FxF Ch. 7 (Im substance riter so I realice this is da way /and/ not focus on making text smooth[Priorities]) chapter six name should be "Ghosts (and rebels?)" Orange anon's backstory one how she becomes friends with Rave (we write it here or something) tells ((kinda) more like nudges) her to reconcilate with Flurry both cuz: mission and cuz she imagines thats what frens do hinting at her being a really good pone mission being afterthought { Ag:"Maybe a compromise. Some touches of edm in ur music?" Flurry:Hmmm Ao:"Do you need to have a band together? CAn't you be friends without being ina band togehter. Isn't i more imporant that ur remaind friends? I can tell u still care for flurry" RAve:"mmm" } Buys orange clothes despite her insisting that she doesn't have money and she doesn't need them Cuz they now frens and Anon liked edm song she(RAve) put on her(orange) her headphones. Infected mushroom normie tier but good for newbie anon sensibilites to get her hooked ?! Also, orange claims she has a rash she doesn't want to show on her neck or something so they buy a scarf and Rave doesn't see the bombnecklace Party at mansion (maybe have buckball captain insident before this party for the setup of "u don't stand up for urself?! or barve aenough only talk hmmmm but is she really?") Princess game {R:"r u fag?" Ag:"yeah prob. I like tall after..." R:"r u also O?" O think about the darkness of her cell:"Idon't think I have a sexuality" } Crash has her cutiemark: its a trombone but she hides it cuz it aint cool {Flurry and Rave come to agree and laugh togther on the fact that the two anons are something >This leads to Rave saying something like, "This is the Flurry I like the not bitter Flurry or something." Wrong thing to say "Why do u think Im bitter Rave?" and they get into a fight and the party fizzles out there. < This is to show that they do like each other and care about each other but end up steppping on eacho thers toes (hooves) right now.> The conflict between them should not be resolved in this chapter. Let's prolong it for a while. } Rave finds out that Orange sleeps in the colder districts of the city in some allyway or in some toilet or wahtever---- she is homeless is point RAve can't have her stay with her cuz her parents woudl send her back to her parents which Anon claims to??? Some reason she stays at the place Flurry showed the green anon (the clubhouse). Their clubhouse and makes it orange's new home Here they could end up talking about Rave's relationship with Flurry and what it means to RAve, basically Rave shows us how much she cares about Flurry and worries how things might turn out between them Maybe have orange say what she said above about their frenship being the priority here Also could have make a note taht Rave sits down on the mattress taht Flurry didn't sit on cuz they basically have been here so many times that they now have their spots ingrained in their heads. Maybe if orange sits down on the wrong spot and RAve basically comments on it but says its okay she just usually sits there. or something. "No, its okay. It's just that I usually lay/sit there but I can >take her spot now anyway (maybe)< sit here instead. 'She sat down on the mattress unbeknownst to them the mattress that flurry had sat down on last time she and anon had been there and visit. maybe maybe not' The thing is that the writing doesn't tell wich seat flurry took in ch 6 Buckball team leader filly Nonny hoofwrestle won exposed??? { >bumps into her> "watch where u r going!" "Buckball bro?" Sportssponies:>hahaha buckballcaptain:>"no she's makingfun of us -//- "Isaid that but to anyone but her obviously" } Flurry asking Anon about her beauty showing rear pink nd black Gets rjected by Sunburst "Ypu're kist a stupid nerd! (wizard?)" runs away crying comes back to Anon hugs and A:"As far as small mares goes, urabsolute jailbait. I'd go to prision for u" "hahah" *hugs tight* Cloud Wrangler gets Lyra and some of her henchponies inside the underground Lyra and cloud has the same nightmare master they from the same house apprentice and night assassin ponies underground have the reverse naming conventions and adapt kinder names when surface Lyra explains the plan for Cloud Wrangler and the reader Flurry's connection to the crystal heart after tath crysalin thhing season 6 or wahtever. she's it current wielder There used to be a nightmare nest underneath The crystal empire built by the only stallion that went through the nightmarification process The ritaul he used was a generalized version that could turn not only unicorn mares into nightmares but other thigns as well that's how luna (an alicorn) turned into nightmare moon a nightmare queen Bonbon (aka sweetie drops so tht the reader knows the name connection if it has been made clear yet) just finished deskwork then gets phone call "Hi, Mom. We need to talk." Extra stuff sisters (knight protector guardian big sis) same mane dare inseprable in youth u tell sunburst ur feelings dont sing bring An ide of having Rave step in to protect Flurry against buckball team leader filly so that flurry tells anon about how she used to imagine as kinght and protect her by rAve maybe rave says this to Orange?! During the hoofwrstle with the buckball captain Anon really has to wroked for it. THe captain is one eyar older (same class as Flurry) and she is a really well trained, in muscle taht is so if they fought Anon note that she'd win easily but in a constanst of pure strength like hoofwrestle she could lose or at least techinque she isn't as familar with. Orange filyl wears Rave's headphones as she watched the other anon hoofwrestle as she starts turning the ide on it the verse of the pretender starts playing ^^ probably not^^ Butas Anon's hoof is almost forced down to the table, she has a flashback to a training moment with Bonbon where Bon bon ruthlessly beats her in something (probably 1v1 pure fighting) over a hundred times over some days or something. Anon gets frustrated and gives up saying, "that obviously she can't beat Bonbon since bon bon is better in every single aspect" Bonbon reply by sayin that the point of the xcerise is not to win but to do what she just did, accept that she can't win but still keep at it. OR rather to not get emotional about tht fact that she can't win. To not let it bother her. "Your mind should be focused on the task at hand not wheather u can win or not? Not over confidence, nor fear of failure and waht that might lead to. Just focus. That's why I beat you ha hundred times because now whenever you are about to lose and feel humiated you will remember this moment and think, 'Ah, it can't be worse than that time'." or something. "you dont need to fear something if it already happened" RAve: "Yes ur stronger than me buckball captain if we hoofwrestle ud win but who said Id wrestle with my hooves?" She asks then her horn lit up and the suddenly everyone feels a sense of pressure on them the galsses of drink the contsntat ripple on their surfaces slightly. The captain backs down. Flurry says tht she's strong too she's an alicorn afterall but RAve intercepts and says that while true the captain is (still) probably to tough for her magic to subdue. "What do u know about htat RAve?" Flurry spats at her. "I could probably even take u down." galres at rave while Rave just rolls her eyes. Though buckball captain is not so into haressing her highness regardless so she says nothing. Anon goes from think that she will take down this civilan a notch sine she beating her in a hoofwrestle isn't that much of a big deal snce she already have acover story for why she is so atheltic btw she should keep up body by training on he own too during her stay so she should start doing that in this chapter. So she is pondering questions if she should let her win or bweat her or how hard she should beat her htne sher realizes while hoof wrestling that she's stronger than her and then she feels fear and shame over being a smile agent being beaten by a civilan that when the flashback occurs. She then gets a determine stare right into her opponents eyes. Buckball captain is originally smirking but her face morphs from surprize anger shock and fear and such as anon's determined one doesn't change and then she wins. Orange Anon and Green meets at party or whenever to go through. Perhaps I can have the scene where they are both called into the principal's office. They meet alone to talk perhaps or perhaps later, mmm Could been a great cliffhanger if I didn't already have one especially involving green anon, mmm Maybe green Anon and orange reflecct on the fac taht they haven't talked yet anf stuff. Have RAve perspective were she just explain how she came to be frens with orange before a scene with them like orange going off home after a talk they have at like a jungle gym maybe or something maybe not or maybe it another of those places the two of them enjoyed. I'd like them to spend time at the location gg made but it should be as a way for Rave to give Orange a place to stay tho I think. Do u give up?" "no, I'm not gonna lose a a hundred times" "I got u in this grapple. U know its over. Give up" *pats ground three times* *starts crying* Bonbon tries to comfort a filly angry at her and herself. "ssshhh, you did your best. I never expected you to beat me. " maybe have a mid challange breakdown? above paragraph is for their last fight. The buckball captain filly is in the same class as Rave and just an inch shorter than her but still tall or maybe same height but bulkier and stronger body wise. She is one year older the rest of the fillies. I will used the old name and description for vigin flame her tan with a like a bleak red mane in three seperate ponytails on her back. or something was it with a trained bode. Anon need full focus to beat her and she might even been strogner than anon. Afterwards anon's limb ache. in fact, I like the idea that Anon manged to focus her muscle to do more than her opponent could despite her probably being stronger, due to her focus or something. Like afterwards anon gets like painful cramp and her hoof hitches and folds in on itself while the other mare is just exhausted but not in the same amount of pain. Anon lays onher stide ontop of he hoof kinda holding it.while grimacing in agony. They use magnesium on their hooves or some other crystal thingie powder to make their hooves not slide vigin has it on her cuz she work out ^^ What will the crowd do as they witness this? Will they cheer on? who will do what? and when? nightlight not velvet. Twilight velevet died and so Flurry began to think about the fact taht she was immortal and everyone around her would die and she live or something and so she rebelled against being a princess or something maybe Regardless, maybe have a that there is going to be a concert<<<I tink she shud be quiet one and often be lost in own world >cuz she used be in dark room all alone now Crystal Emprie, lots to take in >She's morally conflicted about her job: >The ponies grow on her, especially rave which she spents most time with, but she doesn't want to expold >Othwersie, she does ponder if shes was a criminal and therefore should do the right thing a follow the director(Lyra) but she has second doubts >tho she doesn't know her past and she's curious on who and what this other Anon is hereslf >So she goes with the plan to figure out who she is Rave char >Tells hersfl that she just want to be friendly and show this new filly around >Is actually being friendly towards her because she's fears she might look like a loser without friens when dealing with Flurry now since they are more her frens due to age and Rave bein gone a a month(a lot too)