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aab42 No.246080[Reply]

We often see media and zoomers fear mongering over the climate change now that they've seen a spoiled FAS child crying publicly on TV.
That makes them likely to accept the ridiculous proposition of countless regulation and taxes that would help fighting the climate change… except in my opinion it's not going to help at all and rather than trying to stop the alleged catastrophe we should adapt to the new conditions.

So. Now let's take a look at what would actually happen in case of the climate change. Basically Europe would be a little bit hotter with places like Australia being colder.

If anyone is going to go extinct it's certainly not going to be humanity because humans are species that are great at adapting to extreme conditions. Maybe some animal species nobody cares about would die but for me trying to save them is nothing but keeping a dying man alive against his will.

However, ice caps fully melting would change things a lot since it would alternate the percentage of salt in the oceans which means that they'd be able to just freeze. So paradoxically we'd have an ice age thanks to that.

Now what's so good about it?
The place I live in would be a coastal city, which means I'll be able to get my very own private yacht and sail around.
Also most thirdworlders would die. So overall a good thing imo.
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c4d0b No.246296

It just goes to show how most environmental activists are either emotionally driven drones that regurgitate their gospel, or shills for some other interest. Nuclear, even "those piece of shit 3rd Gen reactors," basically solve their environmental concerns by cleanly producing vast sums of electricity within a tiny footprint. If they were rational thinkers then they'd be championing nuclear energy instead of trying to kill it.

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6ae02 No.246365

Succinctly agreed. Solar, wind, tidal are beyond pathetic, that is unless the gag orders and secrecy laws are removed to allow the first a greater than 20% capture/transmission rate. Laughably of the nuclear reactors that have failed, suffered meltdowns, been mysteriously sabotaged, are 3rd gen under union control. Three Mile was one of the safer 3rd gens until it too suffered a mysterious incident. All 1st/2nd gens revised into 3rd gen though inherent problems were never solved. Hanford is a perfect example of flat out incompetence, union politics, shekels flowing into every pocket, and radioactive waste on the order of unknown millions of tons dumped into the local ecosystem.

Operation Popeye.

96275 No.247351

>Fill a cup of water with ice and then fill it to the very top - to the point that it bubbles up but doesn't spill - and then wait until the ice melts. Does the cup overflow?

I think the problem with that analogy is that it works differently when ice is sitting on top of a land mass.

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66db0 No.245721[Reply]

You niggas just keep this whole interest in the show thing secret?

I do and Im probably better off for it. Litteraly no one in my life knows besides any government agent Ive probably attracted.
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31d08 No.246019

based but unironically

31d08 No.246029

>Litteraly no one in my life knows besides any government agent Ive probably attracted.
Funny you should mention that. I was writing a story for the filly thread a couple months ago and afterwads opted to upload it to my pastebin in chapters. One of the chapters immediately got like 3 times more views than any of the others, and I couldn't figure out why til I opened it up and realized that it contained lots of instances of words like "assasinate" and "bomb". That's when I realized that pastebin scraper bots had alerted the feds about the keywords in the chapter, and that my filly greentext was probably read by multiple CIA niggers.

61e0e No.246034

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>unintentionally baiting glowniggers into reading Filly Fics
Well played anon, well played

fc4ed No.246065

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Im far more open about being a Fascist than being a brony.

I would, strangely enough, sooner wear a RaHoWa shirt down the street than ANYTHING horse related just sitting in my own room alone.

Ok leaf.

Thats fucking

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2a8e1 No.246271[Reply]

Hello maybe you can help me find a song I saw posted here long ago. It was the voice of Discord and a parody song with right wing lirycs. I know I saved it but I can't find it in my old hard drives.

Pd: I am from Argentina and I saw some argue flags here but maybe it's due to VPN users. But I would really like to talk with fellow Argentinian horsefuckers.

57fba No.246276

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is this it? or is it something else?

2a8e1 No.246281

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Tha K you very much anon. I legit cryed. So much time trying to find it.
Do you know if there is more like that or who made it? I love it.

57fba No.246286

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>Do you know if there is more like that or who made it? I love it.
i believe a anon that goes by the name Rusanon made it, and yes he made quite a few more, if i remember they were used in the last /pol/league.

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d86b5 No.246170[Reply]


Good update on Brexit. Money quote:
>…here’s the situation as it stands. If the vote happens and Johnson is deposed, they will have 14 days under the Fixed Term Parliaments Act to form a ‘caretaker government.’ If Corbyn ‘has the numbers’ and the agreement from the other parties then this will happen.

>It will take All of Labour (247 seats), the SNP (35), the LibDems (18) and at least another 11 MP’s to get this done. And then they have to also agree on what their proposal to the EU is.

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43dc0 No.246024[Reply]

cb46d No.246061

It is funny how much criticism Trump gets for bringing the boys home. But the really fun thing is that the Democrats now have to campaign on a platform for sending soldiers to a foreign country because reasons.

9249a No.246062

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371a2 No.240413[Reply]

What opinions do you anons have towards law enforcement officers? I've seen cops called ZOGbots here, but I've also seen anons express sympathy towards them. I'm sort of cynical towards them. They've repeatedly failed to defend people from bodily or property damage by criminals, from not preventing Stalinistic terrorists from comitting thuggery in Berkeley, Charlottesville, Portland, etc, to failing to prevent black riots from getting out of hand, to failing to intervene against mass shooters, like in Broward. They mostly only "protect and serve" a small oligarchic group of individuals and their interests, which makes sense because that's who pays them (although, if I want to be precise, it is really the tax cattle paying them.) It also seems pathetic how many boomercons LARP about being like the Founding Fathers and saying they'd fight the government if it tried to confiscate their firearms while worshipping the police and military. Of course, this isn't to endorse any sort of violent action against the police, many of whom have been misled and decieved like the normies who trust them.
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1adfc No.245543

>A lot more peaceful and safer, at least you are able to apply deadly force when Tyronne wants to rob you or kidnap you. And when not, neighborhoods will form self-defence groups

No. It would mean that justice and order are only available to the highest bidder. https://www.sfchronicle.com/bayarea/philmatier/amp/Businesses-hiring-real-SF-cops-on-OT-to-keep-14365181.php

b09d0 No.245545

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>Amber Guyger Gets Just 10 Years for MURDER as Man Sentenced to 99 Years for Kicking a Cop
>On Tuesday, the family of Botham Jean thought they were finally going to see some justice after the police officer who killed their beloved son was found guilty of murder. While the guilty verdict was certainly a welcomed rarity, on Wednesday, this killer’s blue privilege finally shined through. For murdering an innocent man in his own apartment, Amber Guyger was sentenced to just ten years in prison.
>Showing just how much blue privilege was given to Guyger, the judge actually gave her a hug before she was taken off to jail. Seriously. As Guyger was being taken back to jail, District Judge Tammy Kemp apparently gave her a Bible and then hugged her, saying, “you can have mine. I have three or four more at home.”
>How many other convicted murderers receive hugs and parting gifts from the judge who resides over their case? We are willing to bet the answer is zero.
>To highlight this insidious disparity inside America’s justice system consider the following story. In Denison, Texas, just a few miles north of where Guyger murdered Botham Jean, a man was sentenced to 99 years in prison. His crime? He swung his bare foot in the direction of a cop’s head while he was being held down during a forced blood draw.
>Last week, Donnie Mills, 59, was sentenced to 99 years in prison because he kicked in the direction of a cop while officers were forcibly drawing his blood during a DUI stop.
Sorry, I can't archive.

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c8e0b No.245558

>French Police Stage Massive 'Anger March' Over Working Conditions, Low Morale And Suicide Crisis
>About 48 weeks of yellow vest violence has finally sent the French police force to their breaking point. Deteriorating working conditions, low morale, and a suicide crisis have taken a significant toll on officers. Conditions are so disturbing that tens of thousands of people, including many police officers, staged a protest this week in the streets of Paris over their frustrations
>Police have said they're under-equipped and understaffed for the next wave of violence.
>under-equipped and understaffed
From the mouth of the horse: they're asking for more powerful toys and reinforcements to beat harder the French people.

37a82 No.246021

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A follow up.
Neighbor And Witness That Testified At Dallas Cop's Murder Trial Shot And Killed.
I wonder who might be behind this execution.

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2ad1b No.245947[Reply]

Lets have a good old fashioned redpill thread. Post all that you
I'll start with this:The Protocols of the learned Elders of Zion. It is an essential book for all users.

87aaf No.245953

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Always name the Jew.

2ca4f No.246013

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2ca4f No.246014

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2ca4f No.246015

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99e7a No.245469[Reply]

"The Big Mac Question" countdown

Episode synopsis
When Big Mac and Sugar Belle decide to propose to each other, everything their friends do to help ends up making a mess of the whole thing

Live streams
https://cytu.be/r/mlpol_party_room (recommended)
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283c1 No.245791

7dc87 No.245863

Crazy that they both decided to propose to somepony at the same time. I wonder who their special someponies are.

bcb06 No.245870

9c81e No.245970

I have a policy to look away from the screen when the episode writer credit shows up, to avoid bias of past episodes by that writer coloring my expectations for the majority remainder of the episode that I am watching (everything but the cold open and perhaps one other line of dialogue before the writer credit shows up)

I checked back after this episode and it is no surprise that this was a Haber & Vogel production, altho Dubuc also would've made sense.

Filth. Absolute filth. Discord being a stupid gaylord who oopsies various mischief but is generally now a goody two-shoes who is genuinely trying and wanting to help these ponies in their mushy love for each other is pathetic.

Applejack didn't even get one speaking line in the episode of her own brother's wedding.

Their awful writing has everything to do with the fact that these two men are very liberal.

Actually, since I am posting here, I'm allowed to say that Vogel's Jewishness is the primary source of him being complete garbage when the touches these characters.

Nicole Dubuc is also a faggot. Liberals are very stupid and they tend to ruin characters. I've looked back on what episodes these three wrote and we managed to get lucky with some of the two-parters being barely tolerable if you use headcanons to excuse away some of the stupid bullshit.

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f8b27 No.244960[Reply]

Being in my mid 30’s I am finding it hard to find friends after moving from losing my job in the “recession” I think we could use a thread about friendship, since it’s magic.
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8c57b No.245070

>Why not just put Americans in prison when they're born?
have you not been paying attention? we are in a metaphorical prison already.

7810d No.245903

the best advice i can give you is just don't be weird, if you be weird or reveal you're power level you are seen as a outcast or a loser and most likely people will try to get away from you as quickly as possible or will not like talking to you.
Always ask people what they do because they'll end up talking about themselves and anyone who isn't a neck beard redditor enjoys talking about how much they masturbate to themselves in the mirror, you should also ask them about their hobby's even if it is boring as hell it'll seem to them that you care about them and their interests of how much they love porn or whatever

personally i hate having friends but i enjoy talking to new people because i don't like the repetitiveness of asking the same questions over and over and the expectation that i will enjoy talking to them every day and not get bored of it, it's really annoying when it gets to a certain point.
Having friends can be a huge distraction from the world, it's the reason why normals know little to nothing about the world they live in because of how fixated they are with their social lives.

as for finding friends >>245019 >>245056 these anons tell you how to

98713 No.245937

I just played some Mittsies tracks through a small speaker at one of the smaller conventions. The people who didn't look away blushing and instead sat down and listened were the right type of people for me to chat to

06818 No.245946

Fucking patrician taste in pony music, man.

86781 No.245990

Honestly I think many of the lessons are still worth considering.

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98ac2 No.244657[Reply]

I watched this show recently when it was free and despite being produced by youtube, it's rather based. Touches on the importance of father figures, there's a lot of anti-leftist humor, and the entire show essentially follows the story of a bunch of weak young adults (mostly young men) working hard to change their lives for the better.
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ba8e8 No.244725

Season 1 was free on youtube until september 11th, but it isn't anymore. The only site offering it I could find shut down about a month ago too. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=_rB36UGoP4Y
The first episode can be viewed for free, and I'm sure there are downloads on most large torrent sites, but as far as streaming goes that's all I could find.

1ad83 No.244864

Saw a bunch of clips and the first episode a while back. It's not a bad series at all, although…
You slowly see Johnny regret how far he went with the Cobra Kai stuff

09bb9 No.245600

The name got me to cringe and honestly ep 1 was not all that great. Maybe it will get better as it progresses?

dead5 No.245659

Yeah, never base your assumptions off of the first episode. Most of them are a bit shit.

09bb9 No.245905

So I watched the whole thing and I've got mixed feelings about it.
The last episode (so far) was pretty shit and seemed hamfisted.

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37543 No.233189[Reply][Last 50 Posts]

How can we get more users on /mlpol/? I occasionally mention this place on 4chan and 8chan, but that doesn't seem to bring a lot of people here. So how can we get more people? IRL fliers? Advertise on forums from https://www.whoiswhite.com/? What's your idea, Anon?
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b83e9 No.245835

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>It was about understanding what the rules of posting are.
It was said before by the mods, rules are flexible and adapt to each situation, in this case, IMHO, play humble and shut up for a while, give a chance to this situation settle down (meaning: let it go).
Don't keep stirring the pot.

b83e9 No.245837

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If you wish, you can think whatever you want.
But, I personally want to keep reading your posts, and friendship to flow as before.
So, let us consider this issue gone, and let's go back to business, in a humble way of course.

60f7a No.245838

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:) *hugs*

b83e9 No.245839

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60f7a No.245840

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Stop groping my chest fluff!

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bcc8b No.243108[Reply]

You know what this is. If you wanna join, write a shortstory, any length will do and have it done before the end of sunday.

So grab a soda and start typing. Open pandora's box and unleash the autism within. God help us all…
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2b15c No.245786

I've been working on a pinkie pie horror story it's taking some time. [S]From the anonfilly thread. The story structure should be sound. The execution so it didn't suck is the tough part. Other than that trying to do more on my first greentext story…

ee189 No.245787

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Nice, I have givn up on that one. Don't tell the fillies in the thread or they will call me a faggot.
>The execution so it didn't suck is the tough part.
Is it a bit finicky idea to make right?
Do you feel as you have Ponk's character down?

I'm working on a treasure hunting story/pirate story. I have been writting like pages on each characters and stuff. It suppose to be a shortstory, about six thousend words, filled to the brim with details like worldbuilding, indirect chractarization, and nice archs for each character. It is pretty ambitous project for me. But lately, I have been wanting to do something above and beyond.
It is a bit hard to makes sense of it all and I ahve spent a lot of hours on it. The main characters are: Red Ex, a earth pony; Preal Splash, a pegasus; and Adolf Hitler.
I had a picture that was perfect but I couldnät find it.

ee189 No.245788

Okay, more like two pages for each character but whatever.

2b15c No.245792

Nice! I'm really looking foward to reading that.

>Do you feel as you have Ponk's character down?

Not as well as I really like. I know how it should be, but syncing the thoughts, and actions so it feels right is taking more time.

Any kind of vague idea, or direction you want I can flesh it out into a structure. Just writing for the sake of writing my writen works don't normally take off.

Here's an interesting idea you might want.
Twilight is in a party with her friends. Mystery detective story. A secret santa kind of situation. The problem is that a gift is missing.
Twilight triedly enters from the princessly duties.
Their goal is to find it without figuring out who the gift was from.
The readers would know what gift Twilight got.
Applejack confirms that each friend except Twilight, and Rarity wrapped a present. (Spike wrapped them)
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ee189 No.245811

Sorry, I don't really get what you are saying here.
>Any kind of vague idea, or direction you want I can flesh it out into a structure. Just writing for the sake of writing my writen works don't normally take off.
>Here's an interesting idea you might want.

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0091c No.244578[Reply]

I am Sad please post cute hores.
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3e04a No.244866

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3e04a No.245703

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4153b No.245661[Reply]

Here, have a great job opportunity!
Note: colored people only!
-Jim Miller

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4a247 No.245679

Is white not a color?

cba93 No.245683

Indeed. Black is not a color!

b82bc No.245688

b3385 No.245690

Are CNN outraged?

a2967 No.245692

>opportunity to possibly work on some cool stuff
God I hate how they talk. It's so passive and noncommittal in every aspect. Everything they say is full of "maybe kinda sorta perhaps."

It's also still dumb how they feel like they get brownie points for calling someone a "person of color" whereas the synonymous phrase "colored person" is something that they feel should be an arrestable offense.

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76022 No.241972[Reply]

For my fellow horse-words writers (and Pol writers), I give you: The third installment of this competition.

This time I want short stories from you fagets. They should be more than a 1000 words and less than 5000 words. Otherwise, you will be in Glimmer's rapedungeon.

Oh, by the way, Glimglam will be searching for your stories titles in the book of life as he reads aloud all of their sins. Then he will judge them, your babies, and score them by assigning a numerical value between 1-10 to each one of them. The story with the highest value wins.

Also, there is a theme to this competition. Yes, I couldn't leave well enough alone. Here's the tag along rule: The Grand Galloping Gala is happening in Canterlot. You must connect this to your story in someway. Now, this can be a very tenous connection. Here's and example: Big Mac is loading apples onto a wagon leaving for the gala but Big Mac and the story about him does not happen in Canterlot. It happens in Ponyville with him as the main character. See, you can basically write anything you want from this.

The theme is majorly for inspirational purposes.

Happy writting.
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3a6c2 No.245332

Perhaps not we will see where I make it if I do.

3f837 No.245359

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I would like to get another review thread going, I just need to find something that I'd like to skewer, preferably something abysmally bad. But I'll try to get it going either way. Mostly it's just a matter of mustering the autism to do it, as it's rather time consuming. Between reading/analyzing the text and composing a response complete with snarky wit and gay jokes, most of those Nigel posts were taking me about an hour apiece on average, sometimes longer if I was working with a particularly dense passage.

3a6c2 No.245362

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>I just need to find something that I'd like to skewer, preferably something abysmally bad.
I have many suggestion ofr just those kinds of fics. You just have to ask.
Like, "Pasted Sins." It is one of the classics but you know Nyx is a Mary sue.
I guess it is kinda sweet at times though. Never finished it it either.
> Mostly it's just a matter of mustering the autism to do it, as it's rather time consuming.
I can understand that. Don't feel bad if you don't.
I enjoy your reviews anyway and I think I have read all of your posts on Nigel's two old threads. But to be fair, I think I have read all posts on that thread anyway.

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>Rather than focusing on what a Tabaxi is, I focus on what it is doing, and casually mention some of the creature's physical characteristics while I'm at it

It is interesting because that is the way I used to write. It is not seen in all my previous writing but it is something I have implemented in my writing before. Like you want to establish both that your character has white hair, take care of her appearance and what the character is currently doing, you write: ”She combed her white hair.” But I realize now that I moved away from that way of writting, almost subconciously, because I read someone on the internet critiscising that way of writting. They joked about the fact that the possessive form of the noun combined with the adjective gave a more identifying meaning. Like, ”Her white hair was combed, not her black hair cause it was being discriminated against.”
But yeah, when I think about it people evidently know what you are saying in context so I shouldn't care about such silliness.

>The room was walked through
"He walked through the room" reads much less awkwardly.

Yes, I know. The reason I write like that is to avoid writing sentences like these, ”A went to the job. A eat on the job. A talked to B. A was given a ride home by B.”
I'm trying to do the whole switch between who/what is the object and who/what is the subject by switching from passive to active voice and vice versa. I'm trying to have my paragraphs flow from one sentence to another.
So instead of the previous example I write, ”A went to the job. On the job food was eaten by A. A talked to B. B gave A a ride home.”
Because that paragraph flows more than the first one but I guess that is for more academical writing and not for creative writing.
Sometimes I get a flow between sentences that do not have this structure they go something like this.
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>Run-on sentences
While the other sentences you pointed out are-ish, I don't think this one is:
>The pony on the roof, who was a dark brown earth-pony stallion with a rotten apple for a cutie mark, climbed off the edge of it and the weight of his body strained the rope.

From what I understand, this is not a run-on sentence. Its a compound-complex sentence with two independent clauses and one subordinate clause. I don't think I messed up the conjunctions either.

>Who and which does not break immersion

>Try to avoid saying things like "who was" or "which is" in the text of a story. You want to tell the story without sounding like you're telling a story, if that makes sense
>Also, the way you just clumsily drop in an explanation for an unfamiliar word makes it feel like you're breaking your narrative, sort of like if an actor in a movie suddenly turned to the camera and explained some plot detail to the audience. It kills the suspension of disbelief for just a second. The main thing that does this is the word ”which”.

I don't think this makes sense. ”Who” and ”which” are just conjunctions you begin adjective clauses with. I don't think they break immersion for the reader more than ”but”, ”or”, and ”and” do.
I don't use participles all the time because I want sentence variety. To you, I guess I am projecting now but, they stand out because you are looking for them, which you do because you think they are bad.
I think what breaks immersion is when the reader is given information they could not have gain from simply being on the scene. Like:
>The car, which was red, drove one the road. Or the red car drove on the road.
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