Celestia is about to say something but Cadance interupts her and says that she is tired and that they can talk when she is ready before givving celestia a gentle caress with her wing as she leaves.
Now Cadance has come to a rutine with sunset. thye walk a very specific path through the castle. They pass by the kitchen first and get sunset to eat on the way the ywalk (cadance also take ssomethn.) next they walkk out in and look at the setting sun, as it's also evening when Cadance has time to meet sunset. Then they go to the library so that sunset can leand a new book to read whil in captivity. As Cadance is on her way back to her qauters for bed, Celestia interupts her and asks her out for a wlak in the moon light. They do just that. Celestia aks about how it is going with Cadance's studies and apoligises for canceling their appointments, and then asks how its going with sunset. (also, btw, while out in the garden there's a cat there, perhaps kitten, perhaps not, cat nawyay, and Cadance thinks its fun because she had acat at home and starts to play red gren light wiht it --- maybe, this is a setup) Cadance tells her what she and sunset has done togethr adn that now days sunset is in a dour almost depressed mood, ratehr than angry. Celestia says, "You aksed what I intend to do with Sunset" or something and begins to tell her the true sotry of mightmare moon. Then after Cadance has digested that, she explains that Celestia wants and thinks that Sunset has the potential to be the bears of magic. (Also, the elements last time sent luna to the moon becuase the weilder was celestia who at the time held anger for her sister and also regret and mixed feelings and they shared the elements so they didn't purify but seperate. However, with six un attached wielder s instead, they may purify her sister) So since Sunset seems like the only viable option left, she can't send her to prison. Cadance says that she doesn't think Sunset deserves prison and Celestia is about to argue that she attack her, maybe cadance too in the mirror room, however Cadance will say that while he attack would have been deadly to anypony else, she attack celestia with magic, like a kitten lounges at its mother in play, laying halfways on the back while also halfway in attack, showing submissivness or at least fear while still being playful at lounges. Basically, she only did that because she knew celestia could handle it and anything else would just look embrassessingly puny otherwise. Celestia stil lsays that while that might be true she... But Cadance continues with that she doesn't think Ceelestia's real reaason for not sending Sunset to prison or tarturs is that she wants her to servve as the bearer of magic. She could just as well d oit. Cadnacemight go full sherlock holmes and tehroizes that she doesn't send sunset to prison is because she knows sunset isn't a bad pony to begin with and in prison she could meet actual bad ponies nad turn bad from there. She also brings up the fact that Celestia has increased her schduale and kept missing appointment, seemingly on purpose. Celestia appologises again to Cadance saying that since hse knew cdance was doing these thigns for sunset she didn't want to have a heated debate with her. But Cadance claims that she doesn't belive that she was really avoiding her as muc h as she is avoiding Sunset, as she has yet to visit her in her cell. In fact, she has made herself busy to occopy her mind from thinking about sunset and how guiltty she feels over their fallout and now she keeps avoiding even thinking about her, ignoring her as if she doesn't exist, to just not break as a princess cannot show weakness, which is something Cadance has noticed with Sunset too. sunset views her own selfwoth around her magic as it was that who made her the princess student and gave her everything she has, and gives her the praise she wants from celestia too, so too show weakness or not being capable with int this spefici frame isnt okay so she puts on a show of ego and competence when she is in fact just interested in amgic a insecure or soemthing. Celestia is the smae as she is the head of state she cannot show weakness in any manner, so when things get close to heart, especially sutdnets, she shuts it out perhaps. Maybe some history of previous studnets and why she has student, could be smart idea too. Anyway, the converstion ends with Sunset, whp cannot be sent out to just wander the street anymroe because Celestia still needs her for luna, a thing she isn't willing to compromise on, she cant fail luna again, but she cant stay in a dark cell so she is moved to a tower, the one twilight is in episode one.
So after the tower has been secured with like bars over the inwodws or what not, Cadnace and Sunset inspect her new place. They bring with the stuff from her old qquarters. Sunset then learns that Cadance what kinda o magic lessons Cadance is having with Celssstia, foal grade magic, this makes sunset feels less like dispoible and yeah, when she learns that cadance was a pegasus before she ascended. Or something like that.
Meanwhile, Celestia's lessons our good, but Caedance has more time than she knows what to do wit h? maybe. Ahnyway, so she asks if she can't have extra lessons with Sunset since that can be something for sunset to do as well.
Continuing:
Ther eshe sees portaits or photos of prrevious students from beygone ages. That's when she finds Sunset's photo, a photo of a small filly. next to Celestia. This maeks her realized how long Sunset has been at the castle and with celestia as her student. but also otehr stuff. Celestia arrives and the two of them meet. They stand still. Celestia is about to say something but Cadance interupts her and says that she is tired and that they can talk when she is ready before givving celestia a gentle caress with her wing as she leaves.
Now Cadance has come to a rutine with sunset. thye walk a very specific path through the castle. They pass by the kitchen first and get sunset to eat on the way the ywalk (cadance also take ssomethn.) next they walkk out in and look at the setting sun, as it's also evening when Cadance has time to meet sunset. Then they go to the library so that sunset can leand a new book to read whil in captivity. As Cadance is on her way back to her qauters for bed, Celestia interupts her and asks her out for a wlak in the moon light. They do just that. Celestia aks about how it is going with Cadance's studies and apoligises for canceling their appointments, and then asks how its going with sunset. (also, btw, while out in the garden there's a cat there, perhaps kitten, perhaps not, cat nawyay, and Cadance thinks its fun because she had acat at home and starts to play red gren light wiht it --- maybe, this is a setup) Cadance tells her what she and sunset has done togethr adn that now days sunset is in a dour almost depressed mood, ratehr than angry. Celestia says, "You aksed what I intend to do with Sunset" or something and begins to tell her the true sotry of mightmare moon. Then after Cadance has digested that, she explains that Celestia wants and thinks that Sunset has the potential to be the bears of magic. (Also, the elements last time sent luna to the moon becuase the weilder was celestia who at the time held anger for her sister and also regret and mixed feelings and they shared the elements so they didn't purify but seperate. However, with six un attached wielder s instead, they may purify her sister) So since Sunset seems like the only viable option left, she can't send her to prison. Cadance says that she doesn't think Sunset deserves prison and Celestia is about to argue that she attack her, maybe cadance too in the mirror room, however Cadance will say that while he attack would have been deadly to anypony else, she attack celestia with magic, like a kitten lounges at its mother in play, laying halfways on the back while also halfway in attack, showing submissivness or at least fear while still being playful at lounges. Basically, she only did that because she knew celestia could handle it and anything else would just look embrassessingly puny otherwise. Celestia stil lsays that while that might be true she... But Cadance continues with that she doesn't think Ceelestia's real reaason for not sending Sunset to prison or tarturs is that she wants her to servve as the bearer of magic. She could just as well d oit. Cadnacemight go full sherlock holmes and tehroizes that she doesn't send sunset to prison is because she knows sunset isn't a bad pony to begin with and in prison she could meet actual bad ponies nad turn bad from there. She also brings up the fact that Celestia has increased her schduale and kept missing appointment, seemingly on purpose. Celestia appologises again to Cadance saying that since hse knew cdance was doing these thigns for sunset she didn't want to have a heated debate with her. But Cadance claims that she doesn't belive that she was really avoiding her as muc h as she is avoiding Sunset, as she has yet to visit her in her cell. In fact, she has made herself busy to occopy her mind from thinking about sunset and how guiltty she feels over their fallout and now she keeps avoiding even thinking about her, ignoring her as if she doesn't exist, to just not break as a princess cannot show weakness, which is something Cadance has noticed with Sunset too. sunset views her own selfwoth around her magic as it was that who made her the princess student and gave her everything she has, and gives her the praise she wants from celestia too, so too show weakness or not being capable with int this spefici frame isnt okay so she puts on a show of ego and competence when she is in fact just interested in amgic a insecure or soemthing. Celestia is the smae as she is the head of state she cannot show weakness in any manner, so when things get close to heart, especially sutdnets, she shuts it out perhaps. Maybe some history of previous studnets and why she has student, could be smart idea too. Anyway, the converstion ends with Sunset, whp cannot be sent out to just wander the street anymroe because Celestia still needs her for luna, a thing she isn't willing to compromise on, she cant fail luna again, but she cant stay in a dark cell so she is moved to a tower, the one twilight is in episode one.
So after the tower has been secured with like bars over the inwodws or what not, Cadnace and Sunset inspect her new place. They bring with the stuff from her old qquarters. Sunset then learns that Cadance what kinda o magic lessons Cadance is having with Celssstia, foal grade magic, this makes sunset feels less like dispoible and yeah, when she learns that cadance was a pegasus before she ascended. Or something like that.
Meanwhile, Celestia's lessons our good, but Caedance has more time than she knows what to do wit h? maybe. Ahnyway, so she asks if she can't have extra lessons with Sunset since that can be something for sunset to do as well.
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>>403708
Cont:
Celestia agrees but doubts sunset is willing to help and tht she probably isn't the best teacher as she is too gifted and has a hard time get to their level... Honeslt,y perhpas Celstia wouldn't be teaching basic stuff to Cadance since any uincorn teacher can do that. We'll work out hte details point is, Sunset starts teaching Cadance. And At first Sunset feels like she is owes Cadance and since its just basics she can give some pointers and I guess she kinda nejoys cadance company since thats the onyl friendly company she has. Also I will have Cadance ask Celestia to visit sunset but she don't want to and she asks Sunsset if she wants Celestia to visit and she doesn't want ot (perhaps, celestia, instead of answering the question, says that she doens't want that anyway, hiding that fact that she is n't ready for it but Cadance is is like. You might be right. However, I'm asking, do you want to see sunset again? or something.) (Also there should be a some scene were Celestia tells Cadance not to tell Sunset that she is her only option for a bearer of the element of magic as she cna then use it as leverge againt the princess) Anyway, Tehy practice for a lieka week or something together and then The rainboom happened and Twilight has a magic outbreak due to it. Enhance spike and hatches nad turn the judges into potted plants and what not. But instead o Celestia arriving on scene first its, Cadance that let Sunset out oof her toweer despite it not being break time for her yet. Cadance reasosn tht she will need Sunset's expertise in magic even if Cadance power as a nalaicorn and her magic is proportional, he control is abysmal so she will need instructions if she is to handle this magic situation. They arrive on scene. And Sunset is the one that rreaches Twilight and stablize her mood. While Cadance with a lot of effort and sunset's guidance to return spike and the teachers to normal.
So Cadance will tell sunset that secret that Celestia told her not to tell her that she needed as magic bearer in order to have her continue trusting her. I think that's an intersting touch. Maybe. Maybe it doens't matter all that much. Anyway, now that Twilight has arrived on scene celestia has a new bearer for the magic element. Though , before that, it would make sense for Celestia and sunset to meet for the first time after their fight in teh mirror room now after sunset calm down twilight. Celetia comes to check out what crashed the tower. Then she sees suhnset. Maybe she asks if if was her who did this but Cadance comes to her defense and explains why she is outside of her tower. Twilight might have mixed feelings since Sunset was the pony that just helped her but she has adored princess celestia since hse wa a filly with the sun rising and stuff and the motivation why she tried to get into school in first place. So she might not sure what to feel when she is in the hooves or next to a pony the princess is so skecptical about. anyway. The scene resolves itself as Celetia learns what happenes and sunset is sent back to her twoer. Perhaps Cadance convinces Celestia to thank Sunset as without her Twilight could have hurt her parents in her magic rampage. Like, perhaps he dad would become a permanent cactus if Sunset hadn't stepped in and known how to instruct Cadnace as she did when she did. So Celestia agrees and surprises Sunset with a visit. She apologises and thanks sunset. But they still end up fighting. PErhaps she spills the beans that Cadance told her that celetisa wanted her to bear the element of magic to save her sister but that she now that there's a new candidate she is willing to let her go. PEtrhaps Celetia came to give her freedom, not magic freedom yet tho ig, or maybe. Acually maybe. Celestia decides to give her freedom but Sunset sees through it, or she is cynical, as she now just wasnts. Perhaps Celestia was afraid that Sunset would become another nightmare moon sitatuiosn if not kept under control. and with her temper nad ego. Anyway, Sunset asks to stay and is allowed to or Cadance asks her to stay. And aht not And Celestia probably confronts her about telling Sunset and PErhap Cadance asks sunset aobut it. idk.
Whatever, it transistions into Sunset staying and her being asked by Cadance to help Twilight. Though, Sunset doesn't want ot help her replacement gain greater glory. She says that stright out that why should she share her hard earn knowledge with just some kid. But Cadance pleads with ehr that she save he kid and sunset ssays ths e hs owes her even lesss than. But Cadance manages to get her to follow and just sit as audience during twilight's lessons with Celestia, and perhaps normal tutors too. idk. Anyway, Sunset feels nuacuse at first watching it. Sunset tell Cadance that she used to draw paralelles. Like she and celestia both ahve sun related cutie marks and she had not parents and celestia was so grand as the sole ruler and powerful magic user, she couldn't help but view her approval as everythign.Anyway, Cadance is still twilight babysister before she the magic accident and she got her cutie mark so Cadance knows her from before and since Cadance, right Sunset satys because Cadnace is still her pupil and tht has worked well so celestia allowes her to tay becauwse that but if she ever breaks a law o omsehting again yada yda.
Cont:
Celestia agrees but doubts sunset is willing to help and tht she probably isn't the best teacher as she is too gifted and has a hard time get to their level... Honeslt,y perhpas Celstia wouldn't be teaching basic stuff to Cadance since any uincorn teacher can do that. We'll work out hte details point is, Sunset starts teaching Cadance. And At first Sunset feels like she is owes Cadance and since its just basics she can give some pointers and I guess she kinda nejoys cadance company since thats the onyl friendly company she has. Also I will have Cadance ask Celestia to visit sunset but she don't want to and she asks Sunsset if she wants Celestia to visit and she doesn't want ot (perhaps, celestia, instead of answering the question, says that she doens't want that anyway, hiding that fact that she is n't ready for it but Cadance is is like. You might be right. However, I'm asking, do you want to see sunset again? or something.) (Also there should be a some scene were Celestia tells Cadance not to tell Sunset that she is her only option for a bearer of the element of magic as she cna then use it as leverge againt the princess) Anyway, Tehy practice for a lieka week or something together and then The rainboom happened and Twilight has a magic outbreak due to it. Enhance spike and hatches nad turn the judges into potted plants and what not. But instead o Celestia arriving on scene first its, Cadance that let Sunset out oof her toweer despite it not being break time for her yet. Cadance reasosn tht she will need Sunset's expertise in magic even if Cadance power as a nalaicorn and her magic is proportional, he control is abysmal so she will need instructions if she is to handle this magic situation. They arrive on scene. And Sunset is the one that rreaches Twilight and stablize her mood. While Cadance with a lot of effort and sunset's guidance to return spike and the teachers to normal.
So Cadance will tell sunset that secret that Celestia told her not to tell her that she needed as magic bearer in order to have her continue trusting her. I think that's an intersting touch. Maybe. Maybe it doens't matter all that much. Anyway, now that Twilight has arrived on scene celestia has a new bearer for the magic element. Though , before that, it would make sense for Celestia and sunset to meet for the first time after their fight in teh mirror room now after sunset calm down twilight. Celetia comes to check out what crashed the tower. Then she sees suhnset. Maybe she asks if if was her who did this but Cadance comes to her defense and explains why she is outside of her tower. Twilight might have mixed feelings since Sunset was the pony that just helped her but she has adored princess celestia since hse wa a filly with the sun rising and stuff and the motivation why she tried to get into school in first place. So she might not sure what to feel when she is in the hooves or next to a pony the princess is so skecptical about. anyway. The scene resolves itself as Celetia learns what happenes and sunset is sent back to her twoer. Perhaps Cadance convinces Celestia to thank Sunset as without her Twilight could have hurt her parents in her magic rampage. Like, perhaps he dad would become a permanent cactus if Sunset hadn't stepped in and known how to instruct Cadnace as she did when she did. So Celestia agrees and surprises Sunset with a visit. She apologises and thanks sunset. But they still end up fighting. PErhaps she spills the beans that Cadance told her that celetisa wanted her to bear the element of magic to save her sister but that she now that there's a new candidate she is willing to let her go. PEtrhaps Celetia came to give her freedom, not magic freedom yet tho ig, or maybe. Acually maybe. Celestia decides to give her freedom but Sunset sees through it, or she is cynical, as she now just wasnts. Perhaps Celestia was afraid that Sunset would become another nightmare moon sitatuiosn if not kept under control. and with her temper nad ego. Anyway, Sunset asks to stay and is allowed to or Cadance asks her to stay. And aht not And Celestia probably confronts her about telling Sunset and PErhap Cadance asks sunset aobut it. idk.
Whatever, it transistions into Sunset staying and her being asked by Cadance to help Twilight. Though, Sunset doesn't want ot help her replacement gain greater glory. She says that stright out that why should she share her hard earn knowledge with just some kid. But Cadance pleads with ehr that she save he kid and sunset ssays ths e hs owes her even lesss than. But Cadance manages to get her to follow and just sit as audience during twilight's lessons with Celestia, and perhaps normal tutors too. idk. Anyway, Sunset feels nuacuse at first watching it. Sunset tell Cadance that she used to draw paralelles. Like she and celestia both ahve sun related cutie marks and she had not parents and celestia was so grand as the sole ruler and powerful magic user, she couldn't help but view her approval as everythign.Anyway, Cadance is still twilight babysister before she the magic accident and she got her cutie mark so Cadance knows her from before and since Cadance, right Sunset satys because Cadnace is still her pupil and tht has worked well so celestia allowes her to tay becauwse that but if she ever breaks a law o omsehting again yada yda.
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>>403709
Last one:
Twilight end up walking home with cadance because that's what she does but befoe that she takes llessons with Sunset and so Twilight ned up being ther eand twilight and Cadance is kidna on about the same terms in their magic study tho a bit different, but in the end Twilight asks Sunset questions directly. Which she doesn't reject but doesn't feel like answering too. So cadance steps in as not to make twilight hurt and tries to figure it out. But obht are stomped so Sunset in the end does step in and Twilight is excited over the reults. During this period sunset kinda relearns magic, as in she learns magic for hte fun of it, not for the sake of imprewssing someone else. She also sees how well Cadance handles twilight or children but then realizes that she does simialr things to her and celetisa and that she tries to be gentle and stuff. She part feels manipulated but also glad. Anyway, one day Sunset tells a struggling twilight, that all the speells she struggles with she should be having an easy time with because twilight already has a facination wit h checklists. Sunset says, "the repair spell was just taking one piece at a time, like you do with your checklists. In fact, you should view every spell like a checklist". This makes it click inside twilight's head and makes a huge improvments in how she approaches magic and she throws herself into a hug with Sunset. Tis cracks somwthing inside of sunset. As she holds this soft child who adores her, she feels shame for not sharing her understanding of magic earlier and seeing her as a threat instead of friend. She starts sobbing and crying swhile rocking a surprised twilight abck and forht in her emrbace. Cadance witness this. And tells Celestia. Perhaps there is scene with ehr sunset with a bit more understnading havent' decided. Then Sunset later asks Twilight for any idea of waht o give Cadance in present as she has meded her relationship with Celestia somehwa or fully, and she isn't a prisoner anymore nad she likes twi. Twilight knows just he thing... Later Cadance is invited out by sunset on a night out on the town, and Sunset greets her with the "sunshin sunshine ladybougs awake..." ruotiine as she has come to appriciate Cadance ways ans also its kinda embracing but since he commits to it she proves tht she care s or something. Cadance realizes here that the defining thing that Sunset wanted her life was 'love' she just wanted to be loved by celestia or by anyone so she did everything just to have that love as she saw her value from the base that he rvalue was magic caster. And as the princess of love she can't help bu ablige so she kisses Sunset. Then sunset is ported into the realm that Twilight was in season 3 were she turned into a alicorn and meets Celestia there. And here they have their final reconcialtion or perhaps they already have andthey acknowlege each other like parent and child or omething idk yet. and that's how hte sotry ends
I feel like cadance, sunset, and Twilight worrk fine enough, but I think I wanna work in a more sympahtetic angle for Celestia, same actions but more care for sunset througout the sotry basically, jsut that she hides tht behind having to appear strong all the time and also that sunseet has to serve a purpose and that she ahs so many sutdnet s die on her over her millina of life so she keps a sort of distance ig. But I also want her to be more personally involved in sunset. She is alike her. She was oprhan compared to the other students and had no family of her own. Celestia was her world and sunset might have stuck to her everywhere. So something like that. I just gotta think about is all i think
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Twilight end up walking home with cadance because that's what she does but befoe that she takes llessons with Sunset and so Twilight ned up being ther eand twilight and Cadance is kidna on about the same terms in their magic study tho a bit different, but in the end Twilight asks Sunset questions directly. Which she doesn't reject but doesn't feel like answering too. So cadance steps in as not to make twilight hurt and tries to figure it out. But obht are stomped so Sunset in the end does step in and Twilight is excited over the reults. During this period sunset kinda relearns magic, as in she learns magic for hte fun of it, not for the sake of imprewssing someone else. She also sees how well Cadance handles twilight or children but then realizes that she does simialr things to her and celetisa and that she tries to be gentle and stuff. She part feels manipulated but also glad. Anyway, one day Sunset tells a struggling twilight, that all the speells she struggles with she should be having an easy time with because twilight already has a facination wit h checklists. Sunset says, "the repair spell was just taking one piece at a time, like you do with your checklists. In fact, you should view every spell like a checklist". This makes it click inside twilight's head and makes a huge improvments in how she approaches magic and she throws herself into a hug with Sunset. Tis cracks somwthing inside of sunset. As she holds this soft child who adores her, she feels shame for not sharing her understanding of magic earlier and seeing her as a threat instead of friend. She starts sobbing and crying swhile rocking a surprised twilight abck and forht in her emrbace. Cadance witness this. And tells Celestia. Perhaps there is scene with ehr sunset with a bit more understnading havent' decided. Then Sunset later asks Twilight for any idea of waht o give Cadance in present as she has meded her relationship with Celestia somehwa or fully, and she isn't a prisoner anymore nad she likes twi. Twilight knows just he thing... Later Cadance is invited out by sunset on a night out on the town, and Sunset greets her with the "sunshin sunshine ladybougs awake..." ruotiine as she has come to appriciate Cadance ways ans also its kinda embracing but since he commits to it she proves tht she care s or something. Cadance realizes here that the defining thing that Sunset wanted her life was 'love' she just wanted to be loved by celestia or by anyone so she did everything just to have that love as she saw her value from the base that he rvalue was magic caster. And as the princess of love she can't help bu ablige so she kisses Sunset. Then sunset is ported into the realm that Twilight was in season 3 were she turned into a alicorn and meets Celestia there. And here they have their final reconcialtion or perhaps they already have andthey acknowlege each other like parent and child or omething idk yet. and that's how hte sotry ends
I feel like cadance, sunset, and Twilight worrk fine enough, but I think I wanna work in a more sympahtetic angle for Celestia, same actions but more care for sunset througout the sotry basically, jsut that she hides tht behind having to appear strong all the time and also that sunseet has to serve a purpose and that she ahs so many sutdnet s die on her over her millina of life so she keps a sort of distance ig. But I also want her to be more personally involved in sunset. She is alike her. She was oprhan compared to the other students and had no family of her own. Celestia was her world and sunset might have stuck to her everywhere. So something like that. I just gotta think about is all i think
What are the implications that rarity has a cat and thereby likely as a parasite infested worm lady
>>404049
There are certain plants that kill cat-related parasites and prevent them from becoming a thing in you if you keep eating those now and again.
There are certain plants that kill cat-related parasites and prevent them from becoming a thing in you if you keep eating those now and again.
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>anthro poner
what the fuck is wrong with people? I understand your regular anthro furtism but this anthro-mlp uncanny valley shit always seemed fucking retarded to me. Poners are feral-only, everything else is just heresy. I want both horsie waifus AND human waifus. Rear raifu ones. Like, lots. Fuck you.
>anthro poner
what the fuck is wrong with people? I understand your regular anthro furtism but this anthro-mlp uncanny valley shit always seemed fucking retarded to me. Poners are feral-only, everything else is just heresy. I want both horsie waifus AND human waifus. Rear raifu ones. Like, lots. Fuck you.